`  == Tags ==  I think the tags at the top of the article are not useful in identifying what sections/areas need improvement. For example, the intro has no weasel words that I can find and some sections have no neutrality problems - we should move tags to those sections that need the specific help.   == My edits to intro == :(not finished but have to leave computer for an hour or so) ``The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, also known as the LDS Church or the Mormon Church, is the largest denomination within the Latter Day Saint movement, Its adherents describe itwhich describes itself as the restoration of the original 1st century Christian church and. Adherents view themselves as Christians, though not part of the Catholic, Orthodox, or Protestant traditions.`` : The church describes itself this way according to the reference. ``The church teaches that Jesus Christ appeared with God the Father to Joseph Smith, Jr. and called him to be a prophet and to re-organize the original church established by Jesus Christ through a restoration ofrestore elements that had been missing from Christianity since the Great Apostasy. This restoration included the return of priesthood authority, new sacred texts, and the calling of twelve apostles. Like other Latter Day Saint denominations, the Church claims succession to the Church of Christ founded by Smith in April 6 1830, following his translation of the Book of Mormon from which adherents—also called Latter-day Saints—get their nickname Mormons.`` : (text moved in purple) : Clarify that there was a dispute after Smith’s death, BY led a group to Utah and it is now the church which is the subject of the article.  The church is Now an international organization, the church has its world headquarters in Salt Lake City, Utah remains the world church headquarters, where Gordon B. Hinckley serves as its fifteenth President. In 2005 the church reported a worldwide enrolled membership of over 12.5 million[2], although many of those members no longer affiliate with the organization. :Removing this “many” is a weasel word – this can be explained in detail later. For example in the 3 wards I have had access to records in Utah, New Jersey and Florida about 6, 13, and 9% (respectively) of those on the rolls were not “members” i.e. they were children of record who were not baptized or spouses of members who have a “non-member” record created. This is clearly original research (OR), as is the “many no longer affiliate with the organization is also. But unless someone has published research that takes “Ward list numbers” and actual membership counts and compares them with surveys such as Columbia’s, we should not be doing anything other than reporting the results of the survey or other published material. These conclusions are OR whether they are drafted here or on the many random blogs and websites that discuss the issue – on both sides – and do not meet the attribution standards.  `