Burnt sienna chakrams and juggler xdevil mk 2 for lime chaks ? <| sep |> I ride with me wife a lot . No need to imagine . <| sep |> Wow ive actually seen this shit , these whiteboys better think twice before they use the word nigga <| sep |> You ' re treating your characters like chess pieces . You ' re moving them around , and occasionally making them do it say things , but you aren ' t telling us what the think or feel . Also , you are way too controlling of your partner ' s character here . This reads like a fantasy you have that you want someone else to add to , instead of a collaborative roleplay . Focus more on your own character and what he does , rather than your partner ' s character . Furthermore , you need to fix your spelling and grammar . Also , almost all your sentences read the same way , and this makes reading through your prompt tedious . Vary your sentence lengths , and start them with different words rather than always using I or You .