`  ::::::It's certainly better, though you're still using hyperbole like ``countless Off-Broadway plays`` when in fact Off-Broadway is well-defined and there is an Off-Broadway database that gives an exact count of her Off-Broadway plays. Not to mention all the tangential name-dropping like ``starred with Gregory Hines`` or ``starred with Mary-Louise Parker`` that has nothing to do with Draper herself. And you are still exhibiting WP:OWN by essentially saying all edits to the article have to go through you. Draper is such a relatively obscure actress that unlike with the Clint Eastwood article, for examples, few editors come here and so it's easy to own. But that's not encyclopedic, that's not best-practices and it doesn't help an article or the subject when it reads like a press release.   `