`:I agree - the section itself is rambling and awkward, and isn't, as sleepsong implies, an interesting or reasonable narrative.    :I can help w/this but not immediately, and probably not in any great depth.  And actually probably not anything remotely related to ``immediately.``  However, I do agree about a better bio blurb being a good idea.  (It's possible that people are scared to do this for various reasons, but I might be wrong.  People might just be lazy, or bogged down with their foreign-diplomat duties in Austria.)      `