`  Good comments.  *Point 1. Very good point. Personally, I prefer the third option: `` ``also known by the nickname, Chocolate River.`` This is the simplest and clearest way to put it. *Point 2. Either suggestion would be better than the present wording. I would again go for the simpler ``land and water species``. *Point 3. Agreed. We cannot say or imply that the name Chocolate River came from the construction of the causeway without direct evidence. I have commented about this before but the factoid has once again crept back into the text. *I also support the other points made.   `