College Essay Final Draft
I have not had much experience in life, but that is what motivates me. I want to attend a University to have a higher level of education than anyone else in my family. I want to have a better life and education can help my achieve that. I am determined to make a better life for myself and future family. I want to make my family proud of me. I appreciate everything that was given to me by my parents and they made that happen by having a good job. I want my little nephews and cousins to look up to me and realize that education is very important. This quality that I behold is why I am a perfect candidate for this University.

I believe you have to be determined in order to achieve your goal. Determination is a key to success. Everybody that wants something like a good future look at all possible outcome, but never give up because of their motivation. Many people in my life have shown a great example of determination. Even though my brother did not attend college he kept moving forward looking for a better job. He was determined in finding a better job to support himself and wife. He has a great job and all because he never gave up. This is why I believe that you need determination to attend college.

Many People with a goal in life have ambition to become the best they can. The ambition keeps people moving and striving for whatever it is that they want. My ambition never lets me give up, as difficult as it can be you have to be optimistic about the entire situation. Even though, your results can be disappointing, it will get better and easier as you practice. People with a master degree always have to keep their ambition in mind before making any decisions.
	
We all need some type of motivation in life to allow us to keep moving forward. Education is one major factor to becoming successful and will take you far in life, If you attend college that can assure you a better life for you and your family in the future. Many people have to be determined or have their mind set to further their education passed college.