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Assalamualaikum and welcome back to English
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poetry. Before I begin today talking about
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Shakespeare's Sonnet 18, let's have two of your
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classmates here talk about Palestinian features,
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poetry, poem, and then we'll have Noha talk about,
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recite one of her parodies. Come here, please. Go
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on. Since poetry is a language of expressing the
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feelings. So it is the perfect way for the writers
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or the Palestinian writers to write about their
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anger and desire of making their land free. So
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today I'm going to talk about one feature of the
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Palestinian poetry or literature. What I searched,
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I have many features, but what I want to talk
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about is the illusion. illusion of using people
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that represent the deep history of the city as a
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Palestinian and Arab and Muslim city. So the line
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is, or the lines.
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This is
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an allusion for the king. who was the king of a
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Maghloub country, which was containing of Egypt
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and Levant. So this king and this great leader of
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the Muslim armies,
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he was At the first of his life, he was just a
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poor little slave who was just bought and sold and
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bought and sold. And once he was bought to a
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prince. And this prince just rejected him because
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of a defect in his eye. There was like a blue or a
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white point in his eye. So he was rejected, and he
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sent him back to that trader.
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But Salih Ayyub put him and him then he was like
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He was admired and he liked this little boy. And
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then when he grew up, he made him free and made
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him a prince. And then he became the king. So this
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is an illusion. So that makes us to think about
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the deep and long history of Jerusalem as an Arab
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country. So we have history and deep, deep history
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to think about it. So that is my point. OK. Thank
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you very much. Invoking the past, alluding to
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people from the past Seems to be one feature of
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Palestinian poetry I really wish that more of you
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would be talking about more features But تأتى
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الرياح بما لا تشتهى الصفنة Let's see Nuha here
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talk about recite her parody Go on, please Okay,
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so we all know Sir Thomas White's poem or sonnet,
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let's say, Who Saw Less to Hunt. Today I'll try to
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modernize it a little bit. Okay, let's hear it.
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Who saw less to laugh? I know where is a mean. But
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for me, alas, I may know more. The vain laughter
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hath wear'd me so sore. I am of them that laugh
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their heart and scream. Yet may I by no means in
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my weird dream While trying to my vain heart to
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find a cure, I pause. Hands tied, friends, and
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laughter takes the floor, and in calamity I find
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myself no more. Who's so less to laugh, irritated
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they might seem? were left by someone who they
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abhor with two blue ticks screaming scene. Smelly
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cat can cure them for sure. Poor Yunagi taught me
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to be cautious though I might seem inspired yet I
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am humorous. Thank you. Okay, nice. Nice
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connection between friends on their 25th
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anniversary and an ancient poem. Okay ladies,
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we'll go here to Shakespeare and Sonnet 18.
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I know some of you don't feel comfortable with
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Shakespeare. I don't think this is normal, but
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it's your choice, it's your opinion. I don't want
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to force you to like Shakespeare or not like
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Shakespeare, but let's see his poetry, his
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writing. We'll study two of Shakespeare's sonnets,
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and at least if you will still Not like
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Shakespeare. Let's appreciate him a little bit.
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Let's see what he did and how he did what he did.
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Because what Shakespeare did is unprecedented.
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Shakespeare wrote 140 sonnets. In addition to the
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sonnets in the plays, in the 37 give or take plays
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he already wrote. Shakespeare is said to be one of
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the greatest figures of humanity, human
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civilization. He's said to be the greatest poet of
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all times. Some people might agree or disagree
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here, but undoubtedly many, many people. I
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assigned other classes to go ask their family
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members, their parents, if they ever heard of
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Shakespeare. And the answer was mostly yes. How?
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We don't know, nobody knows. Even some illiterate
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people I've heard of Shakespeare. And this in
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itself is fascinating, this man from a small town
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in the UK. Shakespeare's works have been adapted
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and adopted and appropriated and acted all over
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the world. His works, his sonnets and plays have
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been translated into almost every language on
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earth. And I usually quote one critic who wanted
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to show how great Shakespeare is by saying that at
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any time of the day, there is somebody out there
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talking about Hamlet, thinking about Hamlet,
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researching Hamlet, reading Hamlet, watching
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Hamlet, reciting Hamlet, salallahu alayhi wa
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sallam, acquiescing Hamlet, appropriating Hamlet,
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cursing Hamlet, researching Hamlet, rehearsing
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Hamlet, acting Hamlet, producing Hamlet. And
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that's only Hamlet, one play. According to Harold
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Bloom, the American critic, a fascinating man, he
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has a book called Shakespeare and the invention of
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humanity or human being. And this is this guy,
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like he loves Shakespeare to insanity and back.
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Not because of who he, like the man, but what he
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did. And he claims that we live in the shadow of
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Shakespeare. At least in Western civilization,
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people live in the shadow of Shakespeare and his
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characters and his poetry. And he says the most
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quoted man in Western civilization, Christian Dom,
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is Jesus Christ. And the second most quoted person
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is Hamlet, and Hamlet is? a fictional character,
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meaning probably Shakespeare is more quoted than
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Jesus Christ. Anyway, we'll talk about his poetry
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today, but before we do so, I want to ask you a
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question. Do you think great people, like people
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we consider great nowadays, like Arab poets, El
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Motenabbi and Antara, English poets and dramatists
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like Shakespeare, John Donne, Marlow, Samuel
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Johnson, Dryden, Ben Johnson, Milton, do you think
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those people realized how great they were? Do you
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feel that when great people did great things in
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all forms, walks of life, literature, art,
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science, did they feel that they were great, that
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they will be great one day? What do you think?
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Please.
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Okay. So when you read Shakespeare, you see the
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confidence that could tell that he at least knew
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something, that he's not an ordinary person. Yeah.
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Actually, he was appreciated, but compared to now,
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it was nothing. It doesn't mean they disliked him.
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He had bestsellers, like so many of his plays were
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performed again and again and again and again. And
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we're talking about London with small number of
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population compared to what we have today. But
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yeah, definitely. Some people hated Shakespeare.
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You know, rivalry, people doing the same thing at
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the same time, some critics. What's that? Yeah,
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there's that TV show, Startup Crow. That is
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fantastic. Sorry? The thing
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is that everybody, every successful person would
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have people to hate him, to hate his guts. But the
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point is this could be part of the fuel, part of
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how you become who you are. I think that most of
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the people, most of the great people do not really
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recognize how great they are at a length until
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after their death, after people come centuries
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later and realize what great deal their act did in
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future. Because like we said before that most of
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the Romantic poets were not really famous at their
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age and people considered them some kind of like
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the revolutionary act was not really something.
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The mainstream, yeah. Yeah, exactly. And another
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thing, talking about like the confidence and maybe
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Shakespeare's problem, I believe that this is the
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persona talking, not Shakespeare himself. Maybe
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like this is my own point of view. Okay, so tastes
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change, trends change, people change, and this is
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how life works. What people like today might not
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be liked in the future and vice versa. We'll see
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with John Donne, he for like 200 years, he was
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almost forgotten. For a reason or another we're
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going to understand this. But definitely I think
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we will find something, some traces, some evidence
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in Shakespeare where he is looking into the future
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and declaring that he will live forever and ever.
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In many of his sonnets actually because it's a
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main theme in his sonnets.
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Okay so this is sonnet number 18 and I already
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revealed the secret that this is a sonnet and
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which is not a secret because we can all count
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until 14.
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Now the sonnets most poems in the past did not
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have titles by the way even Arabic poetry most of
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the titles we see we use are used by later critics
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or sometimes they're given the sonnets are usually
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given numbers and sometimes we use the first line
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or part of it to name the sonnet so this is sonnet
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18 or shall I compare thee or shall I compare thee
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to a summer's day Now, we already spoke about one
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major category of the sonnet, which is the Italian
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sonnet by Petrarch.
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We spoke about the theme being love, basically
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Godly love. The form being octave.
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plus Sestet, eight lines, six lines. The rhyme
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scheme being A,
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B, B, A, A, B, B, A and C, D, C, D, C, D, C, D, E,
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C, D, E. A variety of Sestets. Let's see
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Shakespeare. Somebody please read. Yeah.
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Don't eat any of the syllables here. I know you're
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hungry maybe.
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Rough winds do shake a dawning course of May, and
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summer's leaves are old to short the days.
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Sometimes, too hot, the eyes of heaven shine, and
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often is this bold conviction dimmed, and every
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fair or fair sometimes blinds, by chance or
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natural changing course untrimmed. But the eternal
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summer's
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Thank you. One more, please.
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Could you speak up? Speak up. Shall I compare thee
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to a summer's day, Thou art more lovely and more
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true-faith? Thou.
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Thou art more lovely and more true-faith, From
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winds do shake the longing buds to faith, That
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summer's beasts have all to show today, Some time
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to hut the eyes with which it shines, and open is
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his goal from reaching them. And if we fail to
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take some time to rise by chance or nature's
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changing course and trend, but thy eternal summer
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shall not fade from Louis' position of that field
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thou ow'st. Thou shalt not drag thy wonders in his
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shade when in eternal life thy love grows. So long
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as men can feel what eyes can see, so long lives
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this Okay, thank you. One more, finally. Shall I
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compare thee to a summer's day? Up. Shall I just
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speak up? Okay. Shall I compare thee to a summer's
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day, thou art more lovely and more temperate?
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Rough winds do shake the darling once of May, and
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summer's lease has grown too short a date.
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Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines, and
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often is his gold complexion dimmed, and every
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fear for fear sometimes declines, by chance or
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nature changing course and trim. But thy eternal
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summer shall not fade, nor lose position of that
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fear thou ow'st, nor shall death grab thou
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wondrous in his chain, when an eternal blind time
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thou grow'st. So long as men can breathe or eyes
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can see, so long lives this, Okay, thank you very
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much. Now, before I attempt to recite it, what do
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you notice about the text? Did you hear different
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readings? Yes. The syllables? Yes. And the, like,
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what did you notice, for example? Yes, and the
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unstressed lines. Can you compare, like, who read
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what? I read him and not read, like, the, I am
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purple.
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But you didn't notice differences like somebody
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read always, somebody said host, somebody said
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gross, somebody said gross, somebody said
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temperate, somebody said temperate, somebody said
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temperate. It all makes a difference here because
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when we talk about a sonnet It's not only 14
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lines, quatrain, quatrain, quatrain, couplet or
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octave, sextet, etc. We'll see how in the sonnet,
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Shakespearean sonnet particularly, the number of
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syllables are also counted because we'll find 10
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syllables each.
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154 sonnets, that's basically more than 2000 lines
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And almost all of them have 10 syllables Can you
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count the syllables, somebody? Can you help me
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count the syllables, please? No, okay, so how do
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you count the syllables? How do you know how many
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syllables there are, please?
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Thank you very much. Every vowel sound, we're
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talking about sounds rather than letters. The same
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with the rhyme scheme, the rhyme. We care about
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the sound rather than the... Every vowel sound is
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a syllable. So... How
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many?
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Okay, number two, please. How many in temperate?
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You said temperate. You gave it two syllables. Two
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syllables means this is nine. This is nine. So,
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how many syllables in this word? Temperate.
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Temperate. With dashwa still temperate. Okay. So
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still ten. And with lovely, we don't say lovely.
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Lovely. Because the stress is on the root. Lovely.
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Two syllables. What about this E? We don't say it.
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We don't pronounce it. And then number three,
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please. When you say the darling word of So, if
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you count, we don't have all the time in the world
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to count, you'll realize that each line has 10
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syllables.
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Meaning? Five feet.
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In English, not all feet consist of two syllables,
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but most feet, especially the iambic pentameter,
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we have two syllables, one foot. Foot in Arabic
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means تفعيلة And the foot consists of two
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syllables, basically syllables, sometimes three
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syllables, but here it's two syllables And it's
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called iambic because the first one is unstressed,
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like this This is like the U in unstressed, and
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this is like a stressed syllable. And this goes
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like 90% of the time.
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art
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more lovely and more dear to them, to them, to
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them, to them. But it's not a perfect scansion
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sometimes. And why Shakespeare deviates is also a
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matter of question. Now, I want somebody to,
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again, tell me what other things you notice in the
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text. Please. Okay, let's do the rhyme scheme. I
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want somebody to come here to do the rhyme scheme.
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Somebody, the rhyme scheme. Do you know how to do
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the rhyme scheme? You should know how to do the
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rhyme scheme. You should always, when you comment
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on a poem, do the rhyme scheme. And this is tip
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number one. And then after that, I want you to
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connect the rhyme scheme with the structure
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itself. Could you come here please? You want to
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come here? Yes.
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So, the first sound is A, so we give it A. Right?
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This is how you do it. Okay.
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Okay. Wait, wait a minute. Tell us why. Why do we
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have the A? Is it because the line ends in A? Look
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at them and explain why, why did you go for A? Why
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not B, C, D? I like, I like Z. It's a beautiful
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sound. It looks like this. Why A?
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Okay, so the first line is always given A, but
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still why? Where did you get it from? What's your
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name? Okay, there's no A in Nisrine, so why didn't
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you go for N? It's a more beautiful letter than A.
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Why A? Where did you get it from? Okay, after A,
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where do you usually go? D, X, Y, Z?
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Y? Where did you get A, B from?
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That's it from the alphabet. So day, not because
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the sound is a, but always the first sound, the
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first rhyme in any poem is a, we take it from the
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alphabet. And then what happens next? So day and
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then temperate. Are they the same? Wait a minute.
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If they are the same, We give it again A and
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there's no problem in repeating the sound, but
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temperate, we usually focus on the vowel sound,
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the last sound or two sounds sometimes. So
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temperate is not like day, but May is like day. So
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we give it the same letter already. A B and then
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date.
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Are you sure? Are you, wait, are you sure? No, no,
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no. Are you sure that this is B?
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Don't look at me, look at the here and try to read
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it.
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Why did you write B? Why not C? Why not D? Why not
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E? Why not A?
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Okay, A, B, A, B. No, the alphabet is not A, B, A,
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B. A, B, C. So you're going for A and then because
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the sound is different, you go for B and then
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because this sound repeats this sound, you go for
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B. Exactly. Exactly. Okay. I know you're having
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the stage fright, but this is not okay. So A B A
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B. Thank you very much. Somebody else come here
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please.
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Okay.
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Do the second part.
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Wait, wait a minute because it ends with the S
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letter.
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But I think I want to add A, it's more beautiful
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than C. Different from what? Thank you very much.
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So we have already two different rhymes may day
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and may a a temperate and date b b and then we
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have shines totally different we go to the
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alphabet a b c listen whatever poem you scan like
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you read for uh the rhyme scheme make sure at the
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end that the the letters read in the order they
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are in the alphabet if you jump a letter you're
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doing it wrong If you skip a letter, you're doing
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it wrong. If you miss a letter, you're doing it
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wrong. So at the end of the day, it's like if you
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have A, B, if you have a new sound, you don't go
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for E, go for C because it comes after B. Okay, so
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C.
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What's that? What's the word? Dim. Dimmed. D. The
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word declines, same as shines. Very good. So we
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give it C. Untrimmed. Untrimmed.
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Very good, thank you. Someone else? One more?
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Please, come here. Now, some might insist that
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dimmed, untrimmed, fade, there is a lot of
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similarity here, true. But we understand that this
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is Shakespeare. So some, some people might want to
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repeat that DD here with fade shade, not because
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it ends with a D sound, but because there's a
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similarity. But actually with the vowel sound aid,
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a little bit different, like 50% at least
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different from dimmed and untrimmed. So we go for,
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okay.
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A E.
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Okay, so E, F, E, F, thank you. Finally, somebody?
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What would you do? Finally, what letter are we at?
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Okay, with Shakespeare, you should always get to
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GG. I don't know who she is. But you should go
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there, GG. If you're doing a rhyme scheme in
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Shakespeare and you don't get to GG, you're most
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definitely doing a wrong job. So it's AB, AB, CD,
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CD, EF, EF, GG. We notice two things here. Number
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one, this is different from Petrarch. Not just
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different, almost totally different from Petrarch.
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And this is what we call alternating rhyme.
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Shakespeare doesn't repeat it more than, the same
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sound doesn't repeat it more than twice. And this
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is more difficult than this. This is more rigid
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than Petrarch because Petrarch goes for A, B, B, A
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and mirrors it yet again, A, B, B, A. Shakespeare,
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A, B, A, B, thank you, next. C, D, C, D, thank
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you. Next E, F, E, F and finally the beautiful
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couplet at the end. The rhyming couplet at the
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end. Now when it comes to reading this or dividing
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it into parts, we realize that we have four lines,
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four lines and then four lines and then two lines.
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Meaning this is different from from Petrarch. So
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number one the rhyme scheme is A B A B C D C D E F
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E F G G not G G G G Okay, and then number two it
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consists of three quatrains And a quatrain, it's
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like from quarter, quarter, quarter past nine or
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something. It's one of four parts of something. So
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we know now a couplet means two lines, a triplet
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three lines, a quatrain four lines, a sextet six
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lines, an octave eight lines plus one couplet.
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Interesting.
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We've seen the couplet before, but let's see who
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does it better. Now when we read the poem,
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To examine other things, the sounds, let's see if
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the theme matches. Different rhyme scheme,
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different structure. I think this is deliberate.
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This is somebody deliberately planning, wanting to
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be different from others, to be unique, to be
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himself, to be Shakespeare. So, shall I compare
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thee to a summer's day, thou art more lovely and
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more temperate. Listen. The dictionary here,
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Oxford dictionary says temperate. Okay. Not
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temperate. Some of you said temperate to make it
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perfectly rhyme with date.
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And in these cases, some people might insist that
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perhaps during the time of Shakespeare could have
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been pronounced temperate as well. Some people
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might say, let's give it a poetic license and make
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it more musical. And others might say, no, keep it
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as it is. Because perhaps there's something here.
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Because if you go for temperate, the rhyme scheme
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here could be imperfect. Temperate and date. See,
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different scenarios. Whatever scenario you like,
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it's correct. But I want you to think about it.
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Sorry? Oh, possible. This, yeah, thank you very
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much. Should be the first one is usually the fixed
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thing. But I did it this way because the problem
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is with temperate, whether it is temperate or
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temperate.So thou art more lovely and more
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temperate Rough winds do shake the darling buds of
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May And summer's lease hath all too short a date
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines And
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often is his gold complexion dimmed And every fair
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from fair sometime declines By chance on nature's
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changing course untrimmed But thy eternal summer
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shall not fade, nor lose possession of that fear
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thou ow'st, nor shall death brag thou wander'st in
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his shade, when in eternal lines to time thou
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grow'st. So long as men can breathe or eyes can
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see, so long lives this and this gives life to
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thee. If you try to listen to this on YouTube,
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you'll find that some people say Owest. By the
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way, this is O. Meaning on. And this is grow. And
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this is wonder. But in the past, remember we said
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with he, she and it, they used to add TH instead
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of the S we do today for the third person pronoun.
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So Samar has.
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and again some people say I give it two syllables
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honestly I don't know why I want could someone
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please investigate why some people insist on
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saying always giving it an extra syllable and by
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the way with the extra syllable you break the
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music here you get this ends up with with 11
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syllables I couldn't find an answer so if you
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could investigate this that would be great So I
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would insist on ost, ost and grossed sticking to
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the ten syllables. So again, what's the ST here?
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This is for you or thou in the past. They would
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add T or ST sometimes. This is not for the
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superlative form of the verb. of the adjective,
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sorry, because the verbs cannot be in the
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superlative form. Thankfully, this infliction was
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dropped. We don't have this any longer these days.
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Thank God.
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Now, look at the beginning of the poem. Smooth,
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beautiful, and sweet. Because of so many things.
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Number one, the sound itself. Shall I? It's sweet.
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It's poetic. Shall I? That's sadly not many people
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use shall I these days. In spoken English, shall I
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is basically like you use shall I to offer
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somebody. Shall I help you? Shall I? People these
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days are more into can I, may I is very polite,
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but can I, can I help you? Can I help you? And I
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think the sound shall I is more poetic, sweeter
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than could I, can I. And also the question form
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here, this is a kind of a rhetorical question, a
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self-answering question. He doesn't say, and this
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is beautiful from Shakespeare, he didn't say, I
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will compare thee to a summer's day. If he does
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this, it gives him more authority. makes him look
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like an authoritarian figure somebody who's giving
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commands and orders to somebody he wants and
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because he doesn't want this somebody and again
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there's a huge discussion on who this somebody is
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the recipient of the sonnets some people say some
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of them were sent to his patron the man who
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supported him socially and politically the Earl of
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Southampton I guess And some people try to add
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this discussion whether this was a man-man love
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relationship. And some of the poems were written
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for a woman nobody knows because Shakespeare
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married an older woman and probably he was in
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love, he was in London, the family was back home.
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And some people say probably all these sonnets
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were written to a fictional lady or a real lady
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they describe as the mysterious dark lady. We
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don't care. We care about the text, but I take it
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for granted as like I take it personally as a text
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written for a woman. So at the beginning he wants
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to, you know, And this is different from who
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solicits to hunt. Somebody giving up. This is a
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man doing his best to make the woman love him,
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think highly of him. Shall I compare thee to a
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summer's day? And he does it again by the question
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form, the rhetorical question. He's not giving
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orders. He's kind of asking, taking permission.
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And then the sound of shall I is beautiful and
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sweet. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day. And
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look at the differences in cultures. As Arabs, if
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this is somebody in Saudi Arabia or Kuwait sending
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this poem to his beloved, telling her shall I
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compare thee to a summer's day, he hates her.
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Summer is different. And again, this is one of the
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dilemmas that encounters translators. If you're
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translating this, what would you say in Arabic?
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Can you give it a try? Probably if you have time,
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try to translate it into Arabic and see how would
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you stick to everything? Would you try to manage
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some of the ideas there? The answer is, of course,
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there's nobody giving permission. If you imagine
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the woman being there and nodding or saying yes,
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but he's kicking her out and erasing her from the
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text, okay, but you could say that he's just
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asking and answering because this is a man taking
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for granted everything, especially women. Thou
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art. Thou art here. Again, you are. So this is not
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art and literature. This is art meaning are. Why
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the T? Because of that. Get used to this. Thou art
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more lovely and more temperate. You're more
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beautiful than a summer's day, than a beautiful
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day of the summer. And this is really sweet. And
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suddenly, from this kind of sweetness, Something
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changes. Look at the way he begins line three.
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? The what
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more lovely and more timid. Rough winds do shake
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the darling buds of May. Everything changes here
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because he wants to say that life is tough.
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Sometimes summer is not good. It's not as
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beautiful as some might think. So it changes the
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sounds here. Shall These are sweet sounds. Changes
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to da, da, ba, ba, shake, do. Sounds like making
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trouble, echoing the sound probably of the winds.
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And they're not ordinary winds. By the way, he
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could have said the winds. The winds. That's it.
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The winds. But this is rough winds. Again, do,
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shake. Why do? Why would you say I did see him?
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Thank you very much.
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Okay. Okay. So without do, we will miss one
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syllable. So Shakespeare is again killing, so to
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speak, two birds with one stone. So do adds, but
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this is Shakespeare, he can find a way. And again,
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he emphasizes this, do shake, rough wins do shake,
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even though the way you read it is tough. He adds
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toughness, the fah sound, rough. Winds do shake
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the darling buds of May, the beautiful small
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budding flowers of May, and summer's lease hath
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all too short a date. Summer is too short
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sometimes. When it is beautiful and there's no
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wind or storms, it's short. Lease here means
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period. It doesn't last forever. This is the first
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idea. Look at how I don't know, there's some kind
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of like Shakespeare's indicating that everybody,
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everything is not, doesn't last forever. We're all
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going to die. Every beautiful thing ends.
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Some are beautiful sometimes, but we have rough
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winds. And sometimes it's not short, too short.
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And in the second stanza, he does the same thing
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in other words. Sometimes too heaven, too hot, the
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eye of heaven. The eye of heaven is the sun. The
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eye of heaven, by the way, he could have said,
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please again, get used to Shakespeare because
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sometimes he goes like he takes the long shot,
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short cut like Rosanne did just now. Instead of
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saying the sun, he would say the eye of heaven.
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Some people don't like Shakespeare for this. But
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we should love Shakespeare for this.
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Yeah. So like, look at how different it's going to
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be. Again and again, this is poetry. In poetry,
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the basic element of poetry is the metaphor,
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saying things in other words, not going literally.
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So the eye of heaven shines. Sometimes the sun is
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too hot and often is his. So his here is a
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reference to the sun, by the way. The sun in
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English is male. In Arabic, it's female. His gold
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complexion, you know, dimmed. Sometimes it's
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covered by the clouds. So it gets dark. And I
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think this is one of the most beautiful lines
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ever. And every fair from fair sometimes declines.
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Look at the repetition of the F. And also you can
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add to them the V. It still reminds us of the
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rough winds. But this is somebody who is really
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frustrated, somebody who's annoyed, somebody who's
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not happy with what's going on, with how time
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changes, how beauty never lasts. This is called an
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alliteration, the repetition of the same sound.
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Yes, it adds music, makes it musical, but please
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always go for the purpose and link this with the
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tone, the atmosphere. In my opinion, the F sound
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indicates somebody who is sad, desperate for hope,
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for change, for something better, for something
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everlasting. Annoyed, frustrated, angry. You know,
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like why always me? Why do good things? die out,
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fade, decline and every fair from fair sometime
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declines and please this is not sometimes, this is
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not sometimes. Both of them are sometimes
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different, a little bit different from sometimes.
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At a particular time, they will decline. Why?
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Because of chance or nature. By chance, fate or
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nature's course. Course means like track of
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course, okay? It doesn't mean a course like this
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course. And nature's course, nature's life moving
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on, forward, untrimmed. Basically this is a
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repetition of the first one in other words, in
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more creative ways. And the message here is that
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everybody dies, everything declines, every beauty
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just fades away. And when we are this close to
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giving up, he's saying we're doomed, we're all
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going to die, nothing lasts forever. He twists the
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argument a little bit, giving us a rope, a ray of
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hope to cling to. And I love the use of but here.
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Yeah, there's but. So if we're like, oh, yeah, I
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see what you mean, Shakespeare. We are all doomed.
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We're all going to die. But comes like a wake up
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call here. But thy, and this is again thy meaning,
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your, thy eternal summer shall not fade. The
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summer I'm talking about is more beautiful, more
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lovely, more temperate than the ordinary summer
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here because your summer is eternal. Your eternal
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summer shall not end. Your summer will remain
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forever. Nor lose, you will not lose position of
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that year. You will not lose your beauty, your
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fairness that you own. Nor shall death brag. Can
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or does death brag? What's brag? Boast or show
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off, you know, express pride. Who usually brags
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about things? A human being, a person, a man, a
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woman. So he's talking about death. By the way, in
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some poems online, you'll find it death with a
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capital D. Sometimes it makes a little bit of a
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difference. Or small d. I like to go for a small
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letter here. Because he's treating death, the
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grand leveler, the mighty, Think as a human being,
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and this is Shakespeare putting death in its
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place. Probably declaring that he is bigger than
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death itself. He's personifying death as somebody
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who cannot brag because of Shakespeare, because of
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what Shakespeare does. Nor shall death brag thou
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wanderst in his shade. There is another his by the
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way here. So, so many men, so few women. His
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refers to death, personifying death. This his
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refers to the sun, the eye of heaven. Again,
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Shakespeare means here, you will not die. This
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means you will not die. But you and you and me, we
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say you will not die. But Shakespeare doesn't say
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it this way most often. Death shall not brag the
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wondrous in his shade. What? Say again
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Shakespeare, what do you mean? I mean, death shall
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not brag, but I don't know, death is not a human
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being. And then, oh yeah, you're going for the
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metaphor. And if you want to understand
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Shakespeare, try to always go beyond what the
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words say to the metaphor. And look at this, how
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beautiful this is.
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Because we still, why the shift? We don't
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understand. You just said that we are all going to
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die and then you're saying you're not going to
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die. And then he goes for if. But he doesn't say
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if because it makes a difference. If is still
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conditional, uncertain. But this is Shakespeare,
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he's proud, he's certain. He knows he's going to
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win this woman. So he says win for more certainty.
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Win in eternal lines. The eternal lines, the line,
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not lines, people queuing here, the line of verse,
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my poetry. Win in eternal lines to time thou
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grows. And again I like the word grow. It's not
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live. If we wrote a poem here, we could, and live
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is also a perfect word. Shakespeare can easily
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find a word that would rhyme with live. But live
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again is live. Growing is living and getting
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bigger and more famous and everywhere. It's a
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perfect choice.
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When in eternal line, lines to time thou growest.
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When you live in my lines, when you come to me,
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when you like me back. When you agree to be my
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whatever.
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And then he goes for the perfect, perfect couplet.
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You will not find a more beautiful couplet than
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this. So long as men can breathe or eyes can see.
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So long lives this. This is the sonnet. His
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poetry. And this gives life to thee. Ending it
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with a hopeful tone. How there's destruction here,
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yeah? Destructiveness. Beauty is transient. Time
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kills all. Nature, rough winds, too hot, too
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short, too windy. Don't worry. When in eternal
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lines to time thou growth, So long lives this and
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this gives life to thee. And I love how
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Shakespeare is delaying
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the condition until the last line of the third
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quadrant that has the twist here. Like there was
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this talk about last week the differences between
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sometimes parents and like parents like mothers
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and fathers and usually we came to the conclusion
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that usually mothers give the result first like
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you will be good you will do this you will succeed
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I will give you I'll buy you I'll cook you I'll
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you know if But the fathers usually go for the
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condition first. So if you do this, when you do
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this, I'll give you. This will happen. Here
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Shakespeare is again being more tactful, more
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poetic. He's giving, he's tempting here. You'll
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have this and this and this. You will live
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forever. You will grow. when you live in my lines
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if I make you live in my lines and again the the
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win here is for certainty and then Shakespeare
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again ends with this beautiful beautiful couplet
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so long as men can breathe or eyes can see so long
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lives this and this gives life to thee possibly
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the most famous couplet of all times what is the
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theme in this sonnet in this poem love only love
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Mortality? Mortality or immortality? Okay, there
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is mortality, but then there is immortality, there
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is eternity. Time changing everything, please.
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Time?
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Time is a destructive power. Beauty, what about
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beauty? It gets destroyed by, but it can be
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preserved by something. What is this something?
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Poetry. Not any art by the way. This is
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Shakespeare's poetry. He knows, yes. He knows that
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he is going to live forever and ever and ever.
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Because this here, this sonnet, this poetry is
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going to live forever. Please. Death. Is he just
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basically talking about death or is he using death
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to personifying death to make a point?
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Now many people try to understand how Shakespeare
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came to terms with death. I read this article that
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says that Shakespeare was frustrated because he
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knew, he felt that he was a genius, unprecedented
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literary figure and intellectual and everything.
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And he always was like, why should I die? I
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shouldn't die. Not always, like you'll find this.
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There is this fear, despair. And sometimes they
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connect Hamlet with Shakespeare himself. The fact
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that Hamlet didn't want to take revenge was the
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tiny bit of possibility that he might get killed
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and he did not want to get killed at some point.
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So Shakespeare's obsession with death made
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him write so many things and indicate this in his
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poetry. How to outlive death. The result was
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through his poetry. Through his poetry, by
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writing. And in drama classes, when you study more
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about Shakespeare, this is a poetry class, you
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will, I think, come across the fact that
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Shakespeare himself gave up writing when he could
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have written more. And I think this is also one
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way of Shakespeare trying to conquer death. He
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wasn't just writing and involved in life and
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getting busy with the drama and the stage, and
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then all of a sudden he got ill and died quickly
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or slowly. He quit, he resigned, and he went back
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home just to, as if declaring, okay, I'm ready.
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Anytime, death, you're welcome. I don't care, I've
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done everything. I've conquered every corner of
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the globe. So thank you very much. You could say
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the theme is love, art, but not this art, okay?
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Poetry, destructiveness of time, Transience of
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beauty.
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Some people might claim that Shakespeare also
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changed the theme, but I don't think so because
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this is still a love poem, beautiful love poem. So
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we could compromise by saying Shakespeare expanded
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the theme, changed the form, and changed the rhyme
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scheme. Experimented on everything in the poem. He
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experimented on everything in the poem. expanded
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the theme, totally changed the rhyme scheme to a
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more, by the way, to a more difficult, more rigid
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form, which is the three quadrants and the
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couplet. Usually in Shakespeare, you'll find that
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the first 12 lines, they have the same problem,
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and again, the dilemma, and the complication, and
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the crisis, and then the resolution comes in two
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lines. But in this one, we kind of have a twist
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here early, a little bit early. The third,
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quatrain. Basically, yeah, foreshadowing what's to
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come. But the couplet itself in Shakespeare is
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genius. We almost want to give up in 12 lines.
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There's no way out. For the Petrarchan Sonnet, it
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takes six lines to get to the resolution, to give
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us some kind of a closure. But for Shakespeare,
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just two lines. Other people used the couplet in
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their sonnets, but not like what Shakespeare did
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here. A final point I want to highlight today is
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related to the meter of the poem. You know the
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meter? Al bahar, al wazn, music, the rhythm. So we
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say this is an iambic pentameter.
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Meaning like two syllables, one for unstressed and
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then stressed, okay?
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And then the pinta, pinta means five, so
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pentameter because there are five feet meaning ten
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syllables. I found this online, people trying to
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force the iambic pentameter on Shakespeare's
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Sonnet, and I don't think this is right, I think
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this is wrong. Giving it perfect rhyme, perfect
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theory, I am's. Unstressed, can you see that some
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of this is written in bold? Okay, so shall I
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compare thee to a summer's day, but okay, you
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don't read it this way. They say this is the
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natural English. By the way, almost 80 percent,
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this is something, a number I made up, of English
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poetry is iambic. Iambic tetrameter, iambic
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pentameter. So, shall I compare thee to a summer's
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daily going down and up, down and up. Thou art
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more lovely and more temperate. This is perfect.
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Raf wins. I don't like this because Raf is still a
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big word. So, let's see how to do this. So usually
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we go for, listen, the nouns, the verbs are almost
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always stressed. The functional words, the
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prepositions, the articles, the determiners are
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almost always, not always unstressed, unless the
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poet wants to highlight something or emphasize
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something. shall I this is I not an ordinary I
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basically generally it's not stress but this is
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shall I some people might say no this is
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unstressed and they want to go shall I compare
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shall I shall I shall I or shall I shall I compare
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the unstressed Two also unstressed, but some
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people would go for stress. Shall I compare the
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two of summer's day? So unstressed, okay,
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stressed, unstressed. Look at the nouns and the
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verbs. If they are long, more than one syllable.
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Then one is stressed and one is unstressed.
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Usually the er, you know, the ly, whatever you add
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to the word unstressed. De-stressed. So again,
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some people like to go for a perfect iambic here.
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Shall I compare thee to a samasdeh? It can be
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significant if you want to talk about how he...
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We'll see. Yeah, we'll see this in a bit. So going
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for I being stressed, they being unstressed. Who's
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more important here? The speaker, Shakespeare, the
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poet, the persona. And they, you still almost
841
00:58:40,190 --> 00:58:42,990
nothing, you are unstressed, unheard of.
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00:58:45,830 --> 00:58:49,230
But I can notice how we could still differ and
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still be friends. So if you insist that too,
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because it's a preposition, it's unstressed, okay,
845
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no worries. no hard feelings thou unstressed art
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possibly unstressed it could be also stressed more
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unstressed love stressed ly unstressed and
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unstressed more stressed unstressed here okay this
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is unstressed and could be stressed if you go for
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answers it's okay unstressed stressed unstressed
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stressed unstressed
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linked the you this thing with the unstressed okay
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00:59:44,620 --> 00:59:51,180
I
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like this I disagree with the guy who did
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unstressed stressed unstressed stressed here
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00:59:58,080 --> 01:00:00,540
remember he moved from the sweetness of the first
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01:00:00,540 --> 01:00:03,520
scene to the toughness and roughness so I think
858
01:00:03,520 --> 01:00:07,720
this is stressed stressed stressed stressed so the
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01:00:07,720 --> 01:00:11,600
way we read this should change rough winds like
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01:00:11,600 --> 01:00:15,860
even rough winds do shake because he's saying life
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01:00:15,860 --> 01:00:19,640
is tough life is difficult when he said this look
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01:00:19,640 --> 01:00:22,990
at what he did number one he used Even the words
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01:00:22,990 --> 01:00:25,570
in their meaning, the word rough is a tough word,
864
01:00:25,690 --> 01:00:31,750
right? How it sounds, rough, the ra sound, the fa
865
01:00:31,750 --> 01:00:35,650
like the winds. And also the meter itself is
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01:00:35,650 --> 01:00:37,970
connected. And I think this is deliberate. This is
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01:00:37,970 --> 01:00:41,810
Shakespeare. So rough winds do shake the darling
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01:00:41,810 --> 01:00:46,700
buds of May. And you could go on and on. I like
869
01:00:46,700 --> 01:00:50,400
this. I don't want you to be confused here. I'll
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01:00:50,400 --> 01:00:53,960
do it slowly. Like we're not going to focus on the
871
01:00:53,960 --> 01:00:56,600
whole poem, just the things to make points. So the
872
01:00:56,600 --> 01:00:59,880
point here is that the I is almost definitely
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01:00:59,880 --> 01:01:03,480
stressed. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
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01:01:04,520 --> 01:01:07,760
Where thee is unstressed. He's more important than
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01:01:07,760 --> 01:01:08,000
her.
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01:01:11,040 --> 01:01:14,760
And look at this, rough winds stressed stress to
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01:01:14,760 --> 01:01:16,740
indicate the toughness of life, the
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01:01:16,740 --> 01:01:20,320
destructiveness of life. How nature is destructive
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01:01:20,320 --> 01:01:26,240
to beauty. Do shake. For the sake of time, I'll
880
01:01:26,240 --> 01:01:35,340
jump to the last bit of the poem to
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01:01:35,340 --> 01:01:37,920
do the same. The first line in the couplet is
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01:01:37,920 --> 01:01:44,530
almost perfect. So long as men can breathe, all
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01:01:44,530 --> 01:01:49,410
eyes can see. It's perfect. Very musical.
884
01:01:53,230 --> 01:01:57,670
Many people sing this. Go to YouTube and see how
885
01:01:57,670 --> 01:02:02,130
beautiful it can be rendered into a song. So long
886
01:02:02,130 --> 01:02:07,170
as men can breathe, all eyes can see. Very
887
01:02:07,170 --> 01:02:10,220
musical. Long.
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01:02:13,300 --> 01:02:16,320
I think this is, levz is a verb, stressed. Some
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01:02:16,320 --> 01:02:18,640
people might want to insist that, no, stressed,
890
01:02:18,940 --> 01:02:20,780
unstressed, stressed, unstressed, stressed. A
891
01:02:20,780 --> 01:02:24,780
verb, it's a main verb. Should be stressed. And
892
01:02:24,780 --> 01:02:27,920
this could be unstressed, but this, he's saying
893
01:02:27,920 --> 01:02:34,040
this. So also there's an emphasis here on this, my
894
01:02:34,040 --> 01:02:39,330
poetry. Leave this unstressed stressed because of
895
01:02:39,330 --> 01:02:43,630
this again also stressed stressed because there's
896
01:02:43,630 --> 01:02:49,800
emphasis here unstressed and finally to thee you
897
01:02:49,800 --> 01:02:54,420
could read it with a falling down intonation here
898
01:02:54,420 --> 01:02:58,920
so long lives this and this gives life to thee or
899
01:02:58,920 --> 01:03:02,820
so long lives this and this gives life to thee and
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01:03:02,820 --> 01:03:05,180
I think this should be the more appropriate
901
01:03:05,180 --> 01:03:09,020
reading shifting from the woman being unstressed
902
01:03:09,020 --> 01:03:13,880
possibly unknown small
903
01:03:15,170 --> 01:03:19,630
almost nothing and turned into this stressed woman
904
01:03:19,630 --> 01:03:21,870
everybody around the world is talking about,
905
01:03:22,070 --> 01:03:26,730
growing and growing, eternal in His lines. with a
906
01:03:26,730 --> 01:03:29,170
stressed line. So I could ask you a question. Why
907
01:03:29,170 --> 01:03:32,310
did Shakespeare start with a stressed D, an
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01:03:32,310 --> 01:03:36,310
unstressed D and ended with a stressed D? Linking
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01:03:36,310 --> 01:03:38,810
the meter, this is something new to most of you,
910
01:03:39,130 --> 01:03:42,150
but we'll see how this can be developed. I'll give
911
01:03:42,150 --> 01:03:45,170
you maximum two minutes because again, we don't
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01:03:45,170 --> 01:03:48,510
have much time. So if you please be brief, Nadia.
913
01:03:49,250 --> 01:03:51,930
Because in the last line, it is him doing it. It's
914
01:03:51,930 --> 01:03:54,730
him making her motion. So it's part of make by
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01:03:54,730 --> 01:03:58,210
saying D in a A rising intonation. The rising
916
01:03:58,210 --> 01:04:01,230
intonation is like being proud of himself for what
917
01:04:01,230 --> 01:04:05,130
he did. I made you what you are. Look at it, if
918
01:04:05,130 --> 01:04:08,490
you don't do the meter thing, you couldn't feel
919
01:04:08,490 --> 01:04:12,970
this hidden beauty, the hidden treasures in
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01:04:12,970 --> 01:04:16,010
Shakespeare and other poetry. More, brief.
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01:04:23,950 --> 01:04:29,270
Possibly, yes. Possibly yes. Yeah, yeah, yeah,
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01:04:29,270 --> 01:04:31,710
sure. Listen, listen, this is the beauty of the
923
01:04:31,710 --> 01:04:34,250
meter. I know some of you like are intimidated by
924
01:04:34,250 --> 01:04:36,650
the meter and something, but there are so many
925
01:04:36,650 --> 01:04:39,250
varieties. It depends on how you read things. But
926
01:04:39,250 --> 01:04:44,030
logically, lives should be stressed and this
927
01:04:44,030 --> 01:04:47,030
shouldn't be stressed. But here he is. This is not
928
01:04:47,030 --> 01:04:50,330
an ordinary this. This is not this mobile or this
929
01:04:50,330 --> 01:04:54,830
thing I wrote. This is Shakespeare's writing. So
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01:04:54,830 --> 01:04:57,650
if you go for stressed unstressed, I would take
931
01:04:57,650 --> 01:05:00,690
it. If you go for unstressed stressed, I would
932
01:05:00,690 --> 01:05:03,450
take it. If you go for stressed, I like to go for
933
01:05:03,450 --> 01:05:06,130
stressed stressed. I wouldn't say no to you.
934
01:05:09,610 --> 01:05:13,830
Oh, it's not written in stone. Like some some
935
01:05:13,830 --> 01:05:17,790
people might argue like if this is live from life
936
01:05:17,790 --> 01:05:22,610
and he's saying this is emphasized while lives is
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01:05:22,610 --> 01:05:26,170
not. making the point that Shakespeare's poetry
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01:05:26,170 --> 01:05:31,310
outlives life, beats life, that's a perfect point.
939
01:05:32,790 --> 01:05:35,110
It's more important than life because it's going
940
01:05:35,110 --> 01:05:38,130
to outlive the transience of beauty and the
941
01:05:38,130 --> 01:05:41,850
destructiveness of time. One last point, please.
942
01:05:42,150 --> 01:05:43,610
Somebody? Kobo?
943
01:06:00,060 --> 01:06:04,520
Unless he or she is certain. That's a good point
944
01:06:04,520 --> 01:06:05,200
you're making there.
945
01:06:19,010 --> 01:06:22,130
But he knows that people will read. I think he
946
01:06:22,130 --> 01:06:25,630
kind of knows that. But that's a good point. Yeah,
947
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we make him great. Listen, this was probably a
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01:06:29,630 --> 01:06:32,170
sonnet written in a small town somewhere in the UK
949
01:06:32,170 --> 01:06:36,290
and now it's being read around the globe. We make
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01:06:37,230 --> 01:06:38,890
Like, you're making the point that we make
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01:06:38,890 --> 01:06:41,510
Shakespeare. I think there is an argument for
952
01:06:41,510 --> 01:06:43,930
that. Who is Shakespeare? Shakespeare is the
953
01:06:43,930 --> 01:06:45,370
person I want to see. Some of you don't like
954
01:06:45,370 --> 01:06:47,350
Shakespeare, some of you like him. But I hope that
955
01:06:47,350 --> 01:06:50,710
this negativity is changing a little bit here.
956
01:06:50,870 --> 01:06:53,250
It's like, wow, look at what this man is doing.
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I'll stop here. Next class, we have yet another
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sonnet by Shakespeare. Thank you very much.