MSW - your own subjective hang-ups make you an outlier in this discussion.

Actual facts and history:  http://www.praytellblog.com/index.php/2010/11/20/what-to-believe-about-the-translation-controversy/

You cite:  ".....other parts of it are very well done, such as the inclusion of a biblical image right before we receive communion: “Lord, I am not worthy that you should enter under my roof….” The previous translation was better in some ways but banal at times too."  (check your NCR article on Aug. 22, 2013)

https://wikispooks.com/w/images/4/45/Areas_of_Difficulty.pdf

Note - 1998 was approved by all English speaking conferences; yet trumped by LA three years later.  Read the gutless intervention of Francis George.

Note - Germany, Italy, France, Spain - have to date refused to implement LA

Please study your communion image - it is out of place and means what - exactly?