1 . First 16 seconds was absolutely unnecessary . Just get to the point so you don ' t sound annoying Trading is when you . . 2 . 0019 So what makes trading so important ? ~ Just tell me it is important . Trading is important because the way you win your lane is blahblahblah . This will make it so much more effective if you get to the point RIGHT AWAY . 3 . Also , remove the ~ the high pitch at the end from your questions . You ' re CHECKING with me if what you ' re saying is okay . Don ' t EVER CHECK with me . If you think it is important , just tell me then i can actually find what you ' re saying enjoyable . There are other parts where you ask the audience a rhetorical question i . e so what about spells . Just tell me Spells don ' t draw aggro from minions . 3 . Content wise not bad , that was quite insightful . I had no idea spells don ' t draw aggro unless they are attack modifiers .