although proposal is withdrew the recasting technique i believe that must substantially amend the proposal beyond the sole part identified to ensure the legal and coherence of the text
Although this proposal is dealt with through the recasting technique, I believe that we must substantially amend the proposal beyond the sole grey part identified, so as to ensure the legal certainty and coherence of the text.
Although proposal is with through the recasting technique, I believe that must substantially amend the proposal beyond the sole part identified, to ensure the legal and coherence of the text.