   Your article was very well written and interesting. I really enjoyed all of the pictures in the article.I only have a couple of suggestions. In your first paragraph there is a sentence (I think it is the second one ) that says that the fly has halteres. While this is an interesting fact it didn't seem to flow very well in the introduction and seemed kind of random. THis sentence might flow better in the Anatomy section or in the sentence following it. Also there are a couple places in the article where you spell out completely Synthesiomyia. You may want to abbreviate it S. nudiseta in these places since you have already established that it is Synthesiomyia in previous statements and in the rest of the article you abbreviate it. Overall this was a really well written and thoughtful article! Great Job!   