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 ▶ Topic : Drug Advertisment 
 The reading passage contends that drug advertising is beneficial to doctors and consumers . On the other hand , the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument . 
 First of all , the speaker argues that many doctors are not expert in chemistry . For this reason , they have the chance to misprescribe new drug to patients , which is that occurs side effect . This casts doubt on the idea in the reading that pharmaceutical marketing gives doctors reliable information . 
 Second , according to the lecturer , although pharmaceutical advertisement informs medical effects to consumers , this actually is written by fine and unreadable explainations . Thus , consumers cannot understand easily . This refutes the reading passage ' s assertion that ad descend awareness information of drugs . 
 The final point made by lecturer is that drug advertising leads to unsupervised prescribtion . This provokes multiple drug use to consumers . Due to this fact , medications of doctors don ' t work effectively to them . This counters the writer ' s claim that pharmaceutical advertising allows people to aviod health problem .