That sounds horrible . It ' s awful when people don ' t know how to respect someone ' s personal space and boundaries . <| sep |> Some combinations work others dont . With Kadabra defender all my combinations still work with better prestige due to Kadabras CP increasePoliwag still seems to workFrom my tests I couldn ' t find any combinations for Horsea and crappy to work but that just may have been my lack of attackers <| sep |> The problem more is that the writer is telling us a lot in four rather long paragraphs . I had real difficulty seeing where someone walking out of a tent justified four walloftext paragraphs telling us about stuff , rather than drawing us in with something a bit more active and engaging . OP has added a bit below the line since I commented last night which looks like a better place to start an interesting story . The four solid , uninviting paragraphs were only what was there last night . I tend to approach these passages as a reader because it ' s a reader ' s response I ' m generally giving here . If something turns me off , it ' d be my reaction to seeing this as a sample at the front of the book .