Someone needs to tell those kids that beat him up that they are responsible for his death . <| sep |> Those paragraph breaks are fine . You switch paragraphs at natural breaks in the flow , which is what you want . I think you were overthinking it . <| sep |> Yeah , like you said I ' m aware of it ' s being not an exact remake . Also I am not a native English speaker , so I can ' t remember the exact words all the time . That ' s why I call it remake thing . Btw , I ' m a new DIII player but an old Diablo fan . <| sep |> It was a soulful , jazzy rendition , and I loved it . I felt it was beautiful and , in a way , melancholic , which matches my mood after the divisiveness I ' ve experienced this year . I just always seem to tune out when someone sings a standard National Anthem , and Aretha ' s version drew me in . Just felt full of more emotion and passion than you usually get . edit this probably belongs in riamverysmart , i was high as balls when i wrote it