  ::i still meditate on your rewrite. i see couple points you are trying to make, but somehow the whole construction become very cumbersome. may be too many negatives? makes hard to understand. also, i was kinda fond of the whole approach to this class of experiments - through interjecting oneself into a situation and see what authenticity is left then. anyway, let me think few more days. may be you'll see a way to clear it up even more. best -  02:16 jul06 2005