`   :I agree. There is no need to delete, but the text needs to be written in a voice that is encyclopedic, not as an essay. It needs some work  :Please see my comments above, copied here: This sentence:  *Outside of time there was a tiny mad idea that one could be separate from God and thereby lose one’s essential goodness. (T-27.VIII.6:2). In reality, one cannot. All creation is a loving and eternal thought of God. Nevertheless, our experience in time is the perception (or misperception) that there has been a separation from God.[19] The effect of that ``tiny mad idea`` of separation is analogous to a ripple effect in a pond, spreading out to create a universe of myriad forms of separation. But God still IS, as always. Outside of time, from God’s eternal reality, came His instant answer to the thought of separation: forgiveness.[20] Within time, this answer must be learned.  I would suggest the following: it these are direct citations, please place these in between quotes. If it is not a direct citation, then write it in a manner that does not feel as an essay, or unattributed opinion. Thanks again.   • @ `