Yep . I believe the main event of that nights Raw was Rock , Too Cool and Mick Foley vs Triple H and the Radicalz . Hell of a main event . <| sep |> So , I ' m better evolving a CP 60 for example that appraises perfectly than a 180 that is decent ? <| sep |> Good idea not to kick those field goals . An 8 point game wouldn ' t be manageable . <| sep |> Old people we want dead Soros isn ' t that far of a reach . <| sep |> Several years ago a local Dallas radio station I listened to would have weekly guests on the morning show usually comedians , and , when asked how they liked it here , one of the first comments almost every one of them would make was something like You people drive like maniacs down here ! <| sep |> Well , that impression may come from different places . They might feel your film emphasises style and aesthetics over plot construction . Or you ' re trying to imitate life as it is , which might alienate audiences if you don ' t have amazing character development . Regarding the imitation of life , that ' s a slippery slope . A lot of writers try to show life as it is , but that ' s almost always boring andor disjointed . When writing , you ' re trying to imitate the action , and create the illusion that those actions somehow tell the truth about the human condition . This illusion is what connects with the audience , and was one of the benchmarks of classic narrative , since the birth of the dramatic genre more than 20 centuries ago . Also , the action is the key to the dramatic genre . If people see the action happening in front of them right there , right at that time , it ' s way more powerful than telling them , narrating it to them . That ' s why movies are so powerful . Well , I digress . My point is if you try to imitate life as it is , you might have a hard time . Of course there are ways to do it in the XVIII century , dramatic writing breaks with the paradigm that drama imitates the action attempting to depict human life and the human experience with more accuracy . But they had a grasp of the classic narrative structure , story and character design to do so . I ' m by no means a script doctor , but if you feel you ' d like to share the script and the rough cut , I might try to understand what they saw , and what they feel it ' s lacking . Hope this is somehow helpful !