svrt at SIGE NEJ TIL EN FLOT OMSKRET PIK ! TRIGGEREDSiger du , at kvinder slet ikke tnder p en vrdibasereret konfliktsky mand med fjllrv rygsk ? ?? Det vil jeg sku gerne se en kilde eller to p ! !!!!<| sep |> You mean put ? <| sep |> Thanks for the feedback . Yes , I get a similar feeling when reading the draft . I think it ' s because the story was written using a phone . It ' s very limiting when I want to overview the story as a whole , if that makes sense , as I cannot quickly skim the paragraphs . That makes sentences feel disjointed even if they are tied by the narrative . Due to current circumstances I cannot write on my PC and I don ' t have much time to write stories on paper , so I decided to make a compromise . Rest assured , I ' ll do a revision soon .