What are you , his bitch ? <| sep |> I really liked Wrath of the Kahns . <| sep |> This is a lot better than anything i ' ve ever drawn 0 ! ! Very nice ~ Maybe darken the background a little more , to make the dark spots seem naturalit ' ll make the white spots pop out more . I can see the contrast with white vs dark is very strong in the drawing , there seems to be black spots right next to white spots , usually there is a gradual midtone between those , but the strong lights make this drawing really cool looking . The lineart is very stronk , so I can see the lines that make the shapes in your drawing , usually you don ' t see that in real life , lines are made in our head , but in reality they ' re caused by the contrast of darklight coming together usually to fix that you would play around with the shadows light areas kind of like under the chin , your chin is usually a little light , and your neck would be in shadow , but in line art , people usually just draw the chin in , like anime n ' stoof . It looks pretty good tho , and as I said b 4 it ' s better than anything i ' ve ever drawn ~