First I think you mean collective instead of kollectiv . Only spelling error that stood out to me . Story seems to take more direct inspiration from the meta post the other day and there is nothing wrong with that . Though the story effort in of itself seems a bit low but like every story posted here even a rock is just a gem in the rough that just needs a little more work to shine . I suggest first expand the world or well universe of your story . Describe your Earth and what it and it ' s people are like in the year of 2255 . Tell more about these alien invaders , you briefly described their appearance but like any fiction creation the more descriptive detail the more vivid a picture gets painted in the readers mind . So far I just know the name of their planet Stalinacktivo , lets expand upon that by giving a name to this alien race . Really work on expanding their culture and creating various characters to represent them in their conflict with humanity . Also expand upon how humanity united , even in the fact of a real invasion odds are we will not just unite at the drop of a hate so tell that bit of the story . Make a few more characters that are involved in that and see where their personal story and that of the aliens take you further with your own here . At the end of the day everyone here just wants to enjoy a good story are are willing to help every author from the experienced writers to inexperienced first timers develop theirs into one truly worth reading . So I would try expanding further and see what more you can do for your story to make it stand out better here and receive a more positive welcome in the wake of recent events within this community . For everyone else reading this remember the Community Standards and Expectations . If you don ' t like it down vote and move on . Leave a constructive review like this if you have to say something . No need to point out the obvious instead , add something truly helpful to aid the improvement of the author and their story .