Would the following sentence, by the strictest standards, be considered correct by a linguist?

a pencil with that to write broke.
OPTIONS:
- unacceptable
- acceptable
unacceptable
Skulle följande mening, med strängaste mått mätt, anses vara riktig av en språkforskare? En penna med den att skriva trasig. ALTERNATIV: - oacceptabelt - godtagbart
Would the following sentence, measured by the strictest measure, be considered correct by a linguist? A pen with it to write broken. ALTERNATIVES: - unacceptable - acceptable
oacceptabelt
unacceptable