`  ;Review Good start.  * For the Synopsis: Haddock suddenly appears on the cliff face after mention of Tintin spotting the scarf; please add some mention of him prior, perhaps having ``a change of heart``. Please add a wikilink to Blessed Lightning, as a redirect article exists for him. It is not clear who ``he`` is in ``he tells him to abandon his quest``; please edit. No need for quote marks on ``final lap``. ``Tintin taking Chang away`` and ``scares him away`` awkwardly repeats word ``away``; please edit. Please remove ``and took him away from the rescue parties``. Entire synopsis is too long, regrettably; please cut. For example, it starts to bog down during the ``final lap`` part and during the ``blowing his nose`` part.  Learn what to cut here: WP:PLOTSUMMARIZE. * Most of the first paragraph of the Reception section now contains duplicate sentences that still appear earlier in the article; please edit.  * Thank-you for including the Google Books URLs; some of the tail end of the new URLs can be removed as that is only tracking info; please experiment and learn what to remove those portions from the URLs. Please copy over large portions of the Bibliography from articles of books one through seven, ensuring consistency across articles. Footnotes 1–7 and 27 contain errors. Please ensure everything claimed in this article is backed up by referenced source. For some paragraphs, every sentence will contain a footnote to its source. * Please consider getting started on the changes I mention are required above. * This weekend I will commit to re-reading my Tintin books and contributing the necessary editing.   `