     Hi there, I got asked by Chzz to give you a bit of feedback on your article. Much of it may be covered by other people but I'll throw in whatever I noticed and you can discount any bits that are already covered by other people... Firstly, I should tell you that I know nothing about the topic you are writing about but then, sometimes it helps to get feedback from a reader who's totally ignorant of your topic - seeing as your purpose is to enlighten me! Also, I know you are doing lots of work on this and it's coming on really well - so, keep at it and good luck!  Lead Section:  -'Cardoso government'? Who is Cardoso - can you give a link on wiki or provide a bit more detail in the text? -'Brazil is far from average learning levels' Do you mean Brazil has far from average learning outcomes.... or, Brazil is far below average learning outcomes as defined by.....  I wasn't too clear - maybe the sentence could be restructured? Also, 'downtrodden'? Maybe some phrases like low-income/high unemployment/economically inactive... might be easier to classify?  Section: National Assessment and Proof of Brazil  - The Results of SAEB and Proof of Brazil are provided as an external link from within the text and also provided as the citation. I think wiki prefer you to avoid external links from within the main body of the text - and as the citation takes you to the same place, I'd just stick with the citation and get rid of the external link.   Section: Educational Performance and Outcomes  Maybe it would be good to include something here about what the consequences are(economic and social) of the lower enrolment and lower completion rates in Brazil? That would help the reader understand why all the research and attempts to change these things are important....  Section: Teacher Quality and Training  Just a tiny typo here - 'The Ministry of Education's has...' - just get rid of the 's   Hopefully some of that helps or reinforces what others have already said - again, best of luck   