I wasn ' t trying to be mean about it , just saying where I think it needed improvement , besides that I think it ' s lovely . I think you read waaay too much into my comment . <| sep |> Are you that naive ? <| sep |> Hey , I really loved your feedback so thought I ' d mention that I posted the next chapter chapter 03 Thanks again for all your notes . <| sep |> A witch stood before her , chanting . Now , now , don ' t cuss , it ' s not something queens do . <| sep |> Why are they all white ? Clearly its a green card . <| sep |> With whom ? <| sep |> Among these rights we don ' t have are life , liberty , and the pursuit of happiness . So we can all just kill anything we don ' t like . Or even this we do like . <| sep |> Play Starboy ! every annoying cunt at the club when talking to the dj