I originally formatted it with spaces and indents that would ' ve altered the sentence structure so it would be read and therefore understood differently than that therefore , I didn ' t quite know how to format it in text here just as I wrote it on paper . The thing is , structure , rhyme , imaging , and the message of the poem are what I mean to harmonize and balance symbolizing ashes of blood as a stain on the fabrics I wear , while inserting it in a certain area on the page , while bringing forth the image of blood in light of suffering a daily condition , all comes together as the message of the destructive experience of eczema not just on my skin , but as an issue to irritate my mind . Language can only go so far with representation and structure , but the experience and the endurance of longsuffering is far more resonating in the understanding of poetry like this , in the empathy with the poet . Thank you though for putting in your perspective I disagree however with your third point because rather than add to what I open up with , I show the different aspects of the experience of eczema to centralize the point and message of the humanity and endurance that goes along with dealing with the condition .