Beautiful hit . Liking benning <| sep |> I would disagree on the last few bastions part . This sub and a few others neutralpolitics , cmv , etc . don ' t ban you for any sort of dissent , which td does . Yes , even for Trump supporters . <| sep |> reed was holding lol <| sep |> I feel good and talkative after one . I have nearly no tolerance so that helps . Two gives me a good buzz . Three or fours and that ' s the end of my social drinking limit . If i ' m trying to get drunk for the night I ' ll start with about 3 beers then start on shots . Where those shots end who know . Depends if I throw up before I down enough to not care . <| sep |> you have an obvious grammar mistake on your first line . I never bother with minor mistakes but on your opening line ? Don ' t expect a professional reader to take you seriously if you fuck up on your first line . The actual story idea you have is fucking brilliant . Whether you have a story or not I don ' t know , do you just have a rough idea or could you write your story out as a paragraph ? Your idea could work as a creepy tale with Trudy whispering to people , persuading them to finish themselves , or it could be a dark comedy , or it could simply be a drama . It ' s always a good sign if your initial idea can still work , coming from different approaches .