  I have built on your edits, and included several votes I did not have in my version.  However, there are two major changes you will note:  1) You had too many categories, and this made for a choppy article.  You almost had a header and then one sentence.  I have grouped them into larger headers. 2) You had numerous places where you use derogatory language or tone.  I have removed those.  Please let me know what specifically I left out that you would like to include, or if you believe there is language that is too rosy about Debicella.