While I agree with your conclusion, I think your argument could be improved by cleaning up some of the factual errors:

**History** - As [kmyers pointed out](https://www.civilcomments.com/star-wars-vs-star-trek/#c-76094), the [original Star Trek TV](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Trek:_The_Original_Series) series actually started in 1966.

**The Heros Journey** - The concept of [the heroes journey](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monomyth) was first introduced by *Joseph* Campbell

**Humor**  - I think [this episode of The Incomparable](https://www.theincomparable.com/theincomparable/136/) may help you hone your theatrical taste.

I sure hope [Markdown](https://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/) is supported...