So what is the idea here ? I feel like you are trying to be brief in each stanza , but if you are shooting for something the spirit of haiku , then perhaps it should be briefer . Length wants meter or rhyme . Also , instead of saying Eastern Japan , perhaps you could name a region of Japan associated with the East ? <| sep |> Guy ' s gotta do the best he can with what he ' s got , and frankly I felt some of those promises were a bit much as it was . We ' re cool . What promises has he backed out on again ? <| sep |> So glad I picked up the sun off waivers for the Cowboys game . <| sep |> How anyone could believe , even for a second , that what the text post in question describes could possibly be true is beyond me . <| sep |> Hopkins should have like 12 points , dude is ass