` ::Believe me, I felt pretty much the same way you do when I first read this article. Just like you say, I think that the lead sentence ::: ::is supposed to be a succinct way of saying ::: ::but inserting the latter text instead would typically be considered bad writing (see WP:REFERS). I agree with you that the current wording isn't optimal either, being perhaps too terse to properly convey the intended meaning. I'm not sure how to improve it, though. Let's see if anyone else chimes in, otherwise I'd take it as a tacit approval and proceed with your suggested ``terminology``.   `