Dude got a Kevlar asshole . <| sep |> Boo yeah little husky boxes ! <| sep |> You just need 1 paying customer basta saktong birthday niya . <| sep |> Hey friend , First off , cool game choice . I approve . Like icewirewastaken said , the audio could use some work . A lot of that can just be upgrading the mic you use , and using software like audacity that can helpimprove how everything sounds . It might seem daunting but to be honest a decent sounding mic isn ' t necessarily an expensive mic . Just do your research and go from there . I ' d also recommend taking note of sounds that you don ' t want sneaking in to the recording . You use F 12 to begin recording , yea ? At the very start you can hear the steam screen shot sound , which for me is F 12 . It ' s all good for now , but its a good idea to make sure youve edited all those sorts of sounds out . The commentary is fine , but your two friends can sound far away and quiet . I don ' t really have any idea how to fix this , because i ' ve never dealt with it , but I ' d say either all get closer to the mic , or get separate mics . But you may want to figure something out . The length is really subjective . All in all , a decent start . Good luck !