I am glad that MSW provided the text of the homily suggestions that he was criticizing.  I must say they are, in my mind, nowhere near as bad as he makes them out to be.  The writing is stiff and there are some solecisms, but overall the message is a positive one.  If every parish in America heard a sermon lifted directly from these suggestions, it would be a marked improvement over what is heard in many (most?) parishes, where immigration is hardly ever mentioned at all.