  :::::: It would probably be easiest for me to clarify how I think feedbacks should be discussed in this article: :::::: (1) Effects of global warming#Temperature changes: Feedbacks are relevant here, and this section should provide a better summary of uncertainties and risks in projections, e.g., fat tails (p.8 of supplementary data). The section could refer to global warming for a more detailed explanation. :::::: (2) Effects of global warming#Abrupt or irreversible changes: This section should provide an updated summary of potential large-scale abrupt changes, e.g., see  and AR5 (Section 5.3.1). :::::: If you agree, perhaps we can discuss possible drafts of these sections?  ::::::   