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 ▶ Topic : It has been said . " Not everything that is learned is contained in books ". Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books . In your opinion , which source is more important ? Why ? 
 ▶ Your Answer : Main source of most knowledge is from book , I admit it . However , It seems pretty certain to me that there are knowledge that can ' t be gained by books . As we all know , there is a thing called ' Experience '. Physically and mentally experiencing something can be way better than just reading a piece of paper . With these reasons , I believe experience is better than books . 
 There is this well known maxim . " Experience is the best teacher " . This saying , can be applied in various situations . Let ' s cite a drastic example . In combats , It applies significantly . For example , some soldiers may attain combat - knowledge from reading book , They cannot be better than those who already experienced a war . They may have good strategies based on their book knowledge , experienced soldiers can cognize what is right to do . 
 Second , Social relationship is another thing that cannot be gained by book . We now live in a harsh society and thus meet many kinds of people . To confront these people , we need particular social skills . This cannot be gained by a book . It is purely and merely from experience . For example , when my family moved to a new place , I had to make friends all over again . Then , I needed to show something to get close to them . Owe to my experience , I chose to play a sports together , and I could get close them easily . It was beyond the reading . 
 In conclusion , I think experience is more important than a book . It doesn ' t mean that reading book is not required for people . It is really good for one ' s mental . However , when it comes the source of knowledge , I think experience can be more beneficial than reading a book . 
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