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 People have different opinions on whether teachers should be required to upgrade their knowledge every five years . Some people say that teachers already had sufficient knowledge to teach to students . However , I strongly believe that all teachers should improve their knowledge because they would be able to acquire better teaching methods and are needed developing their ability because of changing knowledge in textbooks . To begin with , teachers who upgrade their skills can effectively provide information to students . It is evident that offering an amount of useful information is teacher ’ s duty . No doubt , they must teach intelligence to students easily understanding and remembering for a long time . For example , when I was in high school , my English teacher was very popular among a number of students . He usually tired to teach more beneficial knowledge . In class , he required us to speak more and write more about current issues . Due to teacher ’ s improving teaching ways , we learnt English more effectively . This shows that teachers who advance their knowledge help students learn more effectively . Moreover , teachers should be needed to upgrade owing to revision of a lot of information for each content area in schoolbooks . As time passed , because an amount of new information is added to the textbooks , teachers ought to improve themselves with the new knowledge . According to the Times , one of the most popular monthly magazine in my country , in these days , a course of study is the seventh stage of learning process in Korea , but only two years ago was the sixth stage . Nowadays , schoolbooks is added new knowledge including environmental pollution , the color question and an unemployment problem . Naturally , the Ministry of Education took action the policy that teachers must be upgraded the knowledge by specific training for each content area in summer and winter vacation . In this sense , adding information in textbooks make teachers improve their ability . To sum up , I firmly support the idea that teachers must develop their knowledge regularly . The importance of the improving teacher ’ s knowledge cannot be underestimated because it provides high quality education and new information accurately to students . 
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