`The growth of the article from the initial to expanded contribution is obvious – the article now provides a more complete historical picture of the issue and its nuances. Great work! I think the article is very readable, and to improve that facet even further, you could consider adding a graphic related to the topic. I mostly would like to see the inclusion of more citations within the article, especially in sections where there isn’t a single source cited (the entire History section, the ``Disease and Death`` subsection). Additionally, I would examine the language of the introductory paragraphs and consider rewording it. The two things that stick out to me in particular:  :``Native Americans in the United States have historically had extreme difficulty with the use of alcohol.`` As the opening sentence, it seems like it could be presented with more neutrality.  :``Use of alcohol varies by age, gender and tribe with women, and older women in particular, being least likely to be regular drinkers`` is worded strangely. (I mention these two things in particular because they are the first things a person will read on the page.) Let me know if you have any questions or how else I might be able to help you in the review process. Good luck!     `