Yes , please never pull my hood back ever . <| sep |> Mine latest ones have been Destiny and Titanfall 2 . Both help with the anxiety and depression for me somehow . <| sep |> Can I bury my face between your thighs ? <| sep |> The man is a natural born leader . <| sep |> Hi brother ! I ' ll bite first . Please do not take this the wrong way , I intend to give you constructive criticism as that you can build on it if you are interested in improving . 1 First of all , good job overall . I ' d rate your mini somewhere slightly below average to my taste but this is perfectly fine . The average I have is way more basic than what you did but pulled off with better consistency . Still , I need to say that you did a great job at picking out colours , actually doing a freehand and also picking out details like writing lines on the parchment . Not everybody does this and this shows that you do have an eye for detail you can build on . 2 Neatness Sloppiness . You are more on the sloppy side of things . When looking at your metals , they are really not good enough to pass as neat enough . You can easily see that your metal paint does not have the coverage needed but I guess it ' s due to the drybrushing technique I am pretty certain you used because it will look that way if you drybrush over flat surfaces . Try to be more neat and get more coverage . Do not get me wrong , drybrushing is fine as a technique but you should use it when appropriate . Giving a GK a swift Leadbelcher drybrush is very good to make the base color stick . Still , build on that . Paint over the silver surfaces with thinned down Leadbelcher . If you do this , you will avoid this untidy look . Apart from that , you put the colors where they are supposed to be , so that ' s a really good thing . If you work at getting better coverage , you will instantly improve your minis . 3 Depth . Your mini looks rather flat . I am not sure if you washed it . It looks like a drybrush and because you did not get into the deepest recesses with this technique , you have a faux depth effect that also looks a bit sloppy . If you have good coverage established , give the recesses a wash with Nuln Oil or maybe , if you feel confident with a blue wash , maybe mixed with Nuln Oil . It does wonders . I am not sure whether you did highlights because the picture from behind has a very good edge but it can also be the light . Silver is hard to highlight in my opinion and this is why I usually try to airbrush silvers . Anyway , you should place highlights with a very light metal at the very edges . If you do these things , your mini will instantly improve because it will not look flat anymore . 4 The Golds . Phew . You clogged up that detail pretty well . I cannot read the writings any more . Make sure you handle gold like silver and especially with painting metals , do thin your paint . There is a deadset easy formula to make good gold 1 mediumthick if you are in a rush layer of Balthasar Gold or 2 thin ones if you want to do things properly . Paint over with 1 mediumtick or 2 thin coats of Gehenna Gold . Let this thing dry for a bit and then give it a wash of Agrax Earthshade . When this one is dry , a super duper light drybrush of Liberator Gold . This will make the letters pop . Followed by a couple of dots of Stormhost Silver on some of the edges of the letters . 5 Try to also apply these techniques to all theo ther parts and what you are left with is 2 things . this one is the blade of the spear . Have a look at how good minis look and you will see that a spear or sword usually has two sections where you need opposing gradients . Use this . Most tutorials are for airbrushes but as my fiancee does not allow me to use my airbrush at home , I can tell you that doing this with the Glazing technique is also quite fine to do . 6 Similarly to the blade , there is another point people will focus . Your model is super silver , thus a bit boring because you cannot play with depth as well as with other colors . So add focus points like the blade . this one is the eyes on his helmet where you should look at OSL object source lighting techniques to add further detail and depth to your mini . If you do this , your mini will instantly improve by far but something more important is If you invest this time in a mini , it needs a proper base . Try to find something that does not look like the color of parchmentloincloth but something darker to go with it . Anyway , keep up the work , I hope you will apply some of my recommendations and see what a couple of wellplaced steps can do for the quality of your minis . Enjoy ! !!