` :: I agree that we could dispense with some of the headings for very small paragraphs. :: I also agree that if there are instances where Wikipedia's voice is used to say non-neutral things, it should be fixed. We do that by attributing it, not removing it. Removal is censorship. Attribution is the way to solve those problems. :: We don't care what happens in other articles. From your description, it sounds like there is an NPOV violation in Hillary's article, either by omission or commission. :: Please move very slowly, with no big deletions. This is controversial stuff and WP:PRESERVE definitely applies.  {{u|}} {} `