Hey Clyd I like your video , but there ' s two things you should try to work on . First your mic is popping . It ' s not always , but enough that a pop filter should be preventing that . If you want my advice windscreen . I got one a month ago and I ' ll never go back they work in every direction , get rid of pops , and as a bonus act as a high pass filter for background noise . Second thing you ' re overdoing your jokes which is actually something I ' m currently in the middle of trying to kill off . Some people like markiplier and jacksepticeye can forces jokes and it ' ll be funny most people can ' t do that myself included . My advice study up on gamegrumps or maybe check out H 20 Delirious ' most recent Steep video . Just learn how to talk normally without forcing jokes and I can already tell you ' ll be great . That ' s all i got for ya bud hope that helps !