JAGGED METAL KRUSTYO <| sep |> That ' s something the Scarlet Spider would totally do though . <| sep |> Well . it certainly wouldn ' t single anybody out ! <| sep |> Call Starboy trash again , I ' ll call the entirety of rtheweeknd on ur ass <| sep |> Every one of these fucks can go fuck themselves <| sep |> I always wondered what happened in that scenario where you got an extra cookie at the end and that exact thing happened to me yesterday as well ! lol , now we both know . I was secretly hoping it would give you a SB cookie . <| sep |> Deg for me is a vibration of my life at the time of its writing of my world and the world of the screen it seemed to me at that point that the television and a connectivity that demands undead submission visualisations of social media and the construction of public spaces but games were always there the fear of the screen especially via Twitter and Facebook this dependance on consuming banality extended easily to games and the European and American shows , what with their shackled youngsters , provided logical material . That mostofaparagraph was one sentence . Remove the what with their shackled youngsters aside and the core is revealed to be an 84 word morass with NO punctuation . No semicolons or dashes ! Nothing to divide the thought at all , just a mess of conjunctions to spackle it all together . Presumably as an EIC you edited someone else ' s work at some point in your career , but you seem to have lost that or are unwilling to kill your own babies . Relating to some authors ' beliefs that their sentences or concepts are perfect as created , and any change would be murdering their creation . And in that Leviathan of language , you don ' t convey a clear concept . I think you ' re trying to say Deg is a book about how people are slaves to screens , playing games or watching TV or using social media . but I can ' t be sure . It ' s like you ' re trying to bury it so deep just to avoid hearing people say Oh , like Fahrenheit 451 ? and the like . Here ' s the problem , though Better you weather some comments for an unoriginal concept than use this , more suited to Real Peer Review than a gaming website , to try tempt people to read further . This example of your writing convinced me the book is not worth reading . You had one job . Unless , I suppose , you ' re going for the postmodernist audience of people who use the names of texts as conversational bludgeons without ever having read them or needed to , see Death of the Author , in which case . good job .