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 # 010 “ When people succeed , it is because of hard work . Luck has nothing to do with success . " Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above ? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position . If someone score a success in certain fields , it is clear that he has tried his best in his field . However , other things can influence on his success . For example , the trend of society , proper time , or appropriate circumstances can effect on his success whether it is direct or indirect . We call such things ' luck '. That is to say , luck can have effect on someone ' s success . Therefore , I don ' t agree with the quote , " When people succeed , it is because of hard work . Luck has nothing to do with success . ". Most conspicuously , for some people . luck plays a bigger part in success than hard work . Whether it is about wealth or features , someone often succeed in his life without hard work . For example , people who were born into extremely wealthy family have been rich from his birth . He didn ' t do anything , but he is more rich than people who have tried his best in his field for scores of years . In addition , models and celebrities who have an attract looks are also gifted people . Of course , the reason of their success could be hard work such as their continuous control of features . However , the major fact that makes their success is clearly their gifted appearances . It is great luck to such people . Therefore , I say that the success of someone can be caused by their luck not hard work . My next concern is that luck can present you with the right opportunities for success . Sometimes , someone success by added luck on their steady hard work . They have done their best in certain field for a long time , and if proper luck is given to them , they can succeed . For instance , many scientists found out important ideas and theories by chance . To make more specific , Tanaka Koich combined cobalt with glycerine by chance , and then he won a Nobel prize . Although he had hard work on his duties , what makes him a Nobel prize winner is obviously luck . As we can see in this case , luck can influence on success in no small way even seriously . In conclusion , the case that someone success only with their hard work is uncommon . Every success were effected by luck whether it is great or extremely small . We can be realized that fact in above examples . This is why I strongly disagree with the opinion , ' luck has nothing for success . '.