  == histories? ==  personally, as has been stated by others in this discussion, after reading this article needs some fairly extensive clean-up. also, adding a bunch of history to tie everything in, as well as elaborating on LDS scriptures (i.e. The Doctrine and Covenants), as well as explanations of LDS creation stories (such as the tribe of Israelites coming to America). Also include more about Jospeh Smith and Brigham Young, since they are both exceptionally important to understanding the LDS Church.