` ;Barcelona section *what does ``concretised`` mean? reword *``the most expensive transfer in Dutch football history`` same comment as per earlier (lead section) *``By coincidence Overmars made his debut for Barcelona against Arsenal`` how do we know it was a coincidence and not arranged as part of a transfer deal? *``He lasted no more than 45 minutes`` prose *``His performance in the match started off well, then faded before coming back in the second half, opined Andrés Astruells in El Mundo Deportivo.`` what does this add to the article? *link ``dribbling`` *``Barcelona reached the semi-final stage of the UEFA Cup in April 2001, but did not advance any further in the competition after defeat to Liverpool.`` bloated sentence *``Serra Ferrer was sacked a week after`` later *``As the season drew to a close, Overmars turned into an influential player for Barcelona. Sid Lowe labelled him as ``Barça's only decent player in recent weeks`` and was surprised he started on the bench against Real Valladolid in June 2001.`` POV, what does this section really add to the article? *``Petit left the club to join Chelsea before the season commenced, as he found his first team opportunities limited.`` had found *``did not play for Barcelona until a month after`` for a month *``Compared to the previous season, Overmars was used more sparingly in matches. Rexach had changed the team's formation to accommodate new signing Javier Saviola and promoted Xavi as a first-team regular.`` original research? *``the manager of Galatasaray complemented Overmars afterwards`` complimented *``He encouraged an expansive style of play and freshened up the team with minimal changes; for instance he switched Overmars from a left winger to a right one.`` prose, lack of focus *``Overmars teared a muscle`` grammar *There doesn't seem to be much relevant content for the 2003/04 season, focus is lacking *``give defender George Ogararu a tough time defending`` prose *``Overmars's comeback lasted only one season as his knee continued to give him discomfort.`` ref *Overmars's or Overmars'? Both are used in the article, one should be used for consistency. See Apostrophe#Possessive apostrophe.  ;International *Three paragraphs is awfully short for an 11-year international career. In particular I wonder about his representation of the under-21s, which is completely absent. *``steering the ball home`` prose *``manager of the Netherlands was complementary`` complimentary, again *``comeback for the Netherlands, who were 2–0 down after 24 minutes`` had been *``His performances led him to be named the best young player of the 1994 World Cup`` link to FIFA World Cup awards#Best Young Player Award *partaker - use plain English 679 `