text: i reallly need help editing this paragraph.  especially punct., grammar, etc. pleaaase!!!?!? also, my mother is one of the most generous and selfless people i know.  putting other’s needs in front of her own has always been one of her greatest qualities.  my mom has shared so many things with me; she has offered to me not only material items but also time, attention, wisdom, and energy.  she has always been willing to give me whatever i needed.  i deeply admire and appreciate her magnanimity, and i hope to also bestow such generosity onto others.  