   == Be bold (but not while on frontpage) ==  I won't do a direct edit while this in on the front page but I suggest we replace   As a result of this marriage, the Church of England broke with Rome and was brought under the King's control.  with  As a result of this marriage and these excommunications, the first break between the Church of England and Rome took place and the Church of England was brought under the King's sole control.  Reasons: the text is POV, both sides had to renounce each other for the break to take place, also the King did have some prior control on the Church of England, also it was temporary: the Church of England returned to Rome and communion between them was restored 1558-1570 until Elizabeth was excommunicated too.   