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 The competition among companies has become fiercer as a result of globalization , resulting in an argument regarding whether to purchase domestic goods or foreign goods . Some people think that it is better to buy domestic commodities than foreign ones , even if the prices of foreign ones are cheaper . However , in my opinion , people do not have to purchase products made in their country . This is because a customer has a right to choose what he or she wants and purchasing only domestic goods has a negative impact on domestic company ’ s motivation . 
 To begin with , customers have a right to pursue their benefits and satisfactions . If the quality of products produced by a local company is poor , or the price of those is very expensive , people do not need to buy those , rather they can try to find better alternatives even though the alternatives are foreign products . I will talk about my experience as an example . Last year , I was trying to buy a smartphone and I could not decide what to buy . My friend said that if I could not decide , it would be better to buy just a smartphone made by a Korean company . According to his suggestion , I purchased the smartphone made by the Korean company . However , the quality and functions were disappointing . The function that I have wanted was only in the smartphone made by one foreign company . I realized that I had to consider a wide range of more important factors rather than the country where a product was made . 
 On top of that , competition among many globalized companies motivates domestic companies to produce better goods . In fact , many globalized companies have been developed thanks to fierce competition . To survive in globalization , companies try to improve the quality of products , reduce the costs and prices , and become more innovative . A study conducted by Seoul University is a good example to explain this phenomenon . The study examined the Korea ’ s 100 biggest companies to determine whether the exposure to intense competition affected the success of the companies . The majority of the companies have more innovative and stronger competitors in their fields in other countries . The researchers explained that it is definite that fierce competitions contributed to the development of the companies . This was because the companies made a lot of efforts to be more competitive .