I would not trust a handicapped totally depends on the handicap ofc , or elderly person with a gun . also , what i ' m trying to say in all this is that in a dream world , where the US didn ' t fuck up early on , the need for protection like you need now wouldn ' t be there . again , look at people in Europe in general . <| sep |> I just googled tryhard and it doesn ' t seem to be an official English word so I don ' t fully understand the first line of your comment . I do admit that some of my comparisons are a little overused like cotton clouds and etc , though I do believe there are some very unique and creative comparisons too . I don ' t really read much about icy areas , so maybe reading about them could ' ve made me think of more unique comparisons . I ' ll try that next time . Lines that read awkwardly are okay for nonrhyming poems , in my opinion . Those awkward parts are unintentional , but they also make the reader stop and carefully reread things to see if proper rules are being used . However , I do admit that awkward phrases can be a sign of incorrect English so I ' ll reread the piece again and look into the parts where I tripped up . If I was to serenade a woman , I would be describing things like her good character and traits . I would not describe tangible things like her hair , smile , eyes , and etc because then she might think that I like her only for her beauty which is a message I would want to avoid . Those tangible things seem to be on the edge of sexuality , and might be disturbing for her to hear .