Your hair is absolutely fucking beautiful , and you have a very nice smile . Things will look up soon ! <| sep |> Hate to disagree with lana here , but I can ' t say anything other than this is easily my favorite work of yours , because it feels so complete and because of how well the first two stanzas work not only as setup for the the sadass lines to follow , but I feel they create the right atmosphere for those lines to work . the only issue I have with the piece at all is the phrase naked eyed is force because of the lack of comma there . And I can ' t make sense of that phrase . You ' re quickly becoming one of those writers that make me feel inadequate and I like my stuff a lot . So yeah , the only issue with this piece for me is one comma , I ' m sure that ' s really helpful .