It is very tempting to go on and on with your personal story without adding value for the reader. Avoid that, because it will push the reader away instead of dragging them in.
Inavutia sana kuendelea na hadithi yako ya kibinafsi bila kuongeza thamani kwa msomaji. Epuka hilo, kwa sababu itamsukuma msomaji mbali badala ya kuwavuta ndani.