Not an expert , but my opinions 1 . Is your profile necessary not rhetorical ? 2 . easyframework looks like it isn ' t spaced . 3 . I think your descriptions are good , although if you ' ve used any particular technologies , that might be helpful to point out . 4 . In your relevant skills section , you should put in more concrete things you can do , like technologies , techniques , etc . Public speaking might be worth leaving on , but IDK if claiming that you ' re selfmotivated does much . <| sep |> No one said intent was irrelevant . Of course it matters ! But intent is not the end of the story , and the results of ones actions are a part of it . Hence , the connection to manslaughter . No , it is not as blameworthy as murder , but it still has blame attached and thus a sanction in the criminal law . Involuntariness is a special case , however . It goes to the actus reus , not the mens rea , and thus death caused by an involuntary action like driving off the road because a flock of bees prevented control of the car is non culpable homicide , and not even manslaughter .