I think that it was a welldone video . There ' s a few things that I would ' ve done differently Cut down the video length . 715 is pretty lengthy but then again , maybe that ' s what your client wanted ? . People have short attention spans , and upon seeing 7 minutes for a video promo spot for a local charity they might be tempted to just scrub through the video instead of watching it from starttofinish Use the footage with the time variation time lapses , slow mo , etc . sparingly . Having too much of it lessens its impact . Put a face and name to the lady who ' s providing a voiceover in the beginning . It wasn ' t clear who she was , and what her role in the organization was ! Looks like you were doing a runandgun approach to interviews , so a nametag at the bottom of the screen would ' ve been helpful . But aside from that , I think you did a great job with this video .