I feel the sun is too bright and shines through the ice under the water. So the contrast of the ice above surface vs below surface gets kinda lost. It's beautiful...but I really need to see the contrast in size be vivid and in your face because that's really important to the point I'm making. The behaviors on the surface are usually connected to many, many, deeper feelings and emotions that we can't see. ,ugly, deformed, noisy, blurry, distorted, out of focus, bad anatomy, extra limbs, poorly drawn face, poorly drawn hands, missing fingers, nudity, nude