The language is sound and, importantly, more on-point/accurate than anything anyone else has offered to date.  Skinmeister's edits here make about as much sense as his shenanigans elsewhere.  Frankly, it's quite clear that Skinmeister has not been acting in good faith here (or elsewhere).  His pattern of stalking me around Wikipedia, of abusive language, personal attacks and of generally disruptive behavior are in plain sight.  Looks to me like he's been begging for an RfC/RfA for quite a while now.     