After being stuck in permatrip status for years , just getting out of it about a year ago , I wholeheartedly agree . Moderate your shit , guys . Please . <| sep |> You can check all stats in the info pane . Yes , melee DPS is influenced by sight . Almost everything is influenced by sight one way or the other . The guy will also be disfigured until she gets a new eye . All the other guys will hate her , potentially getting her into more social fights . <| sep |> Difficult to give any feedback as to what to change in your revision as you clearly know what you are doing in this style and the piece is very idiomatic . I love it . You ' d think there ' d be no cohesion with so much different stuff happening but it really works here . I was about to comment that the ending perhaps isn ' t as effective as it could be , but the pizz is like a good dot in the end of the sentence and mirrors the beginning One thing it seems though is that I don ' t hear the ricochet at bar 26 . Is that just me ? It seems that a ricochet that long would be difficult or impossible , no ? Lovely piece ! Great performance too , so kudos to your performers .