Okay , so I ' m gonna start off with what I think of the video , and then I ' m gonna tell you in my opinion how you can make it better . I feel like this video had little to no purpose . It kinda looks like you just wanted to record something fun with your friends which is fine , but I ' ll tell you how to fix this later . The video was very long with little to no reason for the viewer to continue to keep watching . I saw in your tags that you put Funny Moments , which is what kind of videos I make , and I think that is a perfect fir for what you want to do . All I suggest is that you get some sort of editing software and cut up your videos a bit . It seems really easy to just record something funny and just upload it , but you need to make it worth while to the viewer . Add background music , make jump cuts , add things here and there . You have potential , you just need to put some work in it .