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As-salamu alaykum. Again, today we continue doing |
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our English poetry course at the Islamic |
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University of Gaza. Last time we had a discussion |
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on the nature of poetry and what to do with poetry |
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in order to understand and approach poetry. I |
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spoke about my major objectives in this course. We |
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also spoke about techniques |
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in order to approach poetry. I'm going to be |
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repeating some of these issues in today's class as |
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we define poetry and continue to take examples of |
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poetry from English, and today we'll have an |
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example from Arabic poetry. If you remember, last |
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time we concluded with one significant fact, which |
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is if there's something in a text, in a literary |
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text, especially in a poem, it's almost always |
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there for a reason. There's a purpose behind it. |
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Poets select carefully their words, their images, |
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their metaphors, their sounds even, their rhymes, |
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what to say and what not to say. This is a quote |
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that I like very much about poetry. It says, in |
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poetry, every word and every sound and everything |
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counts. It has a purpose; it impacts the way, the |
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direction of the poem, and it impacts the |
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reception of the poem by the reader. Everything |
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has its function and makes a difference. And we |
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should always ask why certain words or sounds or |
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phrases or images or metaphors are used instead of |
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another. I claim sometimes that creative writing, |
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poetry, fiction writing is a process of making |
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choices: what to write and what not to write. This |
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applies actually to writing, to speaking, but |
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because we speak involuntarily, when we write |
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academically or any kind of writing, especially |
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creative writing, we try to carefully choose what |
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to say and what not to say. And then last time, I |
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kind of drew the iceberg. This is an iceberg. |
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Maybe the tip here is a lot bigger than the one I |
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drew last time. But usually what we see is the |
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tip. There's also an idiom in English that says |
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it's only the tip of the iceberg, because what's |
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hidden, what's beneath is almost always more, |
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sometimes more important, more significant. So any |
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person, any text, any poem shows us this tiny |
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thing in the tip. Our job is to use what we see, |
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the tip, and to dive deeper and make connections |
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and try to understand the implied meanings, the |
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things that are hidden beneath that can tell us |
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many things, not only actually beliefs and values |
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and ideas and themes, but also things related to |
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the form and the structure and the sounds of the |
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poem. So before I ask you to give me your own |
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definition of poetry, I want to repeat something |
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I also said last time. A poem shouldn't mean, but |
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be. |
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Last time I said, don't let a poem be engaged. |
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This could be contradictory. Like, leave the poem |
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as it is. And I don't want you to misunderstand me |
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here. It means that no explanation, no summary, no |
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interpretation of a poem can do any poem justice. |
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Because if you want to explain a poem, you need to |
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rewrite it, to say it in other words. And saying a |
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poem, a text in other words, usually takes away |
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the beauty of the text. And this happens to us all |
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the time. Like, you read a poem or you memorize a |
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line or two lines of verse and you go to someone |
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and say, "Hey, today I read these beautiful lines," |
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"beautiful, what are they about?" Like he's saying, "If |
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uh, uh, because you're courageous, you can you beat |
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everybody, even the heroes. Okay, this idea, I get |
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this idea all the time; people say it all the time. |
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No, no, no, but in the poetry, in the lines, it's |
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really fascinating, the imagery, the sounds, the |
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choice, the choice of words. So many people, I'm one |
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of those people; I'm against summarizing poetry. |
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If you want to talk about poetry to people, show |
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them the poem. But because this is a poetry class, |
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we need to try to understand and analyze and |
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interpret poetry. What should we do? We need to |
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follow particular techniques. I'm not going to say |
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scientific techniques of understanding poetry, |
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but some techniques, some methods and strategies |
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in order to appreciate poetry even more. |
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And here, this is a significant point also, the |
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only meaning of poetry that really matters is its |
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effect on you as you read it or hear it, the |
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impact of the poem on you as a reader. And again, |
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don't let the poem be. So there are two things |
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influence, to feel the influence of the poem, the |
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impact of the poem, but at the same time, we don't |
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rephrase and paraphrase, because I have just said |
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that every word, every image, every sound, every |
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phrase, every metaphor is carefully and |
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meticulously selected by |
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Now, remember last time we came up with this list |
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lines, ellipses, repetition. Sometimes poetry |
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doesn't follow the rules of grammar. Now I want |
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you to look again here, please, at this with the |
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imagery and literary devices and everything. Look |
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at the list. I'm sure you still remember most of |
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them. And I'll give you two minutes to try to come |
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up with your own definition of poetry, in the |
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light of these words, or if you don't want to use |
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them, it's up to you. But when we spoke of the |
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nature of poetry last time, when we talk about |
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poetry, we talk about these things, more or less. |
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So, what is poetry? What is poetry? You don't have |
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to be Shakespeare to define it. Just tell me what |
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you feel. Tell me what you think of poetry. The |
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nature of poetry. If you want to define poetry. If |
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somebody in a taxi, in a bus, if your mom says, |
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"poetry," what is poetry? Why is there a course for |
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poetry in particular? Because there are other |
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courses you study for. I know short story, novel, |
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drama. |
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you think there is one correct definition of |
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poetry? Okay, thank you. This is not mathematics |
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or physics. Got it. So |
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poetry is... Now, I want to give you one more minute |
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to share your definition with your classmate. |
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Show her your definition and see her definition of |
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poetry and try to see where you meet and where you |
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differ. |
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Could you please share your definition with your |
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friend, yeah? Same here, yeah? |
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define poetry and then whether you agree or |
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disagree with your classmate. |
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Did you focus on the same thing? |
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Are you jealous because your friend's definition |
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is better than yours? Are you proud because yours |
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is better than hers? |
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You proud? Excellent. This is the spirit. This is |
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the spirit I want. Okay. You're proud of each |
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other because you both did well. Good. That's the |
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spirit. Okay. Somebody please share your |
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definition. |
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that's a big definition. It's also beautiful. Can |
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you say it again? So there are words, definitely |
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there are words, and in words we can find images, |
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actions, okay, and feelings. Wow. |
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I like... is there rhythmically... even a word. Thank you |
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for coining this if it's not a word already. |
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Rhythmically arranged. |
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influence, to impact the readers. That's a |
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definition. I think we... send it to me; I'll add it |
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to the book. It's beautiful. Please, over there. |
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Poetry is a group of words that are designed on |
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the basis of technological rules in order to reach |
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others and express our feelings. Okay, so poetry, |
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say again. It's a group of words. Group of words. |
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Designed, design. Okay. I like also the word design |
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because it shows intention, to... You |
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know, that to reach others. So to reach out, express |
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feelings and emotion. Fantastic, please. So |
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deep thoughts, necessarily. Okay. |
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definition of poetry? What did you like about your |
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friend's definition of poetry? Did you find |
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something that you didn't mention? Okay, what did |
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poetry uses words. Like Hamlet says, "Words, words, |
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words." Please. |
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time? No. Because there are some poems that are |
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very abstract, intentionally done so. Well, there |
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has to be a purpose for doing it. Okay. Thank you |
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wants to say their definition. I wanted to comment |
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on what I was saying. I wanted to say that I don't |
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your mind. Maybe it's just the whole idea of |
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making your mind work and not only being confused |
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by the complexity or the ambiguity in the poem |
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itself. So I think that it doesn't have to make |
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you draw a whole picture in your mind. Yeah, of |
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course. Again, it depends on how the different |
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schools of poetry, the different background, |
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concrete image that brings, expresses a |
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We can't imagine this poem. If you can't imagine, |
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visualize. Either the poem failed or you have |
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Okay, definition. My definition is the best words in |
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their best organization. And also I want to share |
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no, no. How is that? Can you explain because this |
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best organization. When we have a group of words or |
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meaning, maybe our feelings. In this organization, |
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meaning will be there when we... this way, not this |
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way. Inversion, fronting, this word instead of |
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that word. Okay, I think I like all your |
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definitions. Okay, go on. I want to share |
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something that I read about Samuel Johnson. They |
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asked him about what is poetry, and he said, oh, I |
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think it's easier to say what it's not. What it's |
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not. Yeah. Okay. Samuel Johnson triggers me, |
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actually, because he hates John Donne. And I |
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wouldn't take him seriously. No offense to, if you |
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liked Samuel Johnson. And because he was involved, |
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actually, in the debate. He said that John Donne |
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doesn't write poetry. It doesn't necessarily |
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matter. In this course, we need to learn that |
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there are no authorities that we need to follow |
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100%. Even T.S. Eliot, the best poet in the 20th |
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century, one of the best critics. But sometimes, |
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even T.S. Eliot... Sorry, T.S. Eliot. I see it the |
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other way. He's different. And again, this is what |
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stupid, clichéd box. Think for yourselves. Please. |
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I like the way she defines poetry. Who's she? |
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Who's she? Asma. Okay, Asma. Go on. Because she |
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said that poetry is the overflow of feelings and |
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emotions using the apt words. |
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That's Asma Wordsworth. |
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Okay. Is Wordsworth a relative, William? Do you |
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know him? Is he a friend, a Facebook friend? Because |
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bit. So thank you very much, all of you. Okay, so I |
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have six definitions here of poetry. Could you |
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read number one, please, someone? Please. Poetry |
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is like painting. Poetry is like painting. That's |
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Horace. That's over a thousand, almost more than 2 |
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000 years ago. Poetry is like painting. Number |
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years ago or so. Painting, picture, almost the |
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same. This guy is Sidney, Sir Philip Sidney, okay. |
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With the end, most of you spoke about influencing |
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others, impacting others, reaching out to others. |
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definition of poetry, poetry has to teach, poetry |
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has to delight. There is an end to poetry. They |
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didn't believe in art for art's sake, writing |
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poetry just for the sake of writing poetry. Number |
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three. Okay, maybe Asma, she's familiar with this. |
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This is William Wordsworth, a Romantic poet. Now |
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look at this. Many people would just stop here at |
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feelings. This is 50% of the definition. The |
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spontaneous overflow. So it's feelings that are |
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powerful, with an overflow and at the same time |
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spontaneous. It's not intentional. You don't say |
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poem. You're just inspired by a natural scene, a |
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Recollected in tranquility. There's something |
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related to memory here, recollecting something, |
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recalling something that happened in the past. In |
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reacting instantly to an event and then absorbing |
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recalling this experience. So feelings, we move |
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from painting, from picture, to teaching and |
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delighting, to feelings, internal, self- |
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expression, that is recollected in tranquility. |
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Number four, please. |
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Okay, this is something interesting from Samuel |
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words in their best order. Because we don't want to |
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trash prose here. When we write prose, we also |
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deliberately choose what to say and what not |
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to say. But because sometimes we write a lot of |
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prose, like you write a book, a novel, a long |
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research paper, sometimes it's really demanding, |
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it's really... it's not easy to choose and pick |
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carefully everything you do in the text. But when |
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you write a short poem, half a page, one page, two |
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pages, basically it's easier. So poetry is the |
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best words in their best order because the way you |
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order things matters. Five, please. |
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critic, Coleridge. Poetry makes familiar objects be |
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as if they were not familiar, unfamiliar. Again, |
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defamiliarization. |
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Is it Van Gogh, the guy who draws the sunflowers? |
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Keeps drawing the same thing again and again and |
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again. Every time you see the picture, it's like, |
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wow, as if you've never seen this before. In |
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Romanticism, we call this the childlike |
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experience. Kids almost always react to things as |
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if they have just seen them, unlike adults. So |
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when we grow up, there is a veil of familiarity |
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over our hearts and minds. We don't enjoy the |
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beauty of things. And I usually ask this question |
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to the students, when was the last time you looked |
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up at the moon and said, wow, what a beautiful |
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scene? We don't. We don't have the time. We can't |
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see because of the concrete, because we're busy, |
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because we're spending 24/7 of our time |
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online, on Facebook, social media. When was the |
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last time you stopped to, I don't know, to feed |
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the cat here around campus, to look at the |
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artificial kind of nature, the trees, the flowers, |
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the roses? But look at the kids. The kids, when |
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they see things again and again, they're just |
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like, you know, when they start talking and they |
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see the light, "daw, daw." Every time they look up, |
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they're like, "daw," right? The light, the light. |
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They just keep saying the same word again and again. And |
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when they see the moon or they see a donkey in the |
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street, it's like, "mah, mah, mah," right? Even if |
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they see it like every minute or so. This is a |
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Romantic concept. That's why childhood is |
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significant in Romanticism. It's called |
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376 |
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defamiliarization, this defamiliarization thing, |
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defamiliarizing things in order for you to see |
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them anew, to see them afresh. And personally, |
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he's one of the most fascinating poets of all |
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time. He's a revolutionary poet. Number six. |
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Please. There's a magical creation of beauty, for |
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American poet and writer Edgar Allan Poe. Edgar |
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383 |
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Allan Poe also has a definition of poetry, the |
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rhythmical creation of beauty. You turn beauty |
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which is abstract into something rhythmical, |
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musical. You turn beauty into music, no matter |
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what it is. Which one do you like the most? |
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388 |
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Please. Okay, why is that? |
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389 |
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The words are beautiful. Aha, so the words |
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390 |
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themselves are poetic. Okay, that's nice, a nice |
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391 |
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way of putting it. I like the sound of the words, |
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392 |
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please. Yeah, |
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393 |
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nice. |
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394 |
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But here he's turning abstract ideas of beauty |
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395 |
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into music, into words, into forms, into small |
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forms, like babies, babies, and how beautiful they |
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397 |
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are. I like the first one because the emotion has |
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398 |
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found its thought, and the thought has found its |
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399 |
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form. Okay, what about the first one? No, the first |
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400 |
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one, I commend him. Okay, but he doesn't say |
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401 |
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anything about it; Horace doesn't say anything |
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402 |
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about it. Okay, the second one? This picture, this |
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403 |
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and to teach and delight. To teach and delight. There |
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404 |
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are many people who always, always have a theme, |
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405 |
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have a moral lesson at the end of their poem. |
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406 |
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Could be artificial sometimes, but they usually |
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407 |
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end their poems, you know, like what's that in |
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408 |
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... Tuyor El Janna? |
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409 |
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It's like some people feel that this is childish. |
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410 |
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If you end your poem, your text with a glaring |
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411 |
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moral lesson, treating me as a child. Let me get |
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412 |
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to that conclusion. Let me feel it, experience it, |
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413 |
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445 |
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metaphorically speaking. Taking life by the |
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446 |
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throat. Because life sometimes doesn't obey us, |
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447 |
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doesn't listen to us. It just goes the way it |
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448 |
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wants to go. Doesn't follow our wishes and hopes. |
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449 |
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So probably in a poem, you can come here. |
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450 |
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Four, please. Poetry is as exact as science, as |
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451 |
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00:30:41,650 --> 00:30:47,950 |
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geometry. Okay. French novelist. French, French. |
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452 |
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It's interesting that he's a novelist. I'm not |
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453 |
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sure if he's a poet also. Gustave Flaubert. Poetry |
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454 |
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is as exact as science, as geometry. It's like |
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455 |
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mathematics. |
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456 |
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Is it? No. Five, please. |
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457 |
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00:31:11,140 --> 00:31:14,920 |
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So this is not words and expressions, this is a |
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458 |
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step even one or two further: syntax, grammar. Grammar, |
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459 |
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the way you arrange words, the way you put words, |
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460 |
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the fronting, the organization of words, how |
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461 |
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sometimes you break the rules of syntax. We just |
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462 |
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said that. The challenge is to make it do what you |
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463 |
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want it invisibly. Invisibly. You feel that |
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464 |
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there's something here, the poem begins nicely, |
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465 |
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00:31:41,080 --> 00:31:44,220 |
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it's so smooth at the beginning, but I can't, I |
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466 |
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00:31:44,220 --> 00:31:47,720 |
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don't know how and why. This here is about, this |
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467 |
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00:31:47,720 --> 00:31:49,920 |
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class is about trying to understand these, you |
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468 |
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00:31:49,920 --> 00:31:53,840 |
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know, invisible impacts. Prophet Muhammad, peace be |
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469 |
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upon him, says that from clarification to magic. |
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470 |
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Sometimes people, they bewitch us, kind of |
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471 |
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literally, sometimes with their rhetoric, with |
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472 |
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their words, with their poetry, with their |
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473 |
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00:32:06,030 --> 00:32:08,010 |
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writing, with what they say and how they say it. |
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474 |
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We stand amazed, sometimes even stunned. And |
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475 |
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00:32:13,710 --> 00:32:16,250 |
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usually we don't know why. We know this is because |
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476 |
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00:32:16,250 --> 00:32:19,430 |
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of the beautiful poetry or stuff they're reading. |
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477 |
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00:32:20,210 --> 00:32:22,970 |
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So let's try to dig deeper here and try to make |
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478 |
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00:32:22,970 --> 00:32:26,550 |
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connections in order to understand this invisible |
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479 |
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00:32:26,550 --> 00:32:31,480 |
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act of dazzling us. Finally? |
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480 |
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00:32:35,040 --> 00:32:35,360 |
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Please. |
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481 |
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00:32:38,520 --> 00:32:39,180 |
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Unconscious. |
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482 |
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00:32:41,780 --> 00:32:45,720 |
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So there's rhythm, the beats, up and down, you |
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483 |
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00:32:45,720 --> 00:32:48,120 |
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know, the stress, the music, the internal music. |
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484 |
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00:32:48,480 --> 00:32:52,480 |
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Rhythm is the unconscious engine of poetry. This |
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485 |
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00:32:52,480 --> 00:32:54,800 |
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is a contemporary poet. I checked, she's still |
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486 |
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00:32:54,800 --> 00:33:00,210 |
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alive. Anne Stevenson. I don't know her. And also |
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487 |
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00:33:00,210 --> 00:33:06,290 |
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Susan Sontag is also alive. So which one of these |
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488 |
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definitions do you like the most? Or dislike the |
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489 |
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00:33:11,930 --> 00:33:19,510 |
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most? Which one? Please. The second one because |
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490 |
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00:33:19,510 --> 00:33:25,670 |
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it's emotional. The word can enrich us. So the |
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491 |
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00:33:25,670 --> 00:33:30,210 |
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emphasis here on how poetry reaches us, gets to |
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492 |
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00:33:30,210 --> 00:33:33,170 |
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us, is something you like. Please. |
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493 |
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00:33:47,790 --> 00:33:51,510 |
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Isn't sometimes releasing anger or emotions, isn't |
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494 |
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00:33:51,510 --> 00:33:53,150 |
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it sometimes violence? |
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495 |
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00:33:55,750 --> 00:33:56,670 |
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Isn't it violent? |
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496 |
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00:34:00,510 --> 00:34:02,510 |
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I want you to imagine different situations. Like |
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497 |
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00:34:02,510 --> 00:34:05,970 |
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okay, when you're expressing your actions and |
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498 |
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00:34:05,970 --> 00:34:08,890 |
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feelings and experiences to your family members, |
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499 |
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00:34:09,030 --> 00:34:12,730 |
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teachers, or friends, probably you're peaceful, |
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500 |
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00:34:12,990 --> 00:34:15,690 |
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you're calm, you're non-violent. But remember we |
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501 |
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00:34:15,690 --> 00:34:18,850 |
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said poetry is a means of resistance. We said |
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502 |
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00:34:18,850 --> 00:34:21,230 |
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this. Look at Mahmoud Darwish saying, |
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503 |
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00:34:26,490 --> 00:34:30,610 |
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This is violent. And yes, this is some kind of |
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504 |
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00:34:30,610 --> 00:34:33,830 |
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incitement, because incitement is sometimes good. |
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505 |
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00:34:33,970 --> 00:34:35,570 |
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This is not an invitation for violence, but |
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506 |
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00:34:35,570 --> 00:34:39,930 |
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sometimes you need to react to violence by |
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507 |
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00:34:39,930 --> 00:34:45,290 |
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violence. Poetry teaches us to do both. Number one |
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508 |
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00:34:45,290 --> 00:34:47,810 |
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here, taking life by the throat. I think, I don't |
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509 |
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00:34:47,810 --> 00:34:50,250 |
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mean here, I'm not sure what exactly he means, to |
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510 |
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00:34:50,250 --> 00:34:55,730 |
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be honest, but poetry helps us make sense out of |
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511 |
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00:34:55,730 --> 00:35:02,490 |
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the nonsense around us. We suffocate, we die, we |
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512 |
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00:35:02,490 --> 00:35:04,630 |
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suffer, we are humiliated sometimes. |
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513 |
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00:35:07,950 --> 00:35:11,310 |
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And when you write a poem, you're just attacking |
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514 |
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00:35:11,310 --> 00:35:14,250 |
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back, you're like holding life, controlling life |
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515 |
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00:35:14,250 --> 00:35:17,580 |
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and saying, hey, what the hell? Why is this |
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516 |
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00:35:17,580 --> 00:35:19,980 |
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happening to me? Why always me? Or why always us? |
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517 |
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00:35:20,660 --> 00:35:23,520 |
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So you try to make sense out of this thing. |
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518 |
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00:35:23,620 --> 00:35:27,940 |
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Because life is uncontrollable. Does a poem help |
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519 |
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00:35:27,940 --> 00:35:31,760 |
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us control life? Probably creating a bitter |
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520 |
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00:35:31,760 --> 00:35:32,340 |
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reality? |
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521 |
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00:35:35,660 --> 00:35:42,900 |
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I think in a way. I like your different opinions. |
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522 |
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00:35:43,020 --> 00:35:44,960 |
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Don't feel bad if you have a different opinion. |
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523 |
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00:35:45,040 --> 00:35:48,320 |
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Always say it. I wanted to say that it is like my |
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524 |
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00:35:48,320 --> 00:35:50,500 |
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favorite part because it is my favorite definition |
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525 |
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00:35:50,500 --> 00:35:52,620 |
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because it's like you're saying that I'm choking |
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526 |
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00:35:52,620 --> 00:35:55,340 |
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life and I want it to give me what I want. So I |
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527 |
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00:35:55,340 --> 00:35:57,000 |
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want to create my own life. I am in charge, I'm |
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528 |
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00:35:57,000 --> 00:35:59,680 |
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the boss. Exactly, yes. So this goes with the |
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529 |
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00:35:59,680 --> 00:36:03,220 |
|
concept of art makes life. Thank you. I also love |
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530 |
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the trip. I love the second and the third. But I |
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531 |
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00:36:07,810 --> 00:36:10,890 |
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still say that sometimes poetry makes us feel warm |
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532 |
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00:36:10,890 --> 00:36:13,450 |
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rather than cold because it's the opposite of |
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533 |
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00:36:13,450 --> 00:36:18,050 |
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making us feel cold. And I love Robert Frost's |
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534 |
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00:36:18,050 --> 00:36:21,930 |
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concept because sometimes poetry is actually |
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535 |
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00:36:21,930 --> 00:36:26,110 |
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grasping, grasping the meaning of life and putting |
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536 |
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00:36:26,110 --> 00:36:30,050 |
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it on paper. And this is not an easy thing to do. |
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537 |
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00:36:30,090 --> 00:36:32,690 |
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You need to struggle with yourself, with life. |
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538 |
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00:36:35,010 --> 00:36:38,090 |
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The first, the fourth, and the fifth are so cold |
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539 |
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00:36:38,090 --> 00:36:41,990 |
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and narrow definitions, I think. Poetry, to me, is |
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540 |
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00:36:41,990 --> 00:36:44,870 |
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more about emotion. It's more about feelings and |
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541 |
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thoughts than science. But can we pick and choose? |
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542 |
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Can we just make the perfect definition of poetry |
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543 |
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00:36:53,490 --> 00:36:56,230 |
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selecting and choosing from? Because even when you |
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544 |
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00:36:56,230 --> 00:37:00,530 |
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talk about rhythm and meter, they basically go |
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545 |
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00:37:00,530 --> 00:37:04,500 |
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under mathematics or geometry. Because things like |
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546 |
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00:37:04,500 --> 00:37:09,440 |
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engineering a poem, the rhyme scheme, the beats, |
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547 |
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00:37:10,200 --> 00:37:14,180 |
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the feet, the stressed, unstressed, but not in the |
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548 |
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00:37:14,180 --> 00:37:18,000 |
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literal meaning. Definitely. |
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549 |
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00:37:20,480 --> 00:37:21,060 |
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Yeah, definitely. |
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550 |
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00:37:26,400 --> 00:37:28,620 |
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Okay, we'll see. Okay. |
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551 |
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00:37:34,350 --> 00:37:38,610 |
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Or, for |
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552 |
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00:37:38,610 --> 00:37:42,830 |
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example, for me, I do all kinds of romantic stuff |
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553 |
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00:37:42,830 --> 00:37:48,190 |
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because poetry, I think, is just self-expression and |
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554 |
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00:37:48,190 --> 00:37:51,590 |
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releasing of inner thoughts. For example, when I |
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555 |
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00:37:51,590 --> 00:37:57,230 |
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write anything, I don't even want anyone to read |
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556 |
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00:37:57,230 --> 00:37:59,230 |
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it. It's very personal. |
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557 |
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00:38:03,860 --> 00:38:07,340 |
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But I think William Wordsworth and the romantics wrote in |
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558 |
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00:38:07,340 --> 00:38:18,080 |
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order also to be read, so why would you...? It's |
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559 |
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00:38:18,080 --> 00:38:22,440 |
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not criticism; it's not science. You think it's |
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560 |
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00:38:22,440 --> 00:38:26,140 |
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criticism? Yeah, because sometimes when you can't |
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561 |
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00:38:26,140 --> 00:38:29,460 |
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criticize someone directly, you can write a poem |
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562 |
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00:38:29,460 --> 00:38:33,820 |
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to criticize someone indirectly. Because sometimes |
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563 |
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00:38:33,820 --> 00:38:37,100 |
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when you criticize someone, there's a punishment, |
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564 |
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00:38:37,460 --> 00:38:39,720 |
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there's something after it. So you can do it |
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565 |
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00:38:39,720 --> 00:38:42,050 |
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indirectly. That's true. It doesn't have to be |
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566 |
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00:38:42,050 --> 00:38:45,030 |
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like criticism of life, saying, "OK, I'm writing a |
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567 |
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00:38:45,030 --> 00:38:51,010 |
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poem. Today's pizza was horrible, and the |
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568 |
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00:38:51,010 --> 00:38:54,670 |
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cafeteria should be shut down." Today is something. |
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569 |
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00:38:54,930 --> 00:38:57,150 |
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It doesn't have to be literally this way. And |
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570 |
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00:38:57,150 --> 00:39:00,710 |
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sometimes we read the stupidest poems about the |
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571 |
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00:39:00,710 --> 00:39:04,750 |
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stupidest things, but the most beautiful things. |
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572 |
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00:39:04,750 --> 00:39:07,170 |
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We'll see some of these poems, poems that could |
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573 |
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00:39:07,170 --> 00:39:11,490 |
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sound stupid. Nonsensical. They're deep because |
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574 |
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00:39:11,490 --> 00:39:14,590 |
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they're true. They address, they reach us, get to us |
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575 |
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00:39:14,590 --> 00:39:16,250 |
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somewhere deeper, please. |
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576 |
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00:39:22,650 --> 00:39:23,290 |
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Yeah, |
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577 |
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00:39:25,710 --> 00:39:28,430 |
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so somebody here is finding a connection between |
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578 |
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00:39:28,430 --> 00:39:33,070 |
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criticizing life and releasing your thoughts. |
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579 |
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00:39:48,260 --> 00:39:49,660 |
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Okay. |
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580 |
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00:39:56,330 --> 00:39:59,450 |
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I like it when we have very different opinions, |
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581 |
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00:39:59,650 --> 00:40:02,490 |
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especially from friends. So I want you, when you |
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582 |
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00:40:02,490 --> 00:40:06,830 |
|
finish this class, in the break, fight with each |
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583 |
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00:40:06,830 --> 00:40:09,910 |
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other, argue, try to convince each other, or try |
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584 |
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00:40:09,910 --> 00:40:13,270 |
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to make your point clear. And this is how we have |
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585 |
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00:40:13,270 --> 00:40:19,970 |
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fun. We don't have much time, but somebody wants |
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586 |
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00:40:19,970 --> 00:40:22,190 |
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to say something that is significant, that if she |
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587 |
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00:40:22,190 --> 00:40:24,930 |
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doesn't say it, this course is not what it should |
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588 |
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00:40:24,930 --> 00:40:28,420 |
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be. Okay, one line. Yeah, I'm very sure that the |
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589 |
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00:40:28,420 --> 00:40:32,320 |
|
criticism in Arabic is different from English |
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590 |
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00:40:32,320 --> 00:40:35,540 |
|
because the criticism in Arabic, we have, like, a |
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591 |
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00:40:35,540 --> 00:40:37,920 |
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negative connotation; they criticize |
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592 |
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00:40:37,920 --> 00:40:41,460 |
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something, we put the negative aspects that we have in |
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593 |
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00:40:41,460 --> 00:40:43,940 |
|
something. But also there is constructive criticism. But the |
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594 |
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00:40:43,940 --> 00:40:46,780 |
|
English connotation here, in English |
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595 |
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00:40:46,780 --> 00:40:51,110 |
|
sometimes when we criticize things, like we want to say |
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596 |
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00:40:51,110 --> 00:40:54,490 |
|
something about this. In literature, when we say |
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597 |
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00:40:54,490 --> 00:40:57,330 |
|
criticism, this is not like saying bad things |
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598 |
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00:40:57,330 --> 00:40:59,350 |
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about the text; it's about appreciating it; it's |
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599 |
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00:40:59,350 --> 00:41:03,290 |
|
about trying to see how it says what it says. But |
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600 |
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00:41:03,290 --> 00:41:05,710 |
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again, even in Arabic we still have constructive |
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601 |
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00:41:05,710 --> 00:41:10,780 |
|
criticism. I like the first one, the criticism of |
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602 |
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00:41:10,780 --> 00:41:12,960 |
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life, because it duplicates our life as |
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603 |
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00:41:12,960 --> 00:41:15,620 |
|
Palestinians. In the recent years, we have seen |
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604 |
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00:41:15,620 --> 00:41:18,280 |
|
many poets like Mahmoud Darwish, Ahmad Shawqi, |
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605 |
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00:41:18,400 --> 00:41:22,560 |
|
Fadwa Tuqan, Zoghlul Tuqan, they criticize the |
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606 |
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00:41:22,560 --> 00:41:26,180 |
|
enemies. They criticize life? Yes, especially |
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607 |
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00:41:26,180 --> 00:41:28,700 |
|
Israeli enemies through the hidden lines or |
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608 |
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00:41:28,700 --> 00:41:33,080 |
|
powerful meanings. True, that could be also true. |
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609 |
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00:41:33,420 --> 00:41:37,660 |
|
We can take this discussion to the Facebook group. |
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610 |
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00:41:38,420 --> 00:41:40,840 |
|
I'll post these questions and probably we can |
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611 |
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00:41:40,840 --> 00:41:47,880 |
|
continue this on Facebook. Okay, now I'll tell you |
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612 |
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00:41:47,880 --> 00:41:52,470 |
|
about an experience writing one of the most famous |
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613 |
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00:41:52,470 --> 00:41:56,450 |
|
high-casual 20th-century poems by Ezra Pound. Ezra |
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614 |
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00:41:56,450 --> 00:42:00,330 |
|
Pound is T.S. Eliot's friend. He's an early 20th |
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615 |
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00:42:00,330 --> 00:42:08,010 |
|
century modernist and poet and critic. He writes |
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616 |
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00:42:08,010 --> 00:42:11,270 |
|
about his own experience seeing he was somewhere |
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617 |
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00:42:11,270 --> 00:42:17,030 |
|
in France, in a metro station, and he said he |
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618 |
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00:42:17,030 --> 00:42:21,750 |
|
suddenly saw a beautiful face. You know, poets |
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619 |
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00:42:21,750 --> 00:42:24,990 |
|
always see beauty in the midst of tragedy and |
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620 |
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00:42:24,990 --> 00:42:31,670 |
|
stuff. Or vice versa. And then another. And then |
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621 |
|
00:42:31,670 --> 00:42:36,610 |
|
yet another. And then a beautiful child's face. |
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622 |
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00:42:37,410 --> 00:42:41,900 |
|
And then another beautiful woman. And he says |
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623 |
|
00:42:41,900 --> 00:42:46,160 |
|
here, "I tried all day to find the words," look at |
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624 |
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00:42:46,160 --> 00:42:48,760 |
|
the medium here, "to find the words." So the |
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625 |
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00:42:48,760 --> 00:42:52,780 |
|
emotions, the feelings, are there, and this is |
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626 |
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00:42:52,780 --> 00:42:57,800 |
|
Ezra Pound. To find any words that seemed to me |
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627 |
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00:42:57,800 --> 00:43:04,840 |
|
worthy to describe this beautiful scenery. Or as |
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628 |
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00:43:04,840 --> 00:43:07,920 |
|
lovely as the sudden emotion. He was taken aback, |
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629 |
|
00:43:08,020 --> 00:43:11,830 |
|
like, "Oh my gosh!" You see this all the time. A kid |
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630 |
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00:43:11,830 --> 00:43:15,030 |
|
does something, you see a rose, a flower, somebody |
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631 |
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00:43:15,030 --> 00:43:19,030 |
|
does something, an old man, a homeless person does |
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632 |
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00:43:19,030 --> 00:43:22,390 |
|
something, a taxi driver says something, pizza |
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633 |
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00:43:22,390 --> 00:43:25,170 |
|
tastes a particular way, and then you're like, |
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634 |
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00:43:25,330 --> 00:43:30,010 |
|
"This should be in a poem." And this is a poem. He |
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635 |
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00:43:30,010 --> 00:43:33,690 |
|
said he failed the whole day to try to find the |
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636 |
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00:43:33,690 --> 00:43:38,500 |
|
right words to express himself, to |
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667 |
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00:45:50,380 --> 00:45:53,900 |
|
The painting, picture definition can easily, if you |
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668 |
|
00:45:53,900 --> 00:45:56,820 |
|
have the skills, you can easily draw this. So |
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669 |
|
00:45:56,820 --> 00:46:00,980 |
|
trees in fall, when you know, the leaves, the |
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670 |
|
00:46:00,980 --> 00:46:05,660 |
|
branches, the buds fall down. That's the beautiful |
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671 |
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00:46:05,660 --> 00:46:08,420 |
|
image. You know, the cherry blossom. If you've |
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672 |
|
00:46:08,420 --> 00:46:10,800 |
|
been to America, you've seen this. In Japan, |
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673 |
|
00:46:11,360 --> 00:46:16,080 |
|
fascinating scenery of how trees blossom and |
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674 |
|
00:46:16,080 --> 00:46:18,760 |
|
sometimes when they fall down. But this is the, |
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675 |
|
00:46:20,750 --> 00:46:24,930 |
|
It's actually something from underground going up. |
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676 |
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00:46:25,890 --> 00:46:28,350 |
|
I don't know why he's doing this, but I love this |
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677 |
|
00:46:28,350 --> 00:46:30,450 |
|
scenery when everything is falling down, falling |
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678 |
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00:46:30,450 --> 00:46:35,390 |
|
down. One thing, one particular thing is rising |
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679 |
|
00:46:35,390 --> 00:46:43,670 |
|
up, is flying back to its branch. A butterfly. So |
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680 |
|
00:46:43,670 --> 00:46:49,130 |
|
many things are missing here. That you keep, and I |
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681 |
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00:46:49,130 --> 00:46:52,430 |
|
love this, I love the haikus. I usually go online |
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682 |
|
00:46:52,430 --> 00:46:56,490 |
|
to Twitter and just keep looking up haikus because |
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683 |
|
00:46:56,490 --> 00:47:00,970 |
|
they make me, Wordsworth says in one of his poems, |
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684 |
|
00:47:01,110 --> 00:47:04,210 |
|
"the music in my heart I bore." And this is |
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685 |
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00:47:04,210 --> 00:47:07,290 |
|
beautiful because you don't bear music. Music is |
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686 |
|
00:47:07,290 --> 00:47:10,850 |
|
abstract. So you bear something. Sometimes you |
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687 |
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00:47:10,850 --> 00:47:12,330 |
|
feel there is, you know, a burden on your |
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688 |
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00:47:12,330 --> 00:47:14,630 |
|
shoulders and head and heart because you read |
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689 |
|
00:47:14,630 --> 00:47:17,250 |
|
something, because somebody said something to you. |
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690 |
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00:47:17,790 --> 00:47:21,290 |
|
So here I, I, I, I like usually high could haunt |
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691 |
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00:47:21,290 --> 00:47:25,090 |
|
me for, for a lot of time. So he says, okay, there |
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692 |
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00:47:25,090 --> 00:47:30,090 |
|
is this haiku thing that he knows. And he gives |
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693 |
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00:47:30,090 --> 00:47:32,730 |
|
another example that, again, I love very much. He |
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694 |
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00:47:32,730 --> 00:47:35,850 |
|
talks about a guy, I don't know this guy, Viktor |
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695 |
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00:47:35,850 --> 00:47:39,110 |
|
Plar, tells me that once when he was walking over |
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696 |
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00:47:39,110 --> 00:47:44,310 |
|
snow with a Japanese naval officer, they came to a |
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697 |
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00:47:44,310 --> 00:47:46,790 |
|
place, across a place where a cat, imagine the |
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698 |
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00:47:46,790 --> 00:47:51,800 |
|
scene, it's snowy, it's white all over the place. |
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699 |
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00:47:52,540 --> 00:47:54,940 |
|
They came to this place where a cat had crossed |
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700 |
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00:47:54,940 --> 00:47:58,580 |
|
the path. So this is the snow and then there is |
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701 |
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00:47:58,580 --> 00:48:02,080 |
|
this cat. If you have a cat, probably you'll feel |
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702 |
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00:48:02,080 --> 00:48:05,640 |
|
this more than anyone else. That's it. If you look |
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703 |
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00:48:05,640 --> 00:48:10,080 |
|
at it from afar, from a distance, it's beautiful, |
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704 |
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00:48:11,230 --> 00:48:16,730 |
|
especially with the tiny pose, because it's going |
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705 |
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00:48:16,730 --> 00:48:19,790 |
|
to sound something like this probably, I don't |
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706 |
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00:48:19,790 --> 00:48:23,750 |
|
know. And then the Japanese man, and this is what |
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707 |
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00:48:23,750 --> 00:48:28,090 |
|
I like about this story, he said, "Stop, I am |
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708 |
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00:48:28,090 --> 00:48:30,410 |
|
making a poem." It's like "Stop, I am being inspired" |
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709 |
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00:48:30,410 --> 00:48:32,830 |
|
because people who, you mentioned Ahmed Shawqi, |
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710 |
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00:48:33,670 --> 00:48:36,560 |
|
the Egyptian poet, not the Palestinian poet. Ahmed |
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711 |
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00:48:36,560 --> 00:48:41,100 |
|
Shawqi had his beautiful way of writing poetry; he |
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712 |
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00:48:41,100 --> 00:48:44,740 |
|
just gets the inspiration and he stops talking to |
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713 |
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00:48:44,740 --> 00:48:47,380 |
|
people and he keeps walking to and fro around the |
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714 |
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00:48:47,380 --> 00:48:49,800 |
|
place and he holds a pen and he writes wherever he |
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715 |
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00:48:49,800 --> 00:48:52,100 |
|
on his hand, on the pack of cigarettes, he writes |
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716 |
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00:48:52,100 --> 00:48:54,120 |
|
the poem, the inspiration; if he doesn't write it |
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717 |
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00:48:54,120 --> 00:48:57,380 |
|
back, probably it's going to, he's going to forget |
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718 |
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00:48:57,380 --> 00:49:02,900 |
|
it. But this guy says, "Stop, I am making a poem," and |
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|
719 |
|
00:49:02,900 --> 00:49:06,100 |
|
the act of, because poetry in its root, originally, |
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720 |
|
00:49:06,100 --> 00:49:09,560 |
|
poetry means to make something, to make something, |
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|
721 |
|
00:49:09,560 --> 00:49:11,740 |
|
to create something, to build up something, to |
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722 |
|
00:49:11,740 --> 00:49:15,980 |
|
construct something. So he says, "Stop, I am making a |
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|
723 |
|
00:49:15,980 --> 00:49:20,200 |
|
poem." We usually make up a story, we make cake or |
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|
724 |
|
00:49:20,200 --> 00:49:25,020 |
|
pizza, okay? So, and the poem goes roughly like this: |
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|
725 |
|
00:49:25,020 --> 00:49:29,260 |
|
Look at this, how easy but difficult at the same |
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|
726 |
|
00:49:29,260 --> 00:49:33,750 |
|
time. "The footsteps of the cat upon the snow." It's |
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727 |
|
00:49:33,750 --> 00:49:36,370 |
|
usually the second part that surprises us, catches |
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728 |
|
00:49:36,370 --> 00:49:39,550 |
|
us by surprise. Usually these poems don't have the |
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729 |
|
00:49:39,550 --> 00:49:43,950 |
|
linking verb, so it adds more to the poeticality |
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|
730 |
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00:49:43,950 --> 00:49:48,350 |
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of the poem. "Plum blossoms." You know, the plum, |
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731 |
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plums, plums, the plums, they have these trees, |
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732 |
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they have the beautiful flowers when they blossom. |
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733 |
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So the footsteps of the cat upon the snow are like |
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734 |
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plum blossoms. So our friend Ezra Pound said he |
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735 |
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00:50:08,120 --> 00:50:12,300 |
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was inspired by these things. Again, he failed. He |
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736 |
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was inspired by it. But look at how Ezra Pound, as |
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737 |
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00:50:14,660 --> 00:50:18,460 |
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a Western European guy, how he's appropriating |
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738 |
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Eastern Japanese things. Because if the haiku is |
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739 |
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originally three lines, five syllables, seven |
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740 |
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syllables, and then five syllables, look at how |
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741 |
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he's distorting this and appropriating it, |
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742 |
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changing it. As if saying that, "OK, it's nice, |
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743 |
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but..." There's always a "but." And that's why they would |
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744 |
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be appropriating this. Finally, he wrote the |
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745 |
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famous poem, but he says, "I wrote like months |
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746 |
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later, two months later, I wrote a 30-line poem |
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747 |
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about that particular experience and destroyed it |
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748 |
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because it was what we call our second intensity. |
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749 |
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It's artificial in a sense. It's not what he |
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750 |
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wanted. It's not what he felt. It wasn't genuine. |
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751 |
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Six months later, I made a poem half that length, |
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752 |
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still destroyed it, still second intensity. A year |
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753 |
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later, I made the flowing haiku, one of the most |
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754 |
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famous poems. This is a poem: |
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755 |
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"The apparition," you know apparition? It's like the |
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756 |
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ghost, apparition, ghost. |
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757 |
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"The apparition of these faces in the crowd." Look |
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758 |
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at a year later, the beauty of the faces in that |
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759 |
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particular time and place turned into an |
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760 |
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01:00:46,130 --> 01:00:49,070 |
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apparition, probably something spooky, bleak. |
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761 |
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01:00:50,170 --> 01:00:55,010 |
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"Petals on a wet, black bough." You know the petals? |
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762 |
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01:00:56,830 --> 01:00:59,950 |
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You know, this is, yeah. In Arabic, they say البتلات |
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763 |
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(al-batalat). So this is a petal, this is a petal, this |
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764 |
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01:01:02,930 --> 01:01:05,440 |
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is a petal, this is a petal. But look at the |
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765 |
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choice of words. Like if this is, if every petal |
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766 |
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is a human being, it's going to be like "petals on |
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767 |
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a wet," not just wet, also black. |
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768 |
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01:01:28,720 --> 01:01:33,300 |
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It's beautiful, but it's also haunting. |
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769 |
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01:01:40,750 --> 01:01:42,590 |
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Okay. Okay. |
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770 |
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01:01:55,490 --> 01:02:01,390 |
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Don't you think the word "apparition" is key here? |
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771 |
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01:02:02,810 --> 01:02:08,850 |
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What does he say? The faces. The anything, the |
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772 |
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01:02:08,850 --> 01:02:11,830 |
|
pictures of these faces in the crowd. He says |
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773 |
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01:02:11,830 --> 01:02:12,930 |
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"apparition." |
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774 |
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01:02:17,250 --> 01:02:22,090 |
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They're just a blurry image. But look at this |
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775 |
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01:02:22,090 --> 01:02:25,470 |
|
experience, like so many things. Imagine writing |
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776 |
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|
30 lines and then 50 lines and then a year later, |
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777 |
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01:02:30,770 --> 01:02:35,760 |
|
okay. I want to appropriate Japan and then say |
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778 |
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01:02:35,760 --> 01:02:39,720 |
|
what I want to say and look cool. I love this |
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779 |
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01:02:39,720 --> 01:02:43,220 |
|
poem. Can I say something? Can I say first that I |
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780 |
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01:02:43,220 --> 01:02:47,020 |
|
don't like the haiku at all? It's okay. I can't |
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781 |
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01:02:47,020 --> 01:02:49,760 |
|
live reading such poems. I can't live reading that |
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782 |
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01:02:49,760 --> 01:02:54,380 |
|
the poet tried so hard to recollect his thoughts. |
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783 |
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01:02:55,240 --> 01:02:57,380 |
|
Not necessarily. Sometimes when you are a poet, |
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784 |
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01:02:57,740 --> 01:02:59,900 |
|
you are a poet. You just keep writing. It depends. |
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785 |
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01:03:06,820 --> 01:03:09,440 |
|
You're right. You're definitely right. But what is |
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786 |
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01:03:09,440 --> 01:03:11,960 |
|
challenging about this is the fact that the unsaid |
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787 |
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01:03:11,960 --> 01:03:16,260 |
|
is a lot more than what he says. There is a lot to |
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788 |
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01:03:16,260 --> 01:03:20,600 |
|
excavate, the hidden meanings. The stuff |
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789 |
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01:03:20,600 --> 01:03:26,740 |
|
between... He doesn't even use here the verb. Is |
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790 |
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01:03:26,740 --> 01:03:31,680 |
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it "is"? Is it "was"? Will be? So is he talking about |
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791 |
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01:03:31,680 --> 01:03:36,120 |
|
now, the past, the present? Makes you think. So |
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792 |
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01:03:36,120 --> 01:03:39,860 |
|
I'll ask you to think about trying to write a |
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793 |
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01:03:39,860 --> 01:03:43,020 |
|
haiku. Listen, the Japanese haikus, you will love |
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794 |
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01:03:43,020 --> 01:03:46,950 |
|
them. So just Google "Japanese haikus," famous |
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795 |
|
01:03:46,950 --> 01:03:49,670 |
|
Japanese haikus, and try to read them. You'll feel |
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796 |
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01:03:49,670 --> 01:03:53,550 |
|
probably, no offense to Ezra Pound. He's a great |
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797 |
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01:03:53,550 --> 01:03:56,950 |
|
poet. But if you don't like Ezra Pound's haikus, |
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798 |
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01:03:57,310 --> 01:03:59,670 |
|
probably you can read somebody else's. They're |
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799 |
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01:03:59,670 --> 01:04:01,970 |
|
beautiful. Again, the challenging thing is that |
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800 |
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01:04:01,970 --> 01:04:06,870 |
|
you need to put so many things, so many feelings |
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801 |
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01:04:06,870 --> 01:04:12,690 |
|
and emotions in just two lines. Please. |
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802 |
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01:04:18,470 --> 01:04:23,030 |
|
Possible, yeah, possible, possible. I like the |
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803 |
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01:04:23,030 --> 01:04:25,410 |
|
whole concept of Pound, but I think that it goes |
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804 |
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01:04:25,410 --> 01:04:29,510 |
|
against the idea of spontaneous love that we said |
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805 |
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01:04:29,510 --> 01:04:32,530 |
|
before, because he spent a whole year just to come |
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806 |
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01:04:32,530 --> 01:04:35,410 |
|
up with those words. But listen, the same with |
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807 |
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01:04:35,410 --> 01:04:37,430 |
|
Wordsworth. Wordsworth didn't write his poems |
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808 |
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01:04:37,430 --> 01:04:41,810 |
|
instantly. Wordsworth also believed that second |
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809 |
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01:04:41,810 --> 01:04:45,630 |
|
intensity reacting to a particular scene is not |
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810 |
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01:04:45,630 --> 01:04:48,210 |
|
good, it's not romantic enough. So he would take |
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811 |
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01:04:48,210 --> 01:04:52,050 |
|
it and do it later. I want to say that when you |
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812 |
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01:04:52,050 --> 01:04:54,230 |
|
asked us first to write our definitions, I said |
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813 |
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01:04:54,230 --> 01:04:57,150 |
|
the word "precise" and to that point. In my |
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814 |
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01:04:57,150 --> 01:04:58,970 |
|
definition, I didn't think that it was very |
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815 |
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01:04:58,970 --> 01:05:01,870 |
|
significant. But I think that here it fits in |
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816 |
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01:05:01,870 --> 01:05:06,120 |
|
finding this particular. Okay, thank you. So we |
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817 |
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01:05:06,120 --> 01:05:10,580 |
|
conclude with Ezra Pound saying, "All poetic |
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818 |
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01:05:10,580 --> 01:05:14,900 |
|
language is language of exploration." It's like |
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819 |
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01:05:14,900 --> 01:05:19,300 |
|
kids exploring things. The kid, a one-year-old kid |
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820 |
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01:05:19,300 --> 01:05:26,650 |
|
would say, "Open the light," right? They don't know |
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821 |
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01:05:26,650 --> 01:05:29,590 |
|
the proper collocation here, but they would say |
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822 |
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01:05:29,590 --> 01:05:33,310 |
|
this word, and the word here, "open," is a word of |
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|
823 |
|
01:05:33,310 --> 01:05:35,550 |
|
exploration. The kid is still exploring. But |
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824 |
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01:05:35,550 --> 01:05:39,150 |
|
sadly, when we grow up, when we go to school, we |
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825 |
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01:05:39,150 --> 01:05:41,770 |
|
learn to limit our imagination or something. So |
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|
826 |
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01:05:41,770 --> 01:05:46,770 |
|
Ezra Pound is saying here, you need to explore. |
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|
827 |
|
01:05:47,070 --> 01:05:49,190 |
|
You need to break all these barriers, because |
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|
828 |
|
01:05:49,190 --> 01:05:52,040 |
|
poetry is basically a metaphor to avoid the |
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|
829 |
|
01:05:52,040 --> 01:05:54,600 |
|
thoughts that have been already thought out by |
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830 |
|
01:05:54,600 --> 01:05:59,560 |
|
others. The thoughts, if you don't explore, you |
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|
831 |
|
01:05:59,560 --> 01:06:02,920 |
|
will end up repeating and saying, "Well, I think |
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832 |
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01:06:02,920 --> 01:06:05,500 |
|
Antara says, هل غادرة الشعراء من متردامي أم هل |
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833 |
|
01:06:05,500 --> 01:06:08,400 |
|
عرفت الدار بعد تراهم؟ Antara, the Arab poet 2000 |
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834 |
|
01:06:08,400 --> 01:06:11,800 |
|
years ago, almost 2000 years ago, says that poets |
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|
835 |
|
01:06:11,800 --> 01:06:15,360 |
|
have said everything I want to say. But why did he |
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|
836 |
|
01:06:15,360 --> 01:06:19,500 |
|
still write poetry? Because he was exploring and |
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|
837 |
|
01:06:19,500 --> 01:06:21,500 |
|
the other Arab poet I will mention this later on |
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838 |
|
01:06:21,500 --> 01:06:26,600 |
|
so many times he said, "I'm |
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|
839 |
|
01:06:26,600 --> 01:06:29,880 |
|
quoting other poets, I am imitating other poets, I'm |
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840 |
|
01:06:29,880 --> 01:06:33,860 |
|
echoing other poets." We repeat; poets repeat each |
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841 |
|
01:06:33,860 --> 01:06:38,800 |
|
other. In order to avoid this, you need to explore |
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842 |
|
01:06:38,800 --> 01:06:42,420 |
|
with image, with, with experiment with imagery, with |
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843 |
|
01:06:42,420 --> 01:06:46,020 |
|
language, everything. Okay, now |
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|
844 |
|
01:06:47,270 --> 01:06:51,510 |
|
I'll conclude. I expected to do more, but we'll |
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|
845 |
|
01:06:51,510 --> 01:06:52,010 |
|
see. |
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846 |
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01:06:55,070 --> 01:06:58,010 |
|
So there are four ways, four phases to approaching |
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847 |
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01:06:58,010 --> 01:07:02,190 |
|
a poem. One, two, three, like you'll find |
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848 |
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01:07:02,190 --> 01:07:03,770 |
|
different people saying different things, |
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|
849 |
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01:07:03,890 --> 01:07:06,510 |
|
different books, different sources. But I like to |
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850 |
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01:07:06,510 --> 01:07:09,990 |
|
follow this kind of system. You don't have to |
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851 |
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01:07:09,990 --> 01:07:13,350 |
|
follow it as, you know, like literally. Number |
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852 |
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01:07:13,350 --> 01:07:16,600 |
|
one, when you read a poem, try to notice things |
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853 |
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01:07:16,600 --> 01:07:21,320 |
|
about it. When you have to do a poem to understand |
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854 |
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01:07:21,320 --> 01:07:23,860 |
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889 |
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01:00:20,840 --> 01:00:23,680 |
|
course, but this is enough. So, the difficult words |
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890 |
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01:00:23,680 --> 01:00:26,520 |
|
come to class. The next class we'll see, we'll |
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891 |
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01:00:26,520 --> 01:00:29,860 |
|
study a poem by Tamim Barghouti. I was planning to |
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892 |
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01:00:29,860 --> 01:00:34,480 |
|
do it today. And a poem by Sir Thomas Wyatt, Whoso |
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893 |
|
01:00:34,480 --> 01:00:38,000 |
|
lists to hunt. Whoso, this is a new word. What |
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|
894 |
|
01:00:38,000 --> 01:00:43,960 |
|
should you do? Go to the dictionary. Number four, and |
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|
895 |
|
01:00:43,960 --> 01:00:48,040 |
|
this is where we do our business here. Read |
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896 |
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01:00:48,040 --> 01:00:51,740 |
|
between the lines. Connect between the form and |
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897 |
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01:00:51,740 --> 01:00:53,540 |
|
the meaning, and the shape, and the idea, and the |
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898 |
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01:00:53,540 --> 01:00:57,720 |
|
words. Analyze the sounds. Answer the question, |
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899 |
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01:00:57,940 --> 01:01:00,740 |
|
why? So what? Why is this repeated? Why does this |
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900 |
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01:01:00,740 --> 01:01:04,580 |
|
sound like this? Why is the rhyme different, |
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901 |
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01:01:04,760 --> 01:01:07,640 |
|
regular, irregular? So link the form and the |
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902 |
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01:01:07,640 --> 01:01:10,700 |
|
meaning. Aim for the implied, for the things |
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903 |
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01:01:10,700 --> 01:01:14,160 |
|
between the lines. This is close reading, we |
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904 |
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01:01:14,160 --> 01:01:17,830 |
|
mentioned before. And again, the metaphors, the |
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905 |
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01:01:17,830 --> 01:01:22,150 |
|
literary devices, and the imagery. What I usually |
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906 |
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01:01:22,150 --> 01:01:24,530 |
|
do, remember Ali Abunama's poem? We noticed |
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907 |
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01:01:24,530 --> 01:01:27,930 |
|
things, and then we try to see, read it aloud, and |
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908 |
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01:01:27,930 --> 01:01:31,730 |
|
then to see what new words, probably, sometimes, |
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909 |
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01:01:32,170 --> 01:01:34,210 |
|
number three, by the way, sometimes you will not |
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910 |
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01:01:34,210 --> 01:01:36,850 |
|
be able to understand what the poet means, because |
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911 |
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01:01:36,850 --> 01:01:39,550 |
|
poets say stuff. Even poets themselves sometimes |
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912 |
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01:01:39,550 --> 01:01:42,630 |
|
don't know what it means. I never closed the |
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913 |
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01:01:42,630 --> 01:01:45,200 |
|
newborn desert. I don't know. But this is the |
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914 |
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01:01:45,200 --> 01:01:48,540 |
|
beauty of, it doesn't mean, I don't know means I'm |
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915 |
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01:01:48,540 --> 01:01:52,580 |
|
not 100% sure, but I can still guess. I can give |
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916 |
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01:01:52,580 --> 01:01:59,700 |
|
an idea. We'll see how things go. When we comment |
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917 |
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01:01:59,700 --> 01:02:05,620 |
|
on a poem, finally, on a text, whatever you do, |
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918 |
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01:02:06,740 --> 01:02:10,880 |
|
base your opinions and thoughts on the text, on |
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919 |
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01:02:10,880 --> 01:02:15,040 |
|
ideas, on evidence. I could claim here that there |
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920 |
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01:02:15,040 --> 01:02:17,960 |
|
could be two types of evidence. Number one, |
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921 |
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01:02:18,100 --> 01:02:22,380 |
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textual evidence. The poet repeats the word "nor" |
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922 |
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01:02:22,380 --> 01:02:26,320 |
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three times. The poet ends with the same |
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923 |
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01:02:26,320 --> 01:02:30,940 |
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rhyme scheme: "I I I I" sound. The poet begins with "I" |
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924 |
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01:02:30,940 --> 01:02:37,240 |
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and ends with "I" to support your argument. Okay, |
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925 |
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01:02:37,500 --> 01:02:41,580 |
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always do this. In exams, in your discussions, most |
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926 |
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01:02:41,580 --> 01:02:44,280 |
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of you forget to do this; this is, to me, more |
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927 |
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01:02:44,280 --> 01:02:49,420 |
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important than anything else. Get used to saying, |
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928 |
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01:02:49,420 --> 01:02:51,780 |
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"the poet is doing this," "the poem is saying this" |
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929 |
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01:02:51,780 --> 01:02:55,600 |
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because, in the text; for example, in the text, it |
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930 |
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01:02:55,600 --> 01:02:59,540 |
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goes like this. Number two: evidence based on |
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931 |
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01:02:59,540 --> 01:03:03,900 |
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thoughts. Again, going back to Ali Abunama's poem, we |
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932 |
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01:03:03,900 --> 01:03:07,950 |
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said, replying to the question whether the speaker |
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933 |
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01:03:07,950 --> 01:03:13,090 |
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will change or not, some of you said, "I think he |
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934 |
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01:03:13,090 --> 01:03:16,750 |
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is going to change because the very act of writing |
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935 |
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01:03:16,750 --> 01:03:20,680 |
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the poem is an act of change." This is evidence |
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936 |
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01:03:20,680 --> 01:03:23,780 |
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still, not based on something in the text, based |
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937 |
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01:03:23,780 --> 01:03:27,820 |
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on logic, on my understanding of life, thoughts, |
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938 |
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01:03:27,960 --> 01:03:31,740 |
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connecting things, connecting the dots. Not |
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939 |
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01:03:31,740 --> 01:03:37,240 |
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necessarily. Not necessarily. I usually don't like |
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940 |
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01:03:37,240 --> 01:03:40,200 |
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to go to the background or something. So I don't |
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941 |
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01:03:40,200 --> 01:03:43,280 |
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want to go and call Ali, what did you do when you |
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942 |
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01:03:43,280 --> 01:03:45,060 |
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when you wrote this poem? What did you change in |
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943 |
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01:03:45,060 --> 01:03:47,150 |
|
your life? I don't care about this. But this is |
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944 |
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01:03:47,150 --> 01:03:49,970 |
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because even evidence number two is still |
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945 |
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01:03:49,970 --> 01:03:52,430 |
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something around the text, writing the poem |
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946 |
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01:03:52,430 --> 01:03:54,670 |
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itself. When you say, for example, "I take this as |
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947 |
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01:03:54,670 --> 01:03:57,430 |
|
evidence," this is what I'm saying. So if I ask you |
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948 |
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01:03:57,430 --> 01:03:59,510 |
|
a question in your exam, "Is Ali Ibn Umar going to |
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949 |
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01:03:59,510 --> 01:04:02,290 |
|
change," give evidence from the text? You could |
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950 |
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01:04:02,290 --> 01:04:05,290 |
|
say, "I think he's going to change because the very |
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951 |
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01:04:05,290 --> 01:04:09,010 |
|
act of writing the poem is evidence of change," |
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952 |
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01:04:09,130 --> 01:04:14,930 |
|
writing, speaking, releasing the thoughts. Someone |
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953 |
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01:04:14,930 --> 01:04:19,010 |
|
else might say, "Yes, because in the text he uses the |
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954 |
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01:04:19,010 --> 01:04:22,410 |
|
word 'regrets,' and 'regrets' is plural. So he's not |
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955 |
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01:04:22,410 --> 01:04:24,850 |
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regretting one thing, he's regretting many things." |
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956 |
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01:04:26,410 --> 01:04:30,550 |
|
In the text he uses the past simple tense: "I never |
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957 |
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01:04:30,550 --> 01:04:34,930 |
|
felled," and then there were other verbs: "felled," |
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958 |
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01:04:34,950 --> 01:04:38,530 |
|
"clothed," "couldn't." The use of the past simple |
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959 |
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01:04:38,530 --> 01:04:41,130 |
|
tense here indicates this is evidence; textual |
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960 |
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01:04:41,130 --> 01:04:44,970 |
|
evidence indicates something that happened in the |
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961 |
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01:04:44,970 --> 01:04:48,690 |
|
past, and there's a promise here that this will |
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962 |
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01:04:48,690 --> 01:04:54,450 |
|
not happen again. For next class, ladies and gentlemen, |
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963 |
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01:04:55,610 --> 01:04:58,290 |
|
we're going to examine Tamim El Barghouti's poem, |
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964 |
|
01:04:58,290 --> 01:05:01,390 |
|
part, only just the first part of it. Again, this |
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965 |
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01:05:01,390 --> 01:05:04,570 |
|
is in Arabic, I know. We'll comment on it in |
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966 |
|
01:05:04,570 --> 01:05:08,050 |
|
English, but we'll study the Arabic text and see |
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967 |
|
01:05:08,050 --> 01:05:11,950 |
|
how everything we said so far can be applied to |
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|
968 |
|
01:05:11,950 --> 01:05:17,290 |
|
this poem. If you have a question, something to |
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969 |
|
01:05:17,290 --> 01:05:25,480 |
|
say, please go on. to the definition of OG. I |
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970 |
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01:05:25,480 --> 01:05:32,900 |
|
think that OG is, can always amaze us and attract |
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|
971 |
|
01:05:32,900 --> 01:05:37,860 |
|
us. It's so hard to touch us deeply until it |
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|
972 |
|
01:05:37,860 --> 01:05:40,560 |
|
reflects us, until we see ourselves in the oil, |
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|
973 |
|
01:05:40,940 --> 01:05:45,000 |
|
until we feel like it talks about us. But the pros |
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974 |
|
01:05:45,000 --> 01:05:48,540 |
|
of short stories can easily affect us because the |
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975 |
|
01:05:48,540 --> 01:05:51,740 |
|
author has the chance to explain, |
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|
976 |
|
01:05:54,300 --> 01:05:57,280 |
|
Okay, so you're saying in poetry you have to have |
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|
977 |
|
01:05:57,280 --> 01:06:02,980 |
|
this moment of identifying with the text, which is |
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|
978 |
|
01:06:02,980 --> 01:06:06,660 |
|
a challenge, but in prose, in novels, we find this |
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|
979 |
|
01:06:06,660 --> 01:06:12,640 |
|
all the time, basically. This is |
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|
980 |
|
01:06:12,640 --> 01:06:13,880 |
|
for you and about you. |
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|
981 |
|
01:06:20,280 --> 01:06:23,740 |
|
That's so true. But also, sometimes we still like |
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|
982 |
|
01:06:23,740 --> 01:06:27,160 |
|
and identify with texts because as human beings we |
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|
983 |
|
01:06:27,160 --> 01:06:30,020 |
|
identify with people around the world. The |
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|
984 |
|
01:06:30,020 --> 01:06:32,100 |
|
struggle of Black people in America, the struggle |
|
|
|
985 |
|
01:06:32,100 --> 01:06:35,000 |
|
of South Africans against apartheid. |
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|
986 |
|
01:06:37,990 --> 01:06:40,170 |
|
Okay, yeah, I see your point. I see your |
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|
987 |
|
01:06:40,170 --> 01:06:42,910 |
|
point. Thank you very much. I will stop here and |
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|
988 |
|
01:06:42,910 --> 01:06:43,990 |
|
see you next time, inshallah. |
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