text: will u see and modify my fiction which is not long? i  am 18 years old living in kang-dong. i have grown up between my mother, who is an accounting clerk of a small firm, and my father who is a child counselor. i don't have any elder brother or little sister. i am a only son. therefore, i think i am very shy. my family was not poor, i did not feel a sort of feeling of lack nor i don't live well. my mother had taken care of my today's clothes or packing bags until i graduated a middle school.  i could not wear myself unless she allowed. so, only after with her permissions, i was comforted. i don’t know whether that makes it or not, but i have not ever come a department store alone. she bought to me for my clothes. i was ashamed of myself buying alone. and i was afraid of going here and there alone by bus. seeing my figures, i sometimes seem hear that people’s whispered tales. but as i become an adult, and i made up my mind to have an adventure. so i took a bus going to a department store.   thanks :d i am 18 years old living in kang-dong. (sounds ok) i have grown up between my mother, who is an accounting clerk of a small firm, and my father who is a child counselor. (better to only say: my mother is an accounting clerk of a small firm, and my father is a child counselor.) i don't have any elder brother or little sister. i am a only son. (simplify: i have no siblings)  therefore, i think i am very shy. (i think that is why i am very shy) my family was not poor, i did not feel a sort of feeling of lack nor i don't live well. (my family was not poor, so i did not have a feeling of lack or my life was not well.) my mother had taken care of my today's clothes or packing bags until i graduated a middle school. (my mother always took care of my daily clothing, moreover she packed my bags until i graduated from secondary school) i could not wear myself unless she allowed. so, only after with her permissions, i was comforted. (without her permission, i could not choose even what to wear.) i don’t know whether that makes it or not, but i have not ever come a department store alone. (probably for the same reason, i have never been to a department store by myself.)  she bought to me for my clothes. (she would shop for my clothes) i was ashamed of myself buying alone. (i was ashamed of shopping alone) and i was afraid of going here and there alone by bus. (and afraid of taking a bus ride by myself) seeing my figures, i sometimes seem hear that people’s whispered tales. (i did not understand this sentence but whispered tales mean "urban legends" in english) but as i become an adult, and i made up my mind to have an adventure. (but once i became an adult, i made up my mind to have an adventure) so i took a bus going to a department store. (so i took a bus ride to the department store)