If they ' re good at the game , they get more SR , it ' s only natural . <| sep |> I know that , but I meant it as in the SuperSonics still being the Supersonics when KD was a rookie . <| sep |> Yea learn LuA <| sep |> No , sorry . I ' d do 3 of them for $ 40 . <| sep |> Vive la Rvolution ! <| sep |> Uhhuh . sure it was . Maybe to the TDM community . <| sep |> I ' m sorry , but I don ' t follow . Would you mind explaining what exactly you are trying to get at ? <| sep |> Closer to 20 <| sep |> Here are some comments on formatting and wordingMech Construct and Unaligned should be lowercase Everything from AC to Challenge shouldn ' t have a colon after its name Is the mech supposed to be ignored during the fight ? If attacking it is supposed to be a viable option , I would reduce its AC to 20 . Right now , it ' s higher than an ancient gold dragon . HP should be 252 24 d 10 120 Put a space before ft in Speed and Senses For an unaligned construct , this creature is very smart . And similarly more wise and charismatic than I would expect . Saving throws should be listed in the order of the stats above them Expertise is saving throws isn ' t something I ' ve seen before . Think long and hard over whether this creature really should be so well trained . Could you explain why the mech is resistant to force damage ? Resistance to force and psychic damage is extremely rare . The order is DamVul , DamRes , DamImm , ConImm Exhausted isn ' t a condition . Exhaustion is . Magic Weapons should just be The mech ' s weapon attacks are magical . Death Burst 3 rounds is a sort of timekeeping that has been mostly eliminated in 5 e . Consider instead the end of the mech ' s next turn . Consider even more just using the Death Burst of the magmin with some numbers tweaks . If you choose to stick with your current design , spell out feet , and spell names should be italicized . For Energy Absorption , use the formatting of the beholder ' s Eye Rays . Slam Your formatting is a bit off here Remove MagicalDrovark , the Goblin Mechanist Goblin isn ' t a creature type . Change it to humanoid goblinoid Partial Magic Resistance shouldn ' t copy wording from Gnome ' s Cunning and instead use the wording of Magic Resistance . In Spellcasting , but a space after DC Spell levels shouldn ' t be leftaligned nor indentedOverall , this is a fine pair of creatures . The mech does have an awful lot going on however .