nee sum critics critique continuation story put prologue read prologue httpswwwredditcomrteenagerscommentsilxbea_short_fiction_prologue_do_critique_pleaseutm_mediumandroid_appamputm_sourceshare btw added sum things da prologue chapter  called sleepers coldness swept body like raindrops sky coldness wasnt one woke earth wake like preset timer questions filled head struggled bit get back feet biggest one ended here middle jungle tried get bearing surrounding eyes laid sword struck ground ghillie suit top that felt strong connection sword didnt think much maybe fill head questions now
nee sum critics critique continuation story put prologue read prologue httpswwwredditcomrteenagerscommentsilxbea_short_fiction_prologue_do_critique_pleaseutm_mediumandroid_appamputm_sourceshare btw added sum things da prologue chapter called sleepers coldness swept body like raindrops sky coldness wasnt one woke earth wake like preset timer questions filled head struggled bit get back feet biggest one ended here middle jungle tried get bearing surrounding eyes laid sword struck ground ghillie suit top that felt strong connection sword didnt think much maybe fill head questions now
Los críticos de nee sum critican la continuación de la historia puso prólogo leído prólogo httpswwwredditcomnteenagerscommentsilxbea_short_fiction_prologue_do_critique_pleeutm_mediumandroid_appamputtm_sourceshare btw añadido suma cosas da capítulo prologue llamados durmientes frío barrió cuerpo como gotas de lluvia cielo frío no era uno despierta la tierra como preestablecido preguntas de temporizador lleno de cabeza luchado poco conseguir atrás pies más grande uno terminó aquí selva media trató de conseguir llevar ojos circundantes espada golpeada ghillie traje top que sentía fuerte conexión espada no pensar mucho tal vez llenar preguntas de cabeza ahora