` :::Another thought.  THe Mozart reference is actually to a blog on the site Kickstarter.  I think this should be removed as it assumes the statement that Crowdfunding was actually a precursor (they talk about the Pope Kickstarting it) and it is pretty self serving and advert like.  I don't think it adds anything but could be useful in the Praenumeration or patronage article.  Here is what I propose:  1. remove the bulk of the Pulitzer reference to a history section in Preanumeration and possibly mention that some consider preanumeration to be an early precursor to Crowdfunding. 2. Move the Mozart reference to the patronage article for the reasons stated above.   The reason being is that neither could have possibly used the Internet or a ``platform`` in the context of crowdfunding.  It is all good information but maybe references to other more appropriate articles so we can get the history section down to a manageable size.   it is a pretty big article!`