`  == More GA == Much better, couple more things.. *In the lead you mention his debut and record at u-21 level but not his full international debut. *``...age of fourteen, after considering ...`` no need for comma. *``He scored his first FA Premier League goal on April 24, 2002 in a 1–0 win over Middlesbrough, but the 2001–02 season ended in relegation for Ipswich.`` - still not a logical sentence, he scored a goal but the season ended in relegation?   *``The 2003–04 season finished with Bent scoring 16 goals, which was followed by 19 goals in the 2004–05 season, which made him the team's second highest goalscorer for the season.`` has ``season`` three times. *``On the opening day of the 2005–06 FA Premier League season, Bent scored two goals on his Charlton debut against Sunderland.[12] He was named the Premiership player of the month for August.`` - flow ``,[12] and was named...`` *``20% of Charlton's profit.`` - suggest ``...profit on his sale.`` or similar.  Town didn't get 20% of Charlton's whole profit! *International section still doesn't really flow.  Lots of short choppy sentences. *Specifically, though, you say ``as of 2007 he has played two games..`` infobox says three. Definitely getting there but these need sorting.   `