That ' s okay , gave me a chance to put a round together ! <| sep |> I got the Legendary edition for like $ 11 last year , the DLC has all been out for 4 years by this point and could be obtained easily in that time . You didn ' t want to play it in all that time and want it for free now even though you never paid for it at all ? <| sep |> The Insert key . I don ' t think I ' ve ever seen anyone else use it regularly either . <| sep |> Yeah , she isn ' t full blown neocon , but she supports their foreign policy it seems . She ' s a social liberal for sure though . <| sep |> I feel horrible suggesting this , but look at formulaic scripts and learn . Doing a task might work for a documentary . It might work for a day in the life series . But the viewer needs a reason to want to see the ending , and they usually need that early . As someone said , your characters need to struggle with something , because the viewer needs to have a reason to want to see what happens . Formulas are annoying , and I ' m not saying to simply follow one . I ' m saying to learn what they ' re doing in these formulas . You can pick just about any summer blockbuster movie and determine within a minute where the main character will discover the huge insurmountable problem . You can state within a minute before even seeing the movie , where he ' s dressed down by a teacher or superior . It ' s really ugly what hollywood gets away with , but the problem is that it works for certain genres . Learn from that , and you can quickly see when your script might run into problems with story .