I got a provisional acceptance and submitted my clerical revisions almost two months ago. Email the editor? I got a revise and resubmit after a 4-month review in a decent Psychology journal, submitted a revision and, after another 4-month review, got a provisional acceptance with minor and clerical comments to be addressed, and was asked to submit my response within two weeks. I did response within two weeks, which is almost two months ago at this point. 

Questions:


Should I email the editor through the submission website?
If so, what would be an appropriate way to frame the email? I had in mind something like:  


  Dear ____,
  
  I am emailing to check on the status of my provisionally accepted manuscript (ID=xxx). Please let me know if there is any further information you need and thank you for your continued attention. 
  
  Best, ____
The question hangs on the meaning of "provisional acceptance." If the reviewers suggested that no further review was required, then the editor should be able to make a decision fairly quickly once the changes have been made and submitted, so two months is probably too long for the subsequent review. However, there is the possibility that the editor sent the paper out for an additional round of reviews, in which case the delay is much more "explainable," but still bordering on too long. 

In any case, a polite email to the editor asking about the status of the paper wouldn't be remiss. What you've written is fine.