`  == Re: If there's a rocket... ==  S- I took a preliminary (albeit belated look) at the Snow Patrol song, ``If There's a Rocket, Tie Me to It``. I think it needs tweaking in the writing after having seen the video for it, and have begun making minor wording changes. If you disagree, tell me. They focus around the description of what takes place in the video use of words like the band members ``admiring`` the origami, etc. doesn't feel right. I think ``examined`` would be a better word. Sure, I'm picky, but I think it's more accurate and there are a few other words like that which made the wording sound just a little silly, so I made a few changes. Also, they are on a beach. Wouldn't a beach have a bungalow on it rather than a ``cottage``, right on the sand by the waterline? There isn't a mention of the Japanese lanterns hanging from above, though that may not have any importance. Last, shouldn't the synopsis of the video mention Lightbody singing throughout their wandering, and mention that the second half of the video shows the band performing the song there on the beach? Oh, a couple more things, about references. Your comment that The Irish Times ``Hated`` it:  Where is the reference for this?  Hate is a really, really, strong word. I'd assume that their critique would be in English, too, and yet, by using Google, the only times I was able to find that comment was from every other site it seems, who are quoting from YOU... perhaps not a good thing. I also think there were too many references where the reader would have to know foreign languages, or subscribe to whatever paper or periodical to see what they had to say.  Personally, I would have said that the Irish Times panned the song, or some such word.  :I think this all sounds harsh, but I think you know that I want the best results for your projects, and for myself, it truly is an outsider's view, (but an insider who has read a lot of song pages here).  `