Ouch . I ' m a senior in high school and my philosophy is to ' fake it till you make it '. I understand that you want to voice your opinion , but high school is not the place to express anything other than the status quo . High schools are portrayed as a bastion of free thought and openmindedness , when it ' s anything but . Your teachers control your future , so don ' t piss off the teacher with something I ' m sure you know offends them . It sounds like a sleazy way to get by , but you ' re only harming your educational future if you continue to do stuff like this . Despite what others are saying here , your writing isn ' t that badit is below average for your grade level , however . Work on your writing a bit and follow simple essay structure create a claim for your first paragraph , use 3 body paragraphs for evidence to support your claim , and restate your claim at the conclusion and wrap it all up . I have figured out that to receive high grades in school , I must write what the teachers want to hearEvery student learns this at one point or another , unless they think exactly like the teachers . I ' ll be going to college soon , and I expect it to be an echo chamber of liberal thought . Unless you ' re willing to pay the social consequences of an opinion that will almost certainly offend people , it ' s best to just apologize to your teacher and act like a good little brainwashed kid . Your teacher will accept your apology simply because you ' re young enough for her to think you ' re ignorant . Don ' t make this mistake again .