TBH , I think NMS is a busted flush now . No turning it around at this point . <| sep |> thanks for the response <| sep |> I ' d work a little more on refining your messaging . There is clearly a very niche target audience who loves vintage sweatshirts . Who are they and why is this good for them ? Why do they love them ? I ' d tie that into your headline . So for example , We send you iconic vintage sweatshirts every month so you ' ll always be the hit of the hipster hangouts . You ' re missing the BENEFITS , the emotional reasons , which is what ultimately makes people buy . Once you hone in on that , sprinkle it throughout the page . Hope this helps ! <| sep |> Had a plastic one like this as a baby , assumed this was just normal commercialized baby chair , telling me this is something rare ? O