Both of my comments are up there . Don ' t do it if you don ' t feel comfortable doing it . I can see the hesitation why but both my comments are searchable and there . <| sep |> Thank you so much again ! If you have an RMM I would love to rate you <| sep |> Excellent , thanks very much . Noted point about keeping POV consistent . The Girl Bandit is Billie , Hattie ' s daughter . More on that in upcoming chapters . This part of the novel is backstory . The other reviewer here made an excellent point about consistency of character . I agree with your comments here as well , it ' s not consistent for her to be both Mr . Bean , James Bond and Hannibal Lecter all at the same time . ' Events over characters ' is an apt description , thanks for that . I realize I try to compress as much action as possible into each scene , but I agree that this kills the realism in terms of how people thinkbehave .