  I listed the article at cleanup because I think there is good content there, but it needs to be cleaned up.  At the first read, I immediatly got the impression that the article was written by a fan, and that the text didn't flow as well as it could because too much detail and too many quotes of more or less relavancy were included in the narative.  You seem to resist the editing of the article by others, reverting the article atleast 6 times in the last two hours.  This is not constructive.  If others choose to edit an article, it is because they want to make the article better, either by adding more detail, or by making the existing detail easier to find or understand.  We're all here to build a better encyclopedia, and sometimes a better encyclopedia is built by tightening up content so that it is presented in a clearer, more consise manner.  The best content in the world is of no value to anyone if the reader never finds it because it is surrounded by too much fluff.  