`  :That other article should have been removed; I think the other editor kept it duplicated by mistake.  I've fixed the ``(critic)`` version so that it redirects to the ``writer`` version.  Looking very briefly at the (writer) version, the main problem I see is the way you've done the references.  References should be put into  tags at the end of the sentence that is being referenced, not done as direct links in the text. More information can be found at Help:Citations.  If your not comfortable making those edits; you can just leave it, and at some point someone else will do the copy-editing.  It looks also like a bit of that info isn't verified in any source; that would be best fixed by adding more sources.  I'm going to add a couple of tags to the article which will alert interested editors on the clean-up that needs to be done.   `