Hi ! 1 Yeah I need a pop filter badly . guess I am going to make that investment next . 2 That was one major thing I wanted to fix in this video , and I couldn ' t without it sounding horribly unnatural . I tried different cuts and edits to quicken up the beginning , and it was something that I just could not get to work how I envisioned it in fact this video took an entirely different tone once I took to editing it . So it was hard to correct this , but I completely agree the beginning took too long to get to the point . I am happy you noticed because I felt the same and thought I was being overly critical of it , so that helps me realize others notice as well . 3 I hope to improve my commentary . I try to be me , which to an extent is overly hyped up but all over the place depending on the events . So I am hoping to settle it down a bit , remain enthusiastic but keep a consistent commentary . Thank you very much for the feedback D