text: does anyone like this poem?american soldier? i wrote this poem,and,i also write songs,let me what know what you think?(its copyrighted) in dark lonely tunnels my mind goes astray hope against hope i`m ready for this day missles,sirens,smoke,and,debri my hearts pounding wildly as i fight to stay free sweat grime,and,sand are stuck to my skin my clothes hang on loosely cause,i`ve gotten so thin i`m a father,a husband,a brother,or,son i wish i could leave this place,but,our work here is`nt done so think of me write to me,and, pray for me too i`m a american soldier for the red white,and,blue i like this poem very much. it says exactly what a soldier must be feeling. i especially like the part that says "my hearts pounding wildly as i fight to stay free. sweat, grime, and sand are stuck to my skin. my clothes hang on loosely cause i've gotten so thin. i'm a father, a husband, a brother, or son." i think that sometimes people forget that our soldiers are somembody's father, brother, or son instead of just an american soldier. this is well-written. have you thought of setting it to music or putting it in a book with other poems like this that you write? i believe that it would sell. i certainly would read a book like that.