If that ain ' t the house , then there ' s some other random who is also up at 4 am playing BotW . <| sep |> She will . Death takes decades , and child killers aren ' t treated well in prison . <| sep |> I take it you ' re familiar with Gary Halbert . I really like your writing style . Let me give you my playbyplay emotional reactionUgh , what is this ? first 3 paragraphsHaha , okay , that ' s funny 4 th paragraphHmm . arrogantboastful much ? Turn off . 5 th paragraph to ' Yeah , I am different ' But he started out a loser . okay let me give this guy a chance read up until the 1 st paragraph of the Compassion sectionThen you lost me at the Compassion section . It got a little to teachypreachy and it didn ' t really make logical sense . Double whammy . You were in your head , not mine as a consumer , and I don ' t see things the way you do . At least , you didn ' t do enough to get me there . Just dust up the midsection , and finish strong . You have a great introduction there . I think you hit the exact emotional reaction you were looking for from ugh this guy is arrogant to a tinge of pity for your past , thus humanizing your personality . I didn ' t have a problem with the length . Just lost interest .