` :I'm a little busy right now so I'm just going to make my comments straight out. In other words, pardon my bluntness; I'm concerned about the source used for the Tresaith statement. Is that a government tourism website? If so I don't think it meets reliable, independent status.  :In Adpar this sentence is a little awkward: ``At one time Adpar was more important than it is now.`` The word ``important`` is a little weird. Maybe ``active`` is better? You're kind of implying that its unimportant now, which would probably annoy Adpar residents, not to mention reads a little like opinion...Maybe you could just say ``Adpar was an...`` and then expand on its characteristics at the time. Grammatically that's the topic sentence of your paragraph, so you might have to rewrite that paragraph a little to allow for flow. :Isn't upper parts and underparts in that gopher article a little informal? I'm not an animal expert but that sounds a little colloquial. Forget I said anything if I'm wrong.  :I've made a few edits to some of your articles maybe you can look at my edit summaries for some quick examples of fixes I made. Incidentally one tip before I go, if you want to to add something to your ``watchlist`` you can do so by clicking the watch button above the page. Then by clicking the watchlist link on the top right of your screen, you can see recent changes to pages on your watchlist. See this screengrab I just pulled:   `