`  == dim3 article issues ==  Hi Ggadwa!  Some issues with the article as it stands (ignoring the errors in formatting and the conflict of interest issues for now).  #This MacWorld article is clearly a press release and not a reliable source. Any statement being driven by it needs to be deleted. #``created by Brian Barnes`` - inline source needed as the Klink website doesn't say that at first glance. (Obvious, I know who it is  but something official needs to say so) #``Dim3 is aims to give developers of any ability the tools to create a wide range of games`` - source 4 doesn't say this. An alternative 3rd party reliable source is needed, or delete the sentence. #``dim3 has been in development since late 2000`` - inline source needed, or delete the sentence. #``A number of games have been produced using dim3 and many more are in production`` - sources required, especially for the second part of the statement. Or delete at least the second part entirely. #From then on, the article descends into proseline - always an indication of an article in trouble and often a sign of spamming. Each of these sections need to be put into proper prose or deleted. #``Components`` section - remove the list at the start (the list follows anyway), the definite article on each section heading (the word ``the``), and combine ``The Demo Game`` into this section. Thumbnail the images and range them to the right. #Pick one or two of the games - notable ones, ones with reviews in reliable publications - and mention them in prose. Otherwise remove this advertising-like section. #External links - focus on the audience here: pick the three that would be of most use to Wikipedia's readers, not dim3's fans.  Sorry this is brutal - I'm lacking sleep and in a hurry, so I'm biting at you like mad. Sorry o(  I'd make the changes myself, but can't on the couple of places where you and the forum are likely to have the information to hand. ➔ '''''' isn't wearing pants `