`  :::::Let me know when you have finished, and I’ll look over it for you. But, you still have a lot of problems: :::::*You are ignoring WP:MEMORIAL :::::*You have WP:COPYVIO issues :::::*You still have what is called linkrot in your references. You must fully cite your sources, as I am sure you have been taught in school. If not, then please read WP:CITE and WP:REFBEGIN. :::::*You are still using sources that violate WP:RS. If you are unsure if a source satisfies WP:RS, you can ask the experts at WP:RSN. That’s what we’re there for :::::You really should stop editing and start reading, reading Wikipedia’s guidelines and policies in these areas. Good luck! — '''''' `