text: any opinions?? please answer!!!? okay another song i wrote...i think its okay but this is the first song i ever wrote without rhyming it in the verses, but everyone here tells me to stop rhyming for once so i tried it...is it good?? ------------  [verse 1] it's not the way you look at me it's the way you present yourself i've never seen this side of you please stop your faking now ---------------  [verse 2] dream of a better day coming around the corner just maybe, you'd need this to help you from your fall ------------------  [chorus] i love you but you don't love me back i hate you hate's not something you lack -----------------  and here i am again... ------------------ [ verse 3] i'm drunk off your kiss now this needs to stop but will you hold my hand? once more before i leave? -------------- [verse 4] i didn't mean to start this but i died over your kiss you stole something i need back won't you give my heart back? [chorus again] seems better than most of the crap that i hear