`  ``After spending the early part of his career titling songs with arbitrary names, he decided to use more personal titles.[6] Hebden drew on influences from Pete Rock, DJ Premier,[7] Jim O'Rourke's I'm Happy and I'm Singing and a 1, 2, 3, 4, Timbaland, the Neptunes and Rodney Jerkins' work on Whitney Houston's ``It's Not Right but It's Okay`` and Brandy and Monica's ``The Boy Is Mine``.[4]`` These sentences don't seem to be connected to each other; you go from talking about influences, then talking about song titles, then back to the influences. You discuss the album title later; would this be a better place for the information about titles?   I'm also not sure what ``titling songs with arbitrary names`` means exactly; did he give them names at random, or what? Can you be more precise?  Additionally, a long list of influences is hard to read; it would be nice to explain how these artists influenced Hebden specifically, on what songs.   `