And who would you shoot ? The police , violent leftists ? They are just the fingers of the establishment , you won ' t be killing the beast and when its all said and done they will continue and you ' ll be labeled a nut or a terrorist that tried to kill innocent people . Gotta beat them at their own game , we got our best hope into office now we have to keep him there . <| sep |> I really appreciate both your valid criticisms and your encouraging words . It ' s great to know I ' m not to far off base . I find your comment about the imagery very interesting too although , at this point , I ' m really only setting the tone that will offer me some opportunities for stark juxtaposition later on . The note on overthinking might have highlighted an interesting challenge for me You probably noticed I ' m developing the MC almost exclusively through narration and interaction . Thanks again ! Edit I promise I know the difference between To and Too