9 religious conservatives , one huge trump fan , a libertarian , a socdem , and an anarchist . Save me <| sep |> The weirder side of Korean rap <| sep |> bendover allows herself to be lead without resistance <| sep |> Yeah I love Taylor , but apart from that 290 , when was the last time he delievered ? <| sep |> Oh well these were the only ones that were tagged with the $ 20 tag , out of the other 30 pairs that were there . <| sep |> I agree but the suicidal part is what scares me in this situation , especially if he gets desperate <| sep |> I am balls i mean all in <| sep |> and i would add , since i agree with a lot of the criticisms i received on my critique post even if it feels natural , is it necessary ? does it fit your voice without overloading readers ? hard balance to strike there , especially if you ' re the overly verbose type anyway , but worth addressing . of note this isn ' t a strictly grammatical thing , but you have very consistent syntax , to the point where the repetitive rhythm jarred me out of my reader space . try rewording a few sentences here and there , or starting with a clausephrase .