Cat:

Take some of your profits and pay for help with grammar and spelling. I likely had prior knowledge and expectations but this attempt to do the work of Barlow gets an "F".

To wit:
-- "tuned tuned"
-- "No,and why...."
-- "speaks to there success"
-- "IMO its a simpler"

I'm ignoring things like missing periods. Hard to get a job in front of the public while making impressions like this.....