the second they called back that interception . i knew the score was coming . <| sep |> Your Tame and Bold predictions were correct . You receive 13 points . <| sep |> No . He is an opportunist who loves money . a very talented one at that . <| sep |> This is an issue with most first person narratives I ' ve read , being interrupted by useless trivia and information , and this isn ' t only from Japan , it ' s one of the most common flaws of the writing style that any list of tips for writing will warn people about and people still fall on this trap . To be fair , when people want to get invested in a story they usually look past these issues or won ' t even notice , and lots of people find the first person narrative very immersive , I find it mostly offputting as most aren ' t done right and I pay attention to these things .