`  == Article tone ==  Portions of the text need to be reworked to have a less familiar, reverential and promotional tone. Examples: * After the first mention of their full name, people should be referred to by their last name * ``The project had fulfilled and surpassed the dream of Justine Merritt.`` * ``Justine Merritt was followed by a camera crew every joyful tear of the day.`` * ``Nine ``Ribbon`` cameras were given priority positions in the National Cathedral to capture the beauty and the emotional words of the service of dedication``  '''' `