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 There are many diffrences and similarities between South Korea and Australia ' s education system . Such as subject , extra curricular activities , years of education , and school schedule . South Korea ' s education system 
 is more hard to develope student ' s personality , In contrast Australia has more specific courses and give many opportunities to children that can choose their future themselves . Firstly , they have several diffrences and similarities about their years of education . Both countries years of education are 12 years . But , Australia have preschool , primary school , and high school . In preschool , they teaches 6 years to 12 years old students and In high school they teaches 12 years to 18 years old students . However , in Korea , they teaches 5 years to 11 years student in elementary school , 12 years to 14 years students in middle school , and 15 years to 17 years students in high school . Also in Australia students can choose they will learn 11 , 12 years but in Korea students can ' t go to university if they don ' t graduate high school . 
 The second is subject . Two countries also have several diffrences and similarities about their subject . Korea and Australia both learn math , English , society , environment , science , art , and second language . In addition , Australia teaches ' technology and personal development , health & physical education ' ( ACL , 2010 , p . 183 ) . Unlike Australia , Korea doesn ' t have subject that develop student ' s personality or health care . They concentrate to teach main subject . 
 Third one is extra curricular activities , for example , after school class , camps , field trips , and club . In Korea , every camps , field trips are already planned by school . For instance , field trips are every springs and camps are every winter . Also , after school class and club activities , students should pay to school for teachers fee , borrowing class rooms fee . And it ' s not optional in Korea , when the school make the supplementary lessons . students have to listen it . If the student don ' t want to listen supplementary lessons , but she ( he ) should pay the money and listen the class . In contrast , in Australia , after school class and club are optional . They thinks themselves and then make their own decision . In addition , students can choose attends the camps or not in Australia , but in Korea if student can ' t prove he ( she ) has the family or financial problem they should attends to the camps . 
 Finally , there are diffrences and similarities about school schedule like time table , vacation . In korea , they have only one time to get in school . On March , every new students enter the school and have vacation at July , December . Every vacation is only one month except or university students , they have two months vacations . But , Every elementary , middle , high school students have spring vacation that after winter vacation students doesn ' t promote to upper grade , just coming school about 2 weeks and then have spring vacation until March . except for new students . In contrast , In Australia they accept the new students three times at one year . And school ' s vacation is similar to Korea but the university student ' s vacation is shorter than Korea . 
 In conclusion , both have many diffrences and similarities about their education system such as subject , years of education , extra curricular activities , and school schedule . Although Korea ' s education is more concentrate on main subject , Australia ' s education is much helpful for children . Because , their education make children have more creative thinkings and can make their own decisions . 
 호주 와 우리 나라 교육 시스템 을 비교 하 는 글 인데요 문법 좀 봐 주 세요 ㅠㅠ