`  ==Failed GA==    ===Comments===  *1a - Prose: Well written, but not compelling. There are redundant phrases (``Suzy Aspinall, who is the daughter`` should be ``Suzy Aspinall, the daughter``) and there are several passive sentences. Words like ``didn't`` shouldn't be in an encyclopedia - the tone is not formal enough. *1b - Sections: First of all, the lead should be longer, and try to summarise the article in it (mention in brief how the Beatles involved in their activities - personal assistant is too general). Sections such as 'School' and 'Music' are too short, and should be expanded or moved to other sections. *3a - Coverage: The article doesn't comment much on his youth. Also, what tasks did he perform as the Beatles manager? How was he involved in the Apple Computer v Apple Records court cases? That's why I feel the article isn't broad enough in his coverage.  Anyhow, good article so far! Keep it up! I'll be happy to rereview when these issues are addressed.  `