I've written my first SCP by the name of Amos Spacecraft (a communications satellite), and I'm looking for constructive criticism on it. I've read the "How to Write an SCP" guide, and I know that most first writers end up failing miserably, so I'm prepared for the worst. Please, though, do keep the criticism constructive. Thank you.
Moved this thread to General Advice and locking it since it's improperly made.
TheDoctorisHere, the Announcements forum is for threads that note site-wide news that involves either new language branch activity or mainsite staff announcements. Individual new articles and tales are grouped in their own collective threads.
Furthermore, criticism should be sought before a mainsite post, in the forums and/or IRC chat. Once something is posted to the mainsite, no one is obligated to give any more feedback than their vote. Anyone who does leave a comment is doing the author a favor, not fulfilling an expectation.