  ::::Oh please, no further involvement of your time is remotely necessary, and that goes for Gen. Quon aswell. You two lovely people have already expended more than enough of your time on my project. If the entire FA process is based around grammar lessons and anal nitpicking, I would much rather return to spending my time with GAs, which are actually fun and productive. I'm much more of a fan of the 'you tell me what's wrong with the article, and I'll go fix it' process.    ::::::It's not that I'm giving up on the article; I'm definitely going to continue to fight for it and I'm far from quitting. I'll definitely re-nominate it. It's just that the reward-to-work ratio is severely lacking (or is that lacking severely?).   