  ::The formatting and style you have used on Franklin S. Billings, Jr.'s entry is not only inconsistent but confusing. Office titles, awards, and other noteworthy achievements are listed separately with the date included in brackets. Billings' entry should be no different. As I said in this edit, I don't see the need to list every single office the deceased held, only the most important ones. Choose two and leave it at that. Regards,  • 