 :Actually, I would prefer for the bulk of the article to be mostly descriptive, with a section on the current state of scientific research which would naturally be critical. As it has developed, however, the criticism is laced throughout the relevant sections. Like other CAM subjects, the article is closely watched by many people, mostly skeptics. The only way this article could appear whitewashed is if you are hoping it is nothing but criticism. That would not be appropriate, as the purpose of WP is not to persuade people to have a certain opinion of the subject, it is to faithfully describe the subject based on reliable sources.   