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 ▶ Your Answer : There is a common misconception that planes have had a great effect on society than cars have . It is a human nature that if a new or innovative invention is created , then people think the object have a profound effect on them . However , in same token , it is car than affect world more than planes . 
 To begin with , cars have enormously influenced to economy , hence affecting on society more . To be specific , since the world is too big to travel or move with bicycle and bare feet , car was desperately needed from majority of people who live in cutting - edge cities in particular . Therefore , many companies try to sell automobile . It led our world to become well industrious place , thus affecting economy . For example , Dave Ford , who was a prominent CEO of car company “ Ford ” , instigated America to be a best economic country in the world . Because of his company , majorities happened to had automobile . Consequently , it had a profound effect on society . Had it not been for the company , BMW would not even exist . 
 Last but not least , since car release poisonous gas , it affects on our society in not a good way . In fact , the emission gas from car have largely influenced to city , it is fastest way to pollute air circularities . For instance , one day , I happened to read discovery magazine I subscribed reported that air pollution has suddenly been weaken since automobile is invented . In contrast , air plane actually do not influence to pollution , since it flies up . Without car , the campaign for relieving air pollution would not been made many . 
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