Luckily I only get groped by the TSA . <| sep |> Maybe eat some undercooked meat and get really sick ? Let us know how you pull it off ! <| sep |> There are some good images in here , but they ' re being weighed down by a lot of stuff that really isn ' t adding to the piece . I think you really should try to focus on cutting this piece down . There ' s a good poem here , but it ' s hiding right now . Your priority right now for this piece should be to excise every word and line in this poem that isn ' t necessary . Generally speaking , less is more in poetry . There ' s a place for excess in poems , but in my opinion poets need to first learn how to speak concisely before they can effectively use more language then is absolutely necessary . So I appreciate your creativity , but this piece needs to be polished some more . Keep writing , keep editing , and you ' ll have a good piece soon enough .