Congrats ! That ' s a wonderful You ! <| sep |> I joined an IDP league three years ago and now playing with team defense just doesn ' t do it for me anymore . Yes it ' s more work , but I enjoy it . I play in a league where you start 7 IDPs 2 DL , 2 LB , 2 DB and a DFLEX . Our leagues scoring is set up so defensive players score comparably to offensive players , so if a guy like Khalil Mack has a multiple sack game it can win you your week . I like knowing the players on both sides of the ball and it makes watching games more interesting to me . <| sep |> You took the words right out of my mouth ! I have never seen a fan fiction channel before , while being a spongebob supporter . Two things recommended 1 . I think your humor is awesome and if you ' re more enthusiastic and then drop back to those subtle critiques that make you funny this would bring a new level of viewer retention , I believe . Also , the animations for the characters are a must have and you did great ! My favorite is patricks oooooooohhhhhh ! 2 . Add some background music , even if its intervals of creepy music when reading , or suspenseful sound effects that would really bring this to life . All in all , really fun and interesting ! Keep going . p . s I would try to incorporate the views in some way , maybe ask them what stories have they read or have them give you ideas . Just food for thought .