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[The morning of the graduation, two of the three cars we had made it to the graduation with time to spare. Once again there was a minor moment of hecticness with the last group making it into the ceremony just minutes before the doors were closed. With everyone dressed in their best and comfiest attire we sit sat and wait waited. We hear heard the song Pomp and Circumstance, the typical graduation song. They walk out as we cheer and shout our cheeky comments “I love you Ivy!” “That’s my doctor!” and a lot more.]