Btw I also have walker instead of Coleman <| sep |> did he get unbanned yet ? <| sep |> Yeah that might scare people away that don ' t enjoy dying and ragequitting . <| sep |> it might still be cheaper to buy it in the EU even with exchange rate . Apple prices in AUS are astoundingly high . <| sep |> i thought this was Stan Lee for a minute <| sep |> Your color words and good attention to sensory details are very notable . I like the specific references to flowers , too . Also the repetitions , especially in the last stanza , produce a very flowing songlike rhythm . though the final line is quite a bit confusing for me . Also , the rhythm felt a little weak in a few areas . But overall , your poem really put me in a comfortable state of mind with the short lines , stanza format , and simple diction . Feel free to comment on my poem too , as I ' m new here and so even the smallest comment helps !