Problem solved thanks for the concern <| sep |> Most essays have to be written from a standpoint of trying to see where the reader might be coming from and guiding them to your conclusion . They also frown upon phrases like people need to stop being stupid and Yes , tell me ONE difference . You will say that humans and animals are different . Read on then . This kind of name calling and Mark Twaining I don ' t know what else to call that shit isn ' t good form and it doesn ' t endear you to the reader . Nothing you ' re saying here makes you seem any more intelligent than a person who might pick this up and read it and you don ' t address the arguments that a person might actually make . Instead you create strawman arguments that are easy for you to tear down , but then you do a shit job of it . For instance , you mention one of the main reasons that the native people might have issues today which would cause them to get extra help slavery . The US had slavery that ended in the mid 1800 s and it still has a large effect on the country today . I ' m not super familiar with Australia , but I ' m guessing that could be used the argue against you . Of course , there ' s also the fact you didn ' t bother to actually answer the question asked . If I ask you what color is the sky and you go off on a rant about how much you hate the color blue without ever saying the sky is blue , then you ' d be just as wrong . I also don ' t think that the zero and the contacting of your are for the same reasons . The zero is because I ' ve put more thought into the actual essay question than you and the thing with your parents is because you come off as cruel and racist . But hey , if you ' d been born a few thousand miles across the ocean you could be President . Who am I to judge ?