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 2018 . 05 . 24 23 : 07 : 35 ( *. 53 . 125 . 235 ) 
 Although some people think computer games are good entertainment , I believe that computer games are waste of time . 
 First of all , there are plenty of better entertainments then computer games like reading , sports , drawing , which are both productive and fun . While computer games are only designed for cheap thrills , others , books , for example , can teach people lessons and also give excitement . 
 Second of all , since computer games are addictive , computer games can be harmful to people . Since computer games are a way of escaping from reality , computer games can addict young kids , teenagers , and even adults . When I was in elementary school , I got addicted to the computer games called ` League of Legend ’ and played it for hours every single day . I didn ’ t get enough sleep at night because I was playing games all night long and couldn ’ t stay awake in the daytime . Eventually , this leads to unbalance of the biological cycle , and I had to visit the hospital for game addiction therapy . 
 To sum up , I think that computer games are waste of time . First , there is plenty of alternative entertainment beside of computer games , which are productive . Second , computer games can be harmful because it is very addictive for young . 
 2018 . 05 . 24 23 : 14 : 24 ( *. 53 . 125 . 235 ) 
 Although some people think computer games are good entertainment , I believe that computer games are a waste of time . 
 First of all , there is plenty of better kinds entertainment than computer games like reading , sports , drawing , which are all productive and fun . While computer games are only designed for cheap thrills , others -- such as books for example -- can teach people lessons and also give excitement . 
 Second of all , since computer games are addictive , they can be harmful to people . Since computer games are a way of escaping from reality , they can become addictive to young kids , teenagers , and even adults . When I was in elementary school , I got addicted to the computer game called ` League of Legends ’, and played it for hours every single day . I didn ’ t get enough sleep at night because I was playing games all night long and then couldn ’ t stay awake during the daytime . Eventually this lead to an unbalance of the biological cycle , and I had to visit the hospital for game addiction therapy . 
 To sum up , I think that computer games are a waste of time . First , there is plenty of alternative entertainment besides computer games that are productive . Second , computer games can be harmful because they are very addictive to young people . 
 2018 . 05 . 24 23 : 17 : 40 ( *. 53 . 125 . 235 ) 
 Although some people think computer games are a source of good entertainment , I believe that computer games are a waste of time . 
 First of all , there is plenty of better kinds of entertainment than computer games like reading , sports , drawing , which are all productive and fun . While computer games are only designed for cheap thrills , others -- such as books for example -- can teach people lessons and they are also exciting , 
 Second of all , since computer games are addictive , they can be harmful to people . Since computer games are a way of escaping from reality , they can become addictive to young kids , teenagers , and even adults . When I was in elementary school , I got addicted to the computer game called ` League of Legends ’, and played it for hours every single day . I didn ’ t get enough sleep at night because I was playing games all night long and then couldn ’ t stay awake during the daytime . Eventually this lead to an unbalance of my biological cycle , and I had to visit the hospital for game addiction therapy . 
 To sum up , I think that computer games are a waste of time . First , there is plenty of sources of alternative entertainment besides computer games that are productive . Second , computer games can be harmful because they are very addictive to young people . 
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