They need to add a 3 rd babe to make it worth 6 elixir <| sep |> Thanks it works ! <| sep |> The barber shop in the Fred Meyer plaza next to the Subway and the locksmith does straight razor shaves . <| sep |> buy me rocket league xoxo <| sep |> Don ' t they already do that ? but with normal peoplehitting cars ? <| sep |> The wall will be built out of 100 dollar rings <| sep |> Bem vindo a 2016 ? o . oQue tipo de pergunta essa ? Isso j existe a um bom tempo , no ? <| sep |> Thank you , as always , for taking the time to read and providing such detailed feedback , I truly appreciate it . Regrettably , I think you may be missing one key piece of information that has possibly skewed your view on this piece , and that is what a ' wrecker ' is . Wreckers were people who would hang in gangs by coasts on foggy stormy nights with a lantern , to mimic a lighthouse . They would lure the ships onto the coast rocks , causing many ships to crash sink . They would then kill any survivors and pillage the ship . In the poem they are responsible for ' the trickster ' s candle ', that ' s why the ' wooden womb obviously the ship is ' unconscious ' and every ship is a vault from the perspective of wreckers . The ship is a tomb both by the time the wreckers arrive , and from their direct killing of any left alive . I appreciate that , without any prior knowledge of wreckers , this piece is rather clunky . I agree on the alliteration point , particularly the ' sandy ' shore room for improvement . The oxymoronic reference to Sirens and Neptune is actually deliberate as the Sirens were adopted into Roman popular culture , much as Neptune is clearly borrowed from Poseidon . But you are definitely right about my overuse of alliteration , it ' s quite an easy crutch I guess . If you have the time , maybe try reading again , now that you know it ' s about people deliberately luring a ship away from the sea in order to pillage . Thanks again