You missed an important word in your title . Like can mean so many things . <| sep |> I know he isn ' t but it ' s not as if Father couldn ' t make him immortal if he wanted it He wouldn ' t age if that were the case though so it ' s not advantageous . By the way the Homunculus line was meant as a joke . <| sep |> ok do you just want me to give a critique or are you looking at a 1 on 1 session going through it answering your questions and giving my thoughts ? <| sep |> I lost mine because of drugs and a fear of taking the next step . I was high and dealing with life while she wanted to be something more , I didn ' t . Now that I ' ve grown up a bit and have all of the things I ' ve wanted for a long time , even a girlfriend who loves me and I her . I still think about the one that got away everyday . She ' s married and moved to Canada from the US .