Like we survived against West Brom and Watford even with a fully fledged side bar Slimani ? <| sep |> I know this isn ' t the fully completed cut , but I hope you ' re planning to change those drums . They ' re really bouncyfull of energy and the rest is darknocturnalominous . It would sound a lot better with some minimal drums and emphasis placed on the guitar and your vocals , if you ' re only going to use that . I think the prechorus and hook need more emphasis and energy and more of a melodic shift from the rest to distinguish it from the verses . I do like the lyrics , although I think they ' re a little generic . It may help to focus a bit more on little details . I think the hook is spot on , but again , with such an emotional point in the song , it would be better to really emphasize it . You say you ' re going for a Tom Yorke kind of vibe , but that would be the part of the song where he ' d be wailing .