So sorry for your loss . Thank you for a thoughtful answer . <| sep |> The other two comments so far focus on your values , but I think those are fine if that ' s the style you ' re going for . I think where you ' ll benefit the most is putting more reference lines on the paper before you start laying in the details . What I mean by this look at the eyes in particular . They ' re different sizes and not on the same axis point , which is unrealistic . Now draw two lines down from your eyes what else do you notice ? They ' re not aligned correctly to the other features of the face , namely the mouth . Work on your planes of the faced 4 omxns . jpg <| sep |> the problem is , in many ways they are great , though some things usually aren ' t the best like tvs many other things are decent quality for a significant discount . tvs are the thing that stand out as be careful when buying but it ' s the same as any other day . the shit TVs are always cheaper . there were $ 400 4 k tvs last year , they weren ' t the best quality but that is no surprise , but the decent quality tvs are still on discount too . just like any other time you buy a tv research is important . I killed it in sales this year , with multiple video games and clothing on huge discounts . I have enough sweatpants to last me the year , and i bought probably a dozen video games .