  : Hello Lauren, what you wrote at Contested deletion sounds reasonable, and I took the speediness out of the deletion notice, so you have more leisure to improve it. As it stands, it still violates WP:PROMOTION, and it needs a major rewrite to make it be neutral, rather than sound like a CV. Since you appear to have not worked on any other articles, I recommend you join or notify a related WikiProject, such as WikiProject Seattle, where you will find other editors who should be able to help you get this article in encyclopedia shape. —  