Rate my first verse please
(intro)

This song is dedicated to the place who educated the once wrong  brain i once celebrated

(verse 1)
Fourth grade custody battle
Court made dad really hassle
To take me from the women
Who raised me ooh for nothen
But a  pay check
What a brain wreck
Living with dad
Nothing is glad
But I’ve had
It wit this fad
Switching from home to home
Wishing someone would own
Me up until I’m grown
The total of hate showns
Up due to love unknown
Dad hid from me as a kid
So my brain works the way a train jerks
When the trail gets de railed
Mom an dad is glad to bomb an add
Imperfections to my minds perception
Of each other
Are relationship is a war
I’m the battleship
Man soon this damn boat
Will be  un-afloat
Why teach my son
When I can
Make him into my puppet
Take him way through fucken shit
Turn him against who dispensed
Only condensed true kindness
We must keep his whole mindfenced
Before this whore
Uses him for more
Shit to use in court