His early game is extremely punishing and most LCS games on average do not get late enough in he game for him to be fully effective . Sure if the game goes long then his true power comes out , but in a game where punishing early weaker champion and focusing on pushing objectives , Veigar can be severely punished and thus not viable . <| sep |> Hey first off I ' d like to say I did not mean to come off as harsh in my previous comment , I did not realize this was a more amateur project by a fellow fan and rkanye user , I kind of just thought it was a hasty article written by some random so sorry . Now let us beginI think the bigger problem is that you have no substantive evidence that Amber DID affect his music , whereas with Phifer the case is pretty clear . Below I have detailed the typos , grammar issues , and structure issues I saw on first reading . I hop you find this helpfulfirst paragraph should say the more relatable side of hiphop you don ' t have the ofhe fought against the odds breaking free of the shackles . that needs a comma . after odds or else change the sentence to he fought against odds and broke free of the shackles placed on him by others or something . 2 nd it ' s clear Wests needs an apostrophe . possessive . West ' soutspoken confiden cocky arrogant nature it it a list ! ! put commas between each ! ! saying yeezus was his most sonically experimental work is a big claim but i can allow it . paragraph three is unclear and needs to be rewritten , something like If everything we knew about Kanye came from his music , and there were no interviews , photographs , music videos , or award show appearances , it would seem natural to conclude that the creator of that music was undergoing fairly radical psychological change between each album ' s release . Paragraph four avoid saying i do not believe it is weak . Perhaps try The jump from the humility of 2004 ' s Spaceship to the relentless repetition of I am a God on 2013 ' s Yeezus is not a leap that could occur by chance 5 quotation marks around Hero ' s JourneyWe witness this in each new iteration of his art 6 should read his mother ' s death from complications related to a cosmetic surgery that Mr . West himself paid for you say with which he paid for that makes no sense . you probably were going for which he paid forGet rid of amber , that was not painful , a breakup that was painful was the one with phifer . maybe write or the sudden cancellation of his engagement with Alexis Phifer , and their subsequent breakup 7 honestly just kills me . theres nothing awful about it but there are a lot of small structural mistakes and I do not feel like rewriting the whole thing , i do urge you to look it over though . 8 need a comma after for a long time 9 should be to hear that not just to hear 10 using a word like rant is pretty charged . as such , you should put it in quotations to recognize that it may be open to interpretation . 11 i do not think that is what quaint means not a word to describe kanye for sure . write strange or provocative 12 should say it shifts the conversation from being about one man ' s genius . to being about . in ur large text you cant say such as bipolar find out the real name . 13 you misspell revealed . you wrote reveled . 14 the consensus should be the more casually involved members of the public 15 you write bellow when you mean belowand the questions are not alike to a symptom checklist it is literally pulled right from a psychological symptoms checklist . which has an official name , look that up 17 I would change it to this The reality is that we do not know the reality . At the end of the day as much as we may think we are entitled to information about Mr . West ' s health , we are not . But it ' s clear the evidence suggests West may have been suffering from a mental illness for many years . In any case , even the mere suspicion of a mental illness should not be taken lightly . 19 you say narcissist you mean , narcissistic 20 Keep in mind not keeping in mind Im sure I missed some but I did my best . I think I stopped reading because of the formatting , so many small paragraphs and big images make it feel like a wordpress cupcake recipe from a stay at home mom . Gave it another shot though ! I know that Kanye is not infallible , he has done things that are I guess rude , or offensive , but i really disagree with the idea that he has done anything truly rude or offensive enough that he needs our forgiveness . Or that he would need mental illness as an excuse . It is easy to forgive kanye without any further explanation . With the final fucking cmon I was trying to convey my frustration with a common tendency people have when talking about kanye and which i believe your article participates in where they just say stuff like yes of course we all know kanye is a bad guy , but i like his music or man kanye just out there being mean and egotistical like classic kanye or The guy is a genius but he is fucking stupid sometimes there is something about these types of comments that undermine his success and seem to dismiss him . Kanye HAS not done as much awful shit as people seem to think , and on top of that , despite some of his actions , he is a super nice , caring , sensitive person . its obvious from his music and his interviews . sure if you just take i am a god kanye can look like a cock , but what about only one ? what about saint pablo ? theres lots of examples of nice kanye from the current era , it isnt all from the college dropout . LIKEWISE , albums like the college dropout contain tonnes of classic asshole kanye bragging like for instance NEW WORKOUT PLAN . he has always been both good and bad , he didnt start good and get arrogant