`  ===Infobox/Lead=== * Anuman Interactive is a port developer and should not be listed * Remove unlinkable engine per Template:video game reviews * Some citations in the release fields seem to be in the wrong place. You can actually remove them per WP:LEADCITE * June 6–7, 2011? Why it has two release dates? *  - Infobox calls Microïds is the game's developer instead of publisher * Development information is too light in the game's lead. I suggest to add a new paragraph summarizing the game's development and move  to it * Plot was covered too much in the lead.  can be cut. * Gameplay information is needed for the lead *  - ``a`` positive reception, or generally positive ``reviews`` *  - don't know what ``it`` is. visuals? *  - remove ``great``, change ``in its original release`` to ``since its original release``. When exactly did the game reach this sales figure? ===Plot=== * The setting section definitely needs source, especially claims like ``inspired by the real-life Amazon rainforest`` and ``tend to resemble real-life animals, but with bizarre flourishes`` * Is it really necessary to mention the game's setting in such in-depth way? ,  are not really useful. * Character list does not really seem to add any significant plot point and can be merged to the character section. *  - ``leads`` * The overall plot section is a bit too long. I wonder if the part about 1932–1934: the Valembois expedition or the 1998: the journalist plays more significant role in the game's overall plot. You should omit the details of the less important one. *  - Who is Luis Angel? *  - Not an important plot point ===Gameplay=== *  - not needed * Players and the player, choose one *  - Rephrase it to but instead serve to flesh out the game's plot, such as the explorer's journal and Valembois's letter.`` * The first paragraph of the gameplay section is unsourced. ===Development=== *  - Remove ``of`` *  - began ``to`` work *  - Does the source mention why? * I would name the subsection heading as ``Design`` instead of ``Pre-production``. More accurate this way. * Do not really understand what  means *  - unsourced *  - Do not see the need of having a lengthy quote like this.  had summed it up very nicely. *  - Rephrase it to ``In 1997, Casterman suffered from financial troubles`` *  - When? *  - Do not need quotation marks here *  - Who is ``them``? *  - needs source to support * re-released or rereleased, choose one *  - at what role he collaborated with them? adviser, consultant?  *  section is n