Try to use WORDS to TALK with people . That usually helps your TEAM to know what they need to do when they don ' t . <| sep |> I think having her decay when hungry is good , although it might be a little expected as audiences have seen this in other vamp films . Could be a nice detail if treated in a subtle , offhand manner don ' t need to explain it let the audience figure it out . Btw , I had an idea if you want to go there . the guy could be having sex with her going down and he catches a glimpse in the mirror of himself having sex with a rotting corpse . She , of course , looks fine when view directly . Hey , that might also be why she doesn ' t like mirrors . She ' s not invisible it ' s that people can see her for what she really is . Carrying on with this illusion thing , along with the blood , she could be feeding him worms , bigs , vermin , etc making him believe it ' s gnocci or pasta or something . Maybe it eventually gives him weird poops . living wormscentipedes in the toilet ? This would freak him and his girlfriend out , prompting a visit to the doctor . If he eventually figures this all out , he might return to her lavish apartment and find it actually a cesspit of filth . So about his orgasm blood . That sound cool . definitely gives a sexual thematic to the film . You might still use the baby idea as a clincher . Sex leads to babies so that would be the logical conclusion , right ? Do you mind saying what kind of narrative subtext you ' re going for ? Is it about obsession , sexuality ? Talking about this gives me some ideas about the metaphors you could draw concerning men and relationships . PM me maybe if you want to go into it .