` :Excellent.  The USA Today doesn't have to be in the first sentence, IMO.  The mention of the ``right wing bloggers`` also.  Both of these in the second paragraph perhaps.  I like your change about Rather, it is more accurate, ``we are told`` is right.  The document examiners didn't authenticate the documents without originals.  Was Rather aware of this?  I thought he was.  So we can make those changes if you like.  Oh, and given your repeated personal attacks, sarcasm, and general tone, might I be so bold as to suggest that you would perhaps be more suited to editing a different Wiki where civility and collaboration are not required?   `