  :::Please take a look at the current version of the subsection. I  boldly put it in chronological order. First, Mr. Brown announced the investigation in October 2009. Then came Mr. Lagstein's comments two weeks later, and the San Francisco Chronicle article, and the denial about prejudging from the AG spokeswoman in November 2009. Then came Mr. Brown's report in April 2010, and then Mr. Grenell's commentary in The Huffington Post. Since we hadn't agreed to expand Mr. Grenell's quote to a two-paragraph blockquote, I refrained from doing that; but overall, it's looking better and better. Thanks for the help.   