Some good ideas in here and great for a first attempt , the mixing is very rough . I ' m not crazy about the delays on the drum hits all the way through , it gets a little bit repetitive . I would look into getting more drum sound , rdrumkits is very good for that . Also look up tutorials on sidechain compression , its a staple sound in the genre and this track could have done with some sidechaining around the kick . Also , I think a lot of beginner producers use these old vocal samples or news clipping samples and lay it over their beats to take away from the fact that the beat doesn ' t progress at all in the track . Get your beat sounding super tight and as interesting as possible from start to finish , then look at these vocal things as the icing on an already delicious cake if you need to .