text: is this good? i got chosen for a chance to put this writing of mine is a contest to win 1,000- do you like it..do you think it is kinda good at least lol?    "the wind gives you a chill up your back and makes your cheeks as red as a rose.   it’s not windy enough to frizz up your hair but enough to blow the leaves from the ground into the air.   its spring but there’s no sunny weather. for the gray clouds cover the sky each day and night.  the pink petals fall from the trees and get swept away by the wind.   the grass is as green as his eyes. step by step he walks, only to hear the sound of his echoing foot steps.   the benches are empty and the walls surrounding the park are as cold as is hands.   though it’s colder than winter it’s self, and as dark as day can get ……he walks. " its really good :) enter the contest! the benches are empty and the walls surrounding the park are as cold as is hands.  one mistake, it's "his hands"