text: can someone word a thesis well for me about this...? it needs to be an although because thesis statement and my current crappy thesis is this: although many people associate puritanism with immorality, because their ideas are still prevalent in society, that is why the government is controlled by the puritan way. i think its "although many people associate puritanism with immorality, the government is controlled by the puritan way because puritanism ideas are still prevalent in society."