Weak girl, lack of confidence, dull armor, uninspiring sword, uncomfortable pose, plain background, lifeless expression, poorly lit, mismatched colors, unconvincing armor design, lack of detail, uninteresting composition, flat lighting, disproportionate features, clumsy linework, lack of depth, lack of storytelling, bland execution, lack of intensity, unrealistic proportions, artificial appearance, lack of texture, poorly defined facial features, unappealing color palette
