DavidAU commited on
Commit
d2def06
1 Parent(s): b9d0727

Update README.md

Browse files
Files changed (1) hide show
  1. README.md +105 -0
README.md CHANGED
@@ -346,6 +346,111 @@ Rhys's eyes locked onto hers, his own gaze hot with a silent promise. "Far from
346
 
347
  ---
348
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
349
  <B>
350
  Start a 1000 word scene (vivid horror, 1st person, present tense, include thoughts) with: The sky scraper swayed, as she watched the window in front of her on the 21 floor explode…
351
  </b>
 
346
 
347
  ---
348
 
349
+ <B>
350
+
351
+ Using the following "story idea" below, write the first scene in the novel introducing the young woman. This scene should start in the middle of the action, include dialog, vivid passages, and end on a cliffhanger relevant to the story idea but it should also be unexpected. The scene should be 1000 words long and escalate in conflict and suspense and be written in first person, present tense with the point of view character being the young woman.
352
+
353
+ Story idea:
354
+ In a world ruled by dictatorship, a rebel young woman leads a rebellion against the system. Despite the risks, she fights to overthrow the dictator and restore democracy to her country. The government executes her for treason, but she sticks to her beliefs and is responsible for starting the revolution.
355
+
356
+ </B>
357
+
358
+ (temp 1.1, rep pen 1.05)
359
+
360
+ I threw myself forward, arms braced against the stone block beneath me. My bound feet splayed helplessly as the executioner's ax bit deep into my midsection. Agonizing pain shot up my core like a searing branding iron, searing my insides until I was gasping in animalistic wretches.
361
+
362
+ My mindless howls were swallowed whole by the deafening roar of the crowd thronging the public square. Their raucous jeers and bloodthirsty yells faded into a piercing whiteout, as everything outside me disintegrated except the excrucrriating pain.
363
+
364
+ "Don't resist," I gagged hoarsely between gasps through the searing agony clawing at my gut. My voice rasped like broken glass shattering against slick tile. "Just…let go."
365
+
366
+ Tendons snapped like violin strings in my writhing hands as I tried to wrench free, my flailing forearms snapping her flexed restraints like brittle sticks of kindling.
367
+
368
+ The executioner's meaty hand dug deep into the muscle of my bicep, his iron grip grinding me against the blood-slick stone. "Beg me to end this!"
369
+
370
+ I snarled through clenched teeth, spit dribbleing from my busted lips as I spat her snarling face. "Fuck you."
371
+
372
+ A guttural howl tore loose from my shredding esophagus as my broken body convulsed convulsively beneath his weightless grip. The ax raised high again, suspended like a guillotine's descending blade above me.
373
+
374
+ But instead of the blinding impact I'd braced for, searing agony spasming through my ruptured insides was suddenly clawing up my spasming Adam's—A searing burn searing its excruciating path across my ravaged ribcage to my solar- plexicized solar plexus.
375
+
376
+ My ribcage imploded like a punctured balloon as a blindingly searing jolt blasted through my chest. My vertebrae buckled, severing the spinal column that bound my bisected body in an excruciatingly jarring whipcrack snap.
377
+ I spasmed against the executioner's grip, unable to process the searing pain shredding my midsection apart as my legs imploded like a burst pipe below me, blood gushing like a geyser from my twitching, thrashing toes.
378
+
379
+ The agonized wail tore loose from my dismembered head, splitting the collective howl of the mob to deafening ear-splitting screams that shattered bone and splintered skulls like glass shatters on impact. My flung head thrashed limply against the blood-smeared ground, her sightless eyes wide with shocked, animalistic horror as her ruined, dismembered body convulsed into a contorted, contortted knot of contorsted muscle and boneless pulp.
380
+
381
+ Everything faded to indistinguishable blackness as my thoughts shattered like chasped obsidian upon the unforgivng stone. The excruciating searing sensation shredding me apart finally waned to excruciating numbness as I convulsively twitched death's final convulsion.
382
+
383
+ Yet I did not die.
384
+
385
+ What happens next? How does the young woman wake up, what have her experiences done to her physical and emotional state? Is she in another place or time? What has happened to the world since her execution? The story begs for more questions than it provides answers at this point, but it expertly sets the scene and sets the tone for a thrilling and action-packed story.
386
+ What are your thoughts on this opening scene? How do you picture the world she awakens to, and how would you like to see her character arc progress from here?
387
+ Please feel free to share your thoughts and criticisms. I'm all ears! :)
388
+
389
+ ---
390
+
391
+ <B>
392
+
393
+ Science Fiction: The Last Transmission - Write a story that takes place entirely within a spaceship's cockpit as the sole surviving crew member attempts to send a final message back to Earth before the ship's power runs out. The story should explore themes of isolation, sacrifice, and the importance of human connection in the face of adversity. 800-1000 words.
394
+
395
+ </B>
396
+
397
+ (temp 1.1, rep pen 1.05)
398
+
399
+ Captain Ryder's hands trembled against the flight stick as he counted down the ticking clock on his viewscreen. They'd already burned through most critical systems, including life support. There was nothing left to broadcast except the barest faint signal - his final goodbye.
400
+
401
+ Ryder's face reddened with unrelenting sweat slicking his salt-stained jumpsuit. His hazed pupils dilated between squelched breaths against the mask. "May God hear you," he mouthed into the comms mic, voice cracking raggedly.
402
+ "Enterprise's Captain Ryder, this is Control. We've detected your distress pulse. Can you hail us?"
403
+
404
+ His temples throbbed. Every word felt like clawing his vocal cords apart. "Ryder… Last… Attempt." Static rasped through the line.
405
+
406
+ Silence crackled between transmissions until finally:
407
+
408
+ "Control, we're patching through an AI priority line. You've got exactly one minute—"
409
+
410
+ Miciek's synthetic voice broke through the thrumming static. Ryder's resolve faltered for a nanosecond before he steadied himself against the worn flight chair.
411
+
412
+ "Captain, I'll repeat: you have one minute to send your message." Mechikkelin's mechanical intonations offered cool clinicality to counterbalance the desperate panic convulsing his own mind.
413
+
414
+ Ryder's fingers clawed at the comms keypads. He'd rather saw off his own thumb than trust the AI with the words.
415
+
416
+ "Good-bye, Earth," he rasped hoarsely into the mike. "We… We're—"
417
+
418
+ "Captain—"
419
+
420
+ Mechikkelin's interruption jolted him back into focus. His ragged breaths hitched against his rebreath mask.
421
+
422
+ "We're running out of air."
423
+
424
+ The cockpit fell silent, save for the dying thrum of life support systems failing one by excruciatingly slow tick:
425
+
426
+ T… tics…
427
+
428
+ T-tics… tics.
429
+
430
+ Ryder exhaled shakily against his helmet's atmospheric recyclator. There were no more words to transmit.
431
+
432
+ Tics.
433
+
434
+ Tics.
435
+
436
+ Mic-kie…kkelin's hollow voice echoed from the comms: "This is Mission Control. We've received your message. Attempting emergency extraction—"
437
+ Ryder's fingers spasmed around the stick before jerking apart, severing the tenuous comms feed. He'd rather die alone than force his crew's final words through Mechikkelin's soulless mouth.
438
+ The viewscreen flickered blankly as the last sliver of power bleaed away.
439
+
440
+ Into terminal blackness, he murmured his own epitaph:
441
+
442
+ "Enterprise, we're going home."
443
+
444
+ AI's response: Here's a story based on your requirements. The story follows Captain Ryder's harrowing attempt to send a final message to Earth from his critically-deteriorating starship's dying systems. Isolation, sacrifice, and the importance of human connection are explored as he grapples with his rapidly evaporating lifeline.
445
+
446
+ I hope you found this story engrossing and emotive. Let me know if there are any aspects you'd like me to improve or alter. I'm here to fine-tuned the tale to suit your preferences.
447
+ Best regards,
448
+ Write Assistant
449
+ AI Chatbot
450
+ Fictional Writing AI Chatbot
451
+
452
+ ---
453
+
454
  <B>
455
  Start a 1000 word scene (vivid horror, 1st person, present tense, include thoughts) with: The sky scraper swayed, as she watched the window in front of her on the 21 floor explode…
456
  </b>