I would advise making the hair look sharper , and work on your symmetry especially in the eyes . And work on making your lines straight and clean , unless you prefer it that way . You have a pretty good understanding of shading , so that is a plus . Very good coloring . Little side note , i believe that if you were to make the eyes more oval and sharp you can get a more mature look , unless you prefer it to be a innocent kind of look . If this is your beginning , then you have a good start and a lot of the fundamentals down . Congrats welcome to the world of arting . <| sep |> Conservative . The majority of Liberal America are college students that need safe spaces . <| sep |> I never ask for anything for me . I always pass my gifts up to give more to my son . Especially with everything that is going on now I want him to be happy . There isn ' t much I can think of that I really WANT anyway . Except for maybe a better job and a stable life for my little one . Once my kids dad tried to take him and leave me with nothing I lost a lot of motivation to go on . I ' ve got my son back and I ' m determined to not let the fact that his dad took everything we owned , tried to take him from me and just acted like a shitty person get to me . I just had surgery Monday to fuse a major joint SI Joint and recovery is really rough . The pain isn ' t managed at all and I ' m struggling to walk . I ' m not getting much sleep . I ' m really not picky . I like sterling silver . Blue , green , and purple . More of a well loved look than a dont touch because it ' s worth $ 37488485 and even breathing on it might break it . I do have pierced ears . I only wear 2 rings one is my sons birthstone and one is mine in a claddagh ring . A piece of jewelry would be neat . I ' m a pretty simple , nonflashy person . Idk if that helps . Its a nice offer and if you are able to get to me anything would be appreciated .