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 작 은 마을 이 더 좋 아요 
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 실수 했 다가 다시 올립니다 . 초보 라서 처음 써 보 는데요 . 시간 재 지 않 고 그냥 써 본 것 입니다 . 내용 이 너무 논리 적 이 지 않 은지 길이 는 적당 한지 , 평가 부탁 드립니다 . There has been commercial development in Korea after 1970 ' s . Cities were growing rapidly and many people moved into big cities such as Seoul , Busan and Taegu , but I prefer to live in a small town . The first reason is clean air and water . These days , commercial development allows surroundings to have serious environmental pollution . Let ' s assume for moment that one of your family got a serious disease for instance atopyic dermatitis or lung cancer , on account of bad air and water . In all likelihood , you should move into a rural city . The organic system is most important for human beings and taking nature for a friend is very good for health . Next , it is important to balance distribution of the population . from my experience , population income only to several big cities . which makes the inequality between the rich and the poor bigger , i . e . more economic inbalances . Some people presume that there are many more available opportunities for example best schools , more jobs , many types of culture . It is clear now . But in the long run and on the positive side , a balanced development has been required to people in a small town . If more people lived in various small cities , the local society would develop , too . Many parents live in a small town and they should not move into a big city . They can give their children better opportunity in their own town . Finally , I would like to find real happiness . I have convinced myself that real happiness is not achieved by external circumstances such as wealth , or social success . In a small town , regardless of less wealth , there are human relationship which are not compared with other groups . It helps to throw away my greeds . My decision would be to live simply , organically and friendly for a move hopeful future , rather than be comfortable , now . In a nutshell , if I were asked to where I would to live , I wold choose living a small town and that will make me happy .