Hi Itsmejudith,  That sounds very fair. I was told not to alter anything the other contributor had written, so I assumed I wasn't allowed to add other viewpoints within his paragraphs. I have placed a plea on the editor help page regarding the unfair questioning of the high-quality Zoroastrian reference I provided. It seems strange that I am told that all sides are welcomed, but only Oxford-published references I provide are allowed.     