  :Better than the original but still has some fluff like served by radars based at Usram not sure what that means. That said the Bzuk version might be worth putting in the article and we can help clean it up as part of normal editing, certainly dont agree to add the original text dump. Just a comment for Stefanomencarelli you have been asked before not add large dumps of text in articles, if you use the talk page and ask for help with correcting the bad english and suggestions for improvement it would be a lot easier for other editors to help and I hope show what is required. A quick 'I have created this draft can you guys help me sort it out' would get a better result then the current text dump approach.   