This is more of a ' what did you expect to happen ' moment . <| sep |> I mean I have WiFi , and I ' ve used it here before , so idk what it could be . Thanks , that makes me feel better . Hopefully I ' ll be able to resolve this on my console <| sep |> fuck i got it for 284 <| sep |> It is a general trend for richer countries to invest in education and science , with the US being a weird exception . <| sep |> 1 This probably doesn ' t help you that much . You appreciate how powerful the emotions can be . Writing what you felt may not tell the same story to a reader . Trying to make the reader feel that strongly for the characters is probably not possible . 2 Don ' t mention the passing of time . It ' s irrelevant to the story . Factual and true ? Yes . Needed for your research into the characters and story ? Yes . Necessary for the book ? Not at all . The pacing of the scenes and their transitions require no time accounting . The occasional night or day reference might be useful , the are not required . You could write the first draft with no time passing , just transitioning from scene to scene , then read it aloud and see how it sounds . If need be , say Goodnight , Gracie . Readers don ' t need to have that love value . If you go for that , you ' re more prone to do infodumps . Replace that romantic description of their emotions with more powerful cues , like the way one character touches the others cheek with their little finger , or how they look at their feet , or what they say , or how they get embarrassed and leave . Each scene will have a feeling . Transitioning from scene to scene and building up more feelings is the challenge you have set for yourself . Please do have fun . It ' s a very good challenge .