  :I took a look at this, and I would hesitate to remove information from the declaration.  I don't consider the sentence to be an attack (having a perceived conflict of interest and acting in a manner to undermine the article or process are two very different things to me), and it really isn't off-topic. We regularly point out that reviewers were also article contributors or are members of a wikiproject that might support, and it's not uncommon for similar statements to be made about reviewers of more nationalistic articles. If we start refactoring these now, we'll have to refactor a LOT of FAC declarations in the future.      