Do Monks desire Gold ? or would they try to relinquish it once obtained ? <| sep |> I like you , ur pretty , this is what you look like <| sep |> hahah feel you bro I ' m short 12 points <| sep |> Too high for the supermarket The Uninvited 6 S 4 VsI 78 qG 0 <| sep |> These refs might have an extra chromosome . <| sep |> i really enjoyed your story , i read up to part 4 ! i honestly was more interested in the protagonist ' s internal dialogues than the exterior plot , but i might be alone there . I think the internal dialogue is perfect for spacing out the plot and giving us a strong feel for your character . i thought the voice of the character was stupendously cynical , and i think 1 st person was the right choice to demonstrate this . If this were my story , i ' d play around with the villains more . everyone ' s the hero of their own story , and i ' d like to hear why these people have dedicated their lives to being evil . maybe they don ' t even see their actions as evil , or maybe they feel justified because of the state of the world . again , that ' s just where i ' d take it , but i think you ' ve done a great job thus far .