  == Judy Garland - Expanded lead ==  The revision to the lead in to the Judy Garland article has alot of information that is included in other areas of the article and includes un-referenced statements that unless they are referenced can be considered POV. For instance; the statement referring to the Carnegie Hall Concert being 'considered' the greatest night in show business history. I have seen this statement before and do not disagree with it but unless it is referenced by a source it is POV and is open to removal. Overall, your work has improved the look and flow of the article for the better but I was sorry to see some sections such as her ancestry totally removed, and thought the Lorna Luft statement about family 'charm' was good and do remember that it was previously referenced before being removed from the ancestry section and then re-entered into the beginning section. Irregardless of this; I think the same rigorous editing standards applied to the rest of the article should be applied to the lead in. I removed the word finally from the sentence about dying as it is not needed and evokes a POV meaning to the event.