of course ! would have done that the first time around but juggling children makes working with the phone difficult . womp womp . There was a cloth covering his eyes , blocking his vision . He tried to move , but couldn ' t . His hands and feet were tied to the chair he was sitting on . If it even was a chair . He made a clicking sound with his mouth , tried to make an echo of his voice . He could hear it moving . almost all of your sentences are with little variation . certainly that ' s the usual structure , but after a while , when reading , it gets dull . try swapping some syntax , using some semicolons or alternative structure and also try avoiding the passive voice if you can . example A thick cloth covered his eyes , obscuring his vision . He tried to move , but couldn ' t rope bound his hands and feet to his seat . In a vain attempt to get a sense of his surroundings , he clicked his tongue , in hopes that the sound might echo off of any surrounding walls .