I worry that would split the player base to much and we aren ' t flush with players on this game . I always thought that Hisec areas should have security like concord from EVE . that way we ' re all in the same place but we have PvE areas for new players and Coop groups and players to hang out . <| sep |> Literally nothing is a disingenuous exaggeration . None of the margins in these states were comfortable . <| sep |> It only comes once per year . <| sep |> That was a beautiful read , thank you so much for finding the confidence to post it ! You managed to put me on an emotional rollercoaster I was intrigued in the beginning and laughing at the banter , then I felt the building tension , and finally I was gutted and close to tears at the end . I think you really excelled with the pacing and creating an atmosphere , and driving home the full effects of the emotions . Your grammar and syntax are quality , but there are a few sentences that are longunruly and a little hard to understand . Mostly only in the beginning , though . I had built it with my own hands with the practiced patience of someone who knew there was no where else to go and the thoroughness of someone sure they ' d be in the same spot for a long while . I had a bit of trouble with this sentence at first , but that might just be me . A bakery that had traditionally belonged to a family for generations a different family , the shopfront facade brand new and freshly painted . I think there ' s a word missing in hereOther than that , this piece has a good flow . I look forward to your future works !