` :On a casual scan, there are several punctuation errors in the first few sentences, as well as a few other copyedit issues. If you are not familiar with WP:STYLE, don't worry. Someone who enjoys coyedit work will come by to fix it shortly. If you are interesting in finishing the article, please note one section from the article: ``Tseten Dolma (Tibetan:ཚེ་བརྟན་སྒྲོལ་མ།; Tibetan pinyin:Tseitain Zhoima; Wylie:tshe brtan sgrol ma; Chinese:才旦卓玛) is a Tibetan soprano. Born to a serf family in August 1 1937 in Shigatse, She was influenced by the Tibetan folk music when she was very young. In 1956, she first performed on stage. In 1958 she joined Shanghai Conservatory of Music，learning from professor Wang Pinsu. Since the 1960's, she served as the chairman of the Tibet Branch of the Chinese Musicians' Association, director and vice-chairman of CMA, deputy secretary of Bureau of Cultural Affairs of Tibet Autonomous Regional.[1].  :In each case, there is a punctuation issue, and/or some syntax issues. Best regards.  `