 :I disagree with your assessment of your ability to see the problems and correct itthe former is a matter of learning to look at it from an outsider's POV, something that you can learn to do by doing and by changing your mind-set or POV while writing, and the latter is a function of your present editing skills which are already up to the task.  I wouldn't have bothered giving you a simple object instead of a strong object, if I didn't think this was sothere are a lot of articles on Wikipedia that simply need a different editor, or a better editor, and this article is not one of them.  Take a break, come back, and start explaining OU Sooners football to a young woman in Africa.  Whatever your biases now, whatever your limitations, you have the right attitude and the skills and can learn a few things in the process to take this article to FA status.  It will be a lot of work, but I guarantee that when you wake up, log on, and see the OU Sooners football program on the Main Page it will be worth it.  Think of it as getting in shape for football season, and think of how you'll feel next Bedlam Series knowing that OSU was never on the front page of Wikipedia (do I sound a bit biased?  like maybe I personally want you to do it?  yes).    