  == 16:review of submission by TrevorTT ==    Hi Sionk,  First off, really appreciate you taking the time to look at our AfC submission! Thank you for that...I know there are a ton of articles out there waiting to be considered.  We're disappointed to learn that ours reads too much like an advertisement, though we're determined to make it Wiki-worthy and I would love to get your thoughts on what edits are necessary to improve upon it and make it so. Are there any specific sections/sentences/inclusions that jump out to you as needing to be changed? Could you point to those sections that are currently Wiki-worthy so that I might have a sense of what to build on and what to change/get rid of?  Thanks again and thank you for your help!    TrevorTT    