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 몇 점 이나 받 을까요 ? 4 . 5 이상 을 목표 로 하 고 있 는데 작성 시간 은 2 분 정도 초과 했 어요 . 주제 : A difficult experience becomes a valuable lesson . Tell us the specific reasons and examples to support your idea . People say that experience is the best teacher . I think that this saying is true , even though we are sometimes in trouble by a difficult experience . It finally becomes valuable lessons that can help us to overcome our fear and to increase our ability . A difficult experience also can realize the value of true friends . First , a difficult experience can make us to get over fear and nervousness to do something . When I was a freshman at university , I had to give my first presentation in front of my co - students . I was so nervous and stressful about it , because I was really shy . However , I made a successful presentation that anybody didn ' t laugh at it . I am now very proud of giving a presentation in public . Second , a difficult experience can help us to upgrade our skill and ability to do something . For example , I had to make a complex article on business issue in marketing subjects and I needed to use the computer statistical tools like SPSS , SAS to make it . I read the book on these tools in order to learn how to use them . As a result , I became an expert about computer statistical programs . Third , a difficult experience makes us to realize what true friends is . I have ever been in hospital and not taken final test by a car accident . However , my teacher gave me additional time to take a test , and my friends visited the hospital , and taught me the subjects in the class I was absent and didn ' t study . As a result , I did a good job in make - up test , and realized the value of true friendship . In sum , a difficult experience provides us with several valuable lessons , though we feel heavy pains at the moment we are going through it . A difficult experience enable us to get over some fear as well as to raise the ability to solve some problems . It also gives us the chance to find out a real friendship . In the future , I will be ready to challenge difficult experiencess to upgrade my life without any hesitation .