`  == Dari language ==    Here are some concerns I had about Dari language which I posted on another editor's talk page but to which I received no reply. I've copied my comments here.  I was just looking at some edits to Dari language, and I found some errors in syntax and usage, and was just fixing those. I removed ``can be considerable`` because of what followed, ``can be likened to the differences between American and British English``, which, to me, are not considerable. If the phrase ``can be considerable`` (or ``are considerable``) is desirable, then I think ``can be likened to the differences between American and British English`` needs to go.  But then I was looking at the list of differences in Dari language#Phonology just after that. There were some punctuation errors which I fixed. I added one short note to editors (visible only in Edit Mode), but overall, I thought the list was not especially clear. The words ``realized`` and ``realization`` are used repeatedly, but  maybe because I'm not an expert in linguistics so I don't know all the lingo  those words are not clear. The actual differences  this is the case in one language while that is the case in the other language  are not uniformly clear. (Some are clearer than others.) I wonder, if you have time, whether you could look at this list and fix it up a bit. Since there have been quite a few edits made recently to this article, I wouldn't be surprised if you found other things to fix, also. CorinneSD (talk)   P.S. In Item 3 in that list, it says ``Dari, on the other hand, is more archaic``. I wonder why ``Dari`` is used instead of ``Afghan Persian`` which was used elsewhere. I think that's confusing to go back and forth between ``Dari`` and ``Afghan Persian``. Also, I wonder about the use of ``archaic`` here. Wouldn't ``more conservative`` be more accurate? CorinneSD (talk)   Here is a new comment on the same article:  I've just noticed a few edits to the article which to me are questionable, particularly changing a percentage of native speakers from 50% to 25%. I have not been able to find an expert on this subject.  has not been active lately. Is there any chance you could review these issues? Thanks.   `